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Enjoying the series so far. I have to take Aaron's side as far as his dad goes. I can identify with him as far as stubbornness and the ability to hold a grudge! Lol! I feel bad for Aaron because he has so much on his plate, and its not fair that his parents put that much on him. I'm happy he has Brett. He seems like the kind of boy that can lift anyone's spirits with his sense of humor. Looking forward to reading more!
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Another great series Gary! Normally not into the whole werewolf fantasy thing, but I totally love Keller and Tobyn! Ur doing a hreat job with this love story so far. I feel so bad for Keller, and totally understand him wanting to leave before he gets any more attached. I can also understand where Tobyn is coming from, although I don't understand why he would push away true love. They totally have that connection that Miss Cybil was talking about. I think feelings like that would be impossible for anyone to bury! Looking forward to reading more!
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Wow! Way to go Peter! Lol! Even though I'm not a fan of underage drinking, in this case I think it was probably the only way that they could do what they did,able to blame it on the alcohol if either regretted it the next day. Speaking of which, can't wait to see what happens in the morning! Still loving these two!
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Damn! Always interrupted by parents! Lol! Another enjoyable chapter. Pretty ballsy of Peter to suggest strip poker. Still think these two are so adorable. Always looking forward to new chapters!
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That, my friend, was a mean way to end the chapter! Lol! I can totally relate tho, as I was in a similar situation as a teen with one of my friends and we chickened out and never kissed. We hooked up later down the line, but that's another story. Lol! Still loving the story, and can't wait for their spark to turn into fireworks!
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Good, drama filled chapter! David seems like quite the self absorbed ass to me. Mike is working, not cheating. I don't understand what the hell David's problem is. I agree with skinnydragon, David knew that Mike was planning a surprise party for him. Cut him some slack. David strikes me as a whiny little bitch who throws a tantrum if he doesn't get the attention he wants. Hell, I'd work overtime too if that's what I had to deal with at home! Lol!
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It was one thing to get Eli involved, bit now ur talking guns? With all that has been going on with shootings lately, I'm surprised that u would go in that direction. I'm out.
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Enjoying the story so far. The banter between Blake and Sam is cute and fun. Have a feeling the build-up to the moment they both realize the other likes them is gonna be equally as fun. Looking forward to reading more!
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Epilogue - It's a Gift - Fight Song
jaysalmn commented on kuragari129's story chapter in Epilogue - It's a Gift - Fight Song
I read ur story on Nifty, and again on GA. I'm so happy u did an epilogue. It was great to have Nolan graduating, and to have he and Henry still together. Them singing the fight song brought tears to my eyes because of all Nolan went through and is still going through. Great story, great epilogue! -
Chapter 18 Neighbourly behaviour
jaysalmn commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 18 Neighbourly behaviour
I don't believe I've left a review yet, so just wanted to let u kno how much I'm enjoying ur story. Patrick and Peter are such a perfect match, and who couldn't love Michael! Its so refreshing to read a story about true love, instead of open relationships, cheating and lying. I always look forward to new chapters! -
So not only does Eli only stay mad for like 2 sentences, but now he's part of the team and gonna be going to the races?? Not sure I like where the story is going. I may have to bow out of this one. Not sure.
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Great chapter! Finally I see Jackson with a heart! I feel bad for Luke's situation...I could only imagine how horrible his coming out would go with his mother. Have a feeling his father would react totally different...I think maybe he already knows. Jackson's advice to "just be Luke" was great advice. I'm just as afraid as Jackson is to have the ball in his court! I don't think he's at the point where he's mature enough not to fuck it up. Have a feeling there are gonna be A LOT of bumps ahead.
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So Eli is totally an "I love you so I'll forgive you" kind of person. So disappointing.
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Good chapter. I'm definitely taking Jamie's side over the lunch room bitch! Lol! That football asshole should have gotten into trouble for what he said. I especially liked the end. I don't kno what Jacob's motives are for telling Eli, but I think it's time for the lies to end. I just hope that Eli isn't the "oh, I love u so I forgive u and I'll keep ur secret" kind of person.
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Well, I'm kinda enjoying that I'm the only one that flat out refuses to ever forgive Jason! Lol! I still say that 8 years without even a hello, I'm sorry for the way I acted, shows that Jason never really valued the friendship like everyone is believing. That, in turn, means that he was still a douche up until karma slapped him in the face. Once again, TOO LITTLE, TOO LATE!
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No offense, but I'm kinda done with the story. If I wanted to read about making out with and touching with girls, I wouldn't be on GA. Best of luck with the rest of the series.
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This has to be one of my favorite stories on GA! Rayne is such a great guy, and Daniel's enthusiasm just bursts right off the screen! I ended reading the epilogue with tears of joy! Not only did they get married, like Daniel said they would, but now they're dads! What a great and joyous way to end such a wonderful story!
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Good chapter overall. Thought it was ironic that Jamie was so interested in building their relationship, but has only only brought lies to the table. Yeah, that's a stable foundation for a relationship! I feel so bad for Eli because he's believing Jamie's bs. Eli deserves so much better.
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Great chapter. Don't kno that I ever could have forgiven Anikin if it had been me. He definitely deserved all he went through after getting caught. I hope Dominic is very careful with trusting Anikin.
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I really enjoyed ur series at the beginning. Now, its like with every chapter Jamie is getting more and more unlikeable. Not sure how much more of this narcissistic ass I can handle.
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Well, this chapter proves that drinking doesn't solve anything, especially for a teenager. I'm kinda surprised, actually. Adam doesn't come off as the type that would get drunk. I have to say this is a very confusing story for me so far. Too many characters intertwining and no real direction as to where its going. Not sure about continuing.
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Well, I guess everyone telling Jamie that he did the right thing isn't gonna make him feel any remourse for killing somebody, and him thinking that he did it for Eli was a bunch of bs if u ask me. I would enjoy some writing from Eli's point of view. As far as I'm concerned, u can make the rest of the story about Eli and take Jamie out of it all together. At least Eli is a likeable character.
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What a great epilogue! I enjoyed how Ezra sounded like an excited kid during the phone interview! I think I had a smile on my face through the whole phone call. I'm so happy that Ezra and Henrik are still together. I have to admit I had my doubts, but the outcome is a wonderful one. I'm gonna have to read the series again once in a while when I'm missing the guys! Great story!!
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What a mix in this chapter. All lovey dovey wit Eli at the beginning, then kills another racer at the end. I used to like Jamie, but at this point I hope to hell Eli finds out about him quick and gets the hell away from him.
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Adam is a really confusing character. He was hurt by Yuri. I thought that maybe he had feelings for Seth, but spends his time making out with Sam. I don't get him. What about his dad's stepson? Adam mentioned him being cute. I don't get why he's spending all his time making out with a girl if he's gay?
