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Love what u have written so far. Didn't think Reed would actually be cheating. Bastard deserved the vase being thrown at him. Too bad Brandon didn't have better aim! Lol! Scum like Reed and John deserve each other. Can't wait to see where the story goes!

I, too, was skeptical about reading this installment after the EXTREMELY dark Velocity. That was a very difficult read, I had to skip a lot of chapters, and the end was just sad and depressing. I have to say, honestly, I loved Crestfallen! I think Aidan and Jayden are very loveable characters, and nobody died! Lol! I had a little bit of flashback when u started in the underground fighting, but luckily that didn't last long. Also very happy that Eli and his mother got the help that they so desperately needed. The end with the flash forward to Aidan and Jayden still together and having twin boys named after Eli and Matthew was great!

Good chapter overall, but disappointed that Billy "lost it" for all of two minutes and then fucked Brett. Seriously, who does that?? Everyone keeps talking about how horrible of a person Dustin is, but he was left in the dust by his best friend so he could go and fuck a little rich brat! Is everyone gonna deny that they wouldn't be angry and hurt if that happened to them?? True, kicking Billy in his broken arm was a total dick move, but in Dustin's mind that was his only way of making Billy feel the hurt that he's feeling. Although Dustin has an inappropriate way of dealing with things, he wears his heart on his sleeve and doesn't deserve to be treated the way Billy and Brett have treated him. Billy and Brett are FAR from being my favorite characters, and personally I hope karma comes around and rips them a new one for how they have treated Dustin.

A very mellow chapter....I'm worried! Lol! Glad that Liam is looking into going back to school. Nothing like an Alek reminder to shit on a good day. Honestly, after the story of Alek's relative, I could understand his reluctance to come out....IF HE WAS A TEENAGER! This is a grown ass man with his own life. If he refuses to come out, that's not on any parent or relative not being ok with it. That's bullshit. It all has to do with Alek himself. Will be interesting to see what's looming ahead!

Wow! What a chapter! I still feel bad for Dustin. I totally don't condone him kicking Billy in his broken arm, but I can understand being so hurt and angry at someone u loved like a brother, maybe more than. U just want them to feel the same hurt that they're putting u through. I absolutely hate Brett. What a lying, heartless fucker! Dustin was right. If u take away all of the materialistic things, there's not much left. Even though Dustin ended up doing what he did, let the record show that he was the ONLY one that went looking for Billy after he walked out. I'm sure Brett just sat back, satisfied for "winning", and fired up a joint. Billy and Brett deserve each other. They're both a couple of heartless assholes.

Wow! Great chapter! The transformation of Jackson and Luke is amazing! They both have a ways to go, but the difference between now and the beginning of the series is great! I never would have thought Jackson would be the loveable, likeable guy he is now. I also never thought Luke would escape the clutches of Cindzilla! Great name btw! Lmao!! I'm a little confused about Jackson's mother's reaction. She said she knew and she loves him, but it was difficult to tell exactly how she felt about it.

Omg, what an amazing chapter! I never put it together that Bill could have been Sybil's long lost mate! I am SOOOOO excited for them to be reunited! This story keeps getting better and better!

I vaguely remember this story from before. I don't remember exactly how it went, but I remember the beating part. Who wouldn't?? Lol! I'm looking forward to becoming reacquainted with Seamus and Wesley!

Interesting chapter. I think its pretty ironic that the things Brett said about Dustin better describe Brett himself. Poor Billy with the wool pulled over his eyes! I hope u plan on opening his eyes pretty soon! I'm happy that Billy got to speak with his dad. I think clearing the air was something they both needed. Chapters ahead sound full of drama. Looking forward!!

Even though I've been a little hard on Peter throughout the story, he definitely doesn't deserve what those hateful bastards are putting him through. I feel so bad for him. At least he was cleared of any wrongdoing. I hope the conversation with Steve and Keidan helped him realize that the boys are not to blame for anything that has happened. I think its pretty cool that Steve and Keidan decided to be foster parents based on their interactions with Troy and Bradley. I think they will do an excellent job.

Oh, that was a mean ending!! Lol! Great cliffhanger! My mind is reeling with questions. That Tina is batshit crazy! I'm betting that she pushed him down the stairs. She sounds crazy and desperate enough! I hope this is the end of her family being investors. Can't wait to find out what happens!!

