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Great start! Kinda feel bad for Patrick, with his low self esteem and all. Thought Karl was a real ass at first, but was touched by his admission at the end of the chapter. Looking forward to reading more!

I like Cam already! Can't wait to read more!

I feel so horribly bad for Dustin. To think that's what he's doing because he thinks he has nothing else is heartbreaking. Then u have two little assholes like Billy and Brett using it as ammo against him. What Mike is doing with him may not be right, but at least he shows him love, and I'm not talking through sex. Billy has a lot of nerve getting up on his moral fucking high horse, especially after how he treated his so-called life long friend! Of course, we all kno that pussy boy Billy is gonna blab it all to Brett as soon as he sees him. Billy doesn't deserve a damn thing from Dustin, and I wouldn't blame Dustin one bit if he told Billy to fuck off for good!! As much as Billy wants to act like he's concerned, he really doesn't give a fuck about Dustin. If he really did, he would have never said the things he did or let Brett treat him like he has. Its truly sad what Billy and Brett have become.

Liking the story so far. This chapter in particular, with the back and forth with Cy and Carter. I think its entertaining that Carter can keep up with Cy word for word. Cy even admitted that's one of the things that he likes about Carter. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops. I'm sure it won't be without some drama!

Well, good for Alek for finally growing some balls and getting his life in order. However, I still say too little too late. Obviously his love for Liam wasn't strong enough to do anything about it when they were together. Why the hell would Liam take him back now?? Not to mention Jason helping him? Never liked Jason from the other story. I don't care what the job is, I sure as hell wouldn't lift a finger to help someone that has hurt one of my friends over and over again. Feel free to call it petty, but I call it loyalty.

Its maybe a good thing that Brett is finally admitting his faults, or maybe its him just saying what he thinks Billy wants to hear. Brett is hardly one to be trusted, and Billy has his fucking blinders on 24/7. Its so frustrating that Billy justifies everything bad Brett does. He didn't leave there a man, he left there more of an idiot. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out Brett took Billy's pain pills. I had that figured out right away. I'm still standing by Dustin. He's not a bully, he's not dangerous, and I don't think he's homophobic. He's simply a person who was hurt over and over by his so-called best friend and then abruptly dumped for no reason except selfishness. I don't condone him getting physical with Billy, but I seriously think that was the only way he thought he could make Billy hurt as much as he was. I think its pretty ironic that Brett is so worried about what pills he would be put on, but has no problem taking drugs otherwise.

I just don't agree. I don't think Liam has anything more to say to Alek. How many times can a person be hurt?? Doesn't matter that Alek finally grew a pair and came out. Obviously from past chapters, his family will always be first before anyone else. I don't kno anyone who would want to live that way. It will be interesting to see what happens, but if he goes back to Alek that will be the biggest mistake of his life!

Wow! I never would have guessed 3 months! Poor Dominic. Anikin must have been living in his own hell all that time. I agree that it probably wasn't the best way for Dominic's mom to find out, but at least its not a secret anymore. NOW.....time to make that bitch pay for what she did to Dominic! Can't wait to read more!

Another great chapter. Brandon definitely deserved the drunken 3-way after what that shit-bag Reed did to him. I was kinda surprised when Brandon was thinking that back in his younger days it would have been "he cheated. Its over. Period" but he's softened since he got older. I've always seen cheating as an "Its over. Period." Cheating and losing trust is a deal breaker. At this point in my life, once trust is broken don't even bother to try to get it back. I worry about what's going on with his father, but he definitely needs a distraction to hopefully forget about Reed and move on. Looking forward to reading more.

Love what u have written so far. Didn't think Reed would actually be cheating. Bastard deserved the vase being thrown at him. Too bad Brandon didn't have better aim! Lol! Scum like Reed and John deserve each other. Can't wait to see where the story goes!

I, too, was skeptical about reading this installment after the EXTREMELY dark Velocity. That was a very difficult read, I had to skip a lot of chapters, and the end was just sad and depressing. I have to say, honestly, I loved Crestfallen! I think Aidan and Jayden are very loveable characters, and nobody died! Lol! I had a little bit of flashback when u started in the underground fighting, but luckily that didn't last long. Also very happy that Eli and his mother got the help that they so desperately needed. The end with the flash forward to Aidan and Jayden still together and having twin boys named after Eli and Matthew was great!

Good chapter overall, but disappointed that Billy "lost it" for all of two minutes and then fucked Brett. Seriously, who does that?? Everyone keeps talking about how horrible of a person Dustin is, but he was left in the dust by his best friend so he could go and fuck a little rich brat! Is everyone gonna deny that they wouldn't be angry and hurt if that happened to them?? True, kicking Billy in his broken arm was a total dick move, but in Dustin's mind that was his only way of making Billy feel the hurt that he's feeling. Although Dustin has an inappropriate way of dealing with things, he wears his heart on his sleeve and doesn't deserve to be treated the way Billy and Brett have treated him. Billy and Brett are FAR from being my favorite characters, and personally I hope karma comes around and rips them a new one for how they have treated Dustin.