Great chapter! I'm team Dustin on this one. Even though he's far from perfect, Billy just threw him aside like yesterday's garbage. I also get him lashing out, being so frustrated over his former best friend defending the wrong person. I think Billy more than had it coming. I can tell the drama is starting to boil! Can't wait to see what happens next!

What a great, emotional chapter! My heart also broke when Liam was crying to his mother. Happy that they have the coaches on their side, and that the principal and the shop teacher got what they deserved! The speech Liam gave in the lunch room at the end of the chapter was great! I don't think there was any bigger way to announce his love for Will. Can't wait to see what's coming next!

Honestly, I think when Cory gets back from his honeymoon, he and Marty should pitch in and put a contract out on Alek. Lol!! I hope Liam has a backbone and sticks to not taking him back. If there's one thing I can't stand, its someone who's a doormat and can't stand up for themselves.

Love the story so far! Can totally understand TJ harbouring some resentment towards Robert. I would think, too, that He chose his other family over me if I were in the same situation. Not something a person can get over right away, if ever. Had a feeling Sean was gonna be Josh's crush from the start. There's gonna be some big drama there, and I love some drama! Hopefully Josh will realize that someone that calls u "little buddy" isn't looking at u as a love interest. I think TJ deserves someone like Sean after that asshole Scott! Looking forward to reading more!!

Omg,I was SOOOO excited to see a new chapter! Absolutely love Shane and Dimitry!! Happy that they got the first kiss out of the way and now know how each other feels. I think I was holding my breath too throughout the chapter. The kiss in the dark was wonderful, and was cute that they agreed "to be" Great chapter!!!

Wow! What a first day back at school! Considering the coaches are gay and they have the teacher that's head of the gay/straight alliance in their side, the bigoted principle doesn't stand a chance. Hope he's tossed out on his ass.

Loved the story! So happy that Arthur found happiness with Joe. I'm also a big believer and fan of karma, so am also happy that Ben was miserable in his marriage with Pat. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Ben proved that. Again, great story!!

Loved the story! I just knew Kevin and Ronnie had to finally get oin the same page at the end. A good twist with Kevin's dad. Happy that it brought them closer, and also brought him closer to his brother. I habe to say it made me laugh that Robbie was ok jacking each other off, but kissing was gay. I get his way of thinking, but it was still cute and funny.

So happy to see a new chapter! Was missing Patrick, Peter and Michael! Worried about Michael's surgery, but he's a strong boy and still has lots to do and see in life so confident he'll be just fine. Will be interesting to see how getting together with Fiona goes.

Marty to the rescue! Think its funny that people assume he and Liam are a couple because of how close they are. Wondering if Marty knows the story with Liam and Alek so maybe he can keep Alek at bay. Nathan seems to get more and more lovable! So sweet that he brings the lady in the next room coffee. I do believe Nathan and Liam might just have a thing for each other. As always, looking forward to reading more!

Great start! Love the drama! I think Jason did the right thing. I think Michael is being very selfish and self centered, using Jason's love for him when Kenny isn't around. I think I would have reacted the same as Jason did. Looking forward to seeing where their relationship goes.

Great chapter! So happy that he's finally in contact with Corey. I'm sure he will make sure Liam is well taken care of. This Nathan guy sounds like a very nice, caring, good looking guy. Too bad than asshole Alek had to ruin the moment! Lol! Why can't people like Alek just take the hint and go away. Nothing's gonna change, and if it does it will only be temporary and Liam will end up getting hurt once again! Looking forward to see how this Nathan situation pans out!

I'm neither really effeminate or really masculine, but Tony shaming effeminate guys by referring to them as fags was really offensive to me. We have enough discrimination to deal with without having to be discriminated against by our own. This is a story I have truly loved, but this was a real letdown. I have lost all respect for Tony, and the fact that Mitch and everyone else just shrugged their shoulders doesn't say much about them either. Sure ultra effeminate gays tend to be dramatic and animated, but why hate on them??

Great chapter! So happy that Will and Liam finally got their feelings out. I'm sure it was a little easier for Will to kno that Liam had the same feelings. Also happy that Will's dad was so cool about it. It is so true that parents sometimes just kno! Lol! Can't wait to see where all the new feelings leads! Looking forward to more!