A very mellow chapter....I'm worried! Lol! Glad that Liam is looking into going back to school. Nothing like an Alek reminder to shit on a good day. Honestly, after the story of Alek's relative, I could understand his reluctance to come out....IF HE WAS A TEENAGER! This is a grown ass man with his own life. If he refuses to come out, that's not on any parent or relative not being ok with it. That's bullshit. It all has to do with Alek himself. Will be interesting to see what's looming ahead!

Wow! What a chapter! I still feel bad for Dustin. I totally don't condone him kicking Billy in his broken arm, but I can understand being so hurt and angry at someone u loved like a brother, maybe more than. U just want them to feel the same hurt that they're putting u through. I absolutely hate Brett. What a lying, heartless fucker! Dustin was right. If u take away all of the materialistic things, there's not much left. Even though Dustin ended up doing what he did, let the record show that he was the ONLY one that went looking for Billy after he walked out. I'm sure Brett just sat back, satisfied for "winning", and fired up a joint. Billy and Brett deserve each other. They're both a couple of heartless assholes.

Wow! Great chapter! The transformation of Jackson and Luke is amazing! They both have a ways to go, but the difference between now and the beginning of the series is great! I never would have thought Jackson would be the loveable, likeable guy he is now. I also never thought Luke would escape the clutches of Cindzilla! Great name btw! Lmao!! I'm a little confused about Jackson's mother's reaction. She said she knew and she loves him, but it was difficult to tell exactly how she felt about it.

Omg, what an amazing chapter! I never put it together that Bill could have been Sybil's long lost mate! I am SOOOOO excited for them to be reunited! This story keeps getting better and better!

I vaguely remember this story from before. I don't remember exactly how it went, but I remember the beating part. Who wouldn't?? Lol! I'm looking forward to becoming reacquainted with Seamus and Wesley!

Interesting chapter. I think its pretty ironic that the things Brett said about Dustin better describe Brett himself. Poor Billy with the wool pulled over his eyes! I hope u plan on opening his eyes pretty soon! I'm happy that Billy got to speak with his dad. I think clearing the air was something they both needed. Chapters ahead sound full of drama. Looking forward!!

Even though I've been a little hard on Peter throughout the story, he definitely doesn't deserve what those hateful bastards are putting him through. I feel so bad for him. At least he was cleared of any wrongdoing. I hope the conversation with Steve and Keidan helped him realize that the boys are not to blame for anything that has happened. I think its pretty cool that Steve and Keidan decided to be foster parents based on their interactions with Troy and Bradley. I think they will do an excellent job.

Oh, that was a mean ending!! Lol! Great cliffhanger! My mind is reeling with questions. That Tina is batshit crazy! I'm betting that she pushed him down the stairs. She sounds crazy and desperate enough! I hope this is the end of her family being investors. Can't wait to find out what happens!!

Great chapter! I'm team Dustin on this one. Even though he's far from perfect, Billy just threw him aside like yesterday's garbage. I also get him lashing out, being so frustrated over his former best friend defending the wrong person. I think Billy more than had it coming. I can tell the drama is starting to boil! Can't wait to see what happens next!

What a great, emotional chapter! My heart also broke when Liam was crying to his mother. Happy that they have the coaches on their side, and that the principal and the shop teacher got what they deserved! The speech Liam gave in the lunch room at the end of the chapter was great! I don't think there was any bigger way to announce his love for Will. Can't wait to see what's coming next!

Honestly, I think when Cory gets back from his honeymoon, he and Marty should pitch in and put a contract out on Alek. Lol!! I hope Liam has a backbone and sticks to not taking him back. If there's one thing I can't stand, its someone who's a doormat and can't stand up for themselves.

Love the story so far! Can totally understand TJ harbouring some resentment towards Robert. I would think, too, that He chose his other family over me if I were in the same situation. Not something a person can get over right away, if ever. Had a feeling Sean was gonna be Josh's crush from the start. There's gonna be some big drama there, and I love some drama! Hopefully Josh will realize that someone that calls u "little buddy" isn't looking at u as a love interest. I think TJ deserves someone like Sean after that asshole Scott! Looking forward to reading more!!

Omg,I was SOOOO excited to see a new chapter! Absolutely love Shane and Dimitry!! Happy that they got the first kiss out of the way and now know how each other feels. I think I was holding my breath too throughout the chapter. The kiss in the dark was wonderful, and was cute that they agreed "to be" Great chapter!!!