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It is great to see Troy turning things around. I wonder how things will go at Thanksgiving. This story continues to be a pleasure to read! Thanks.
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It is heartwarming to read about a family with so much love and caring. I enjoy watching DJ's and Jamie's extended family keep growing! Thanks.
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I have no clue where this story is going. But I must say I really like Azrael! He is quirky in the best meaning of the word! I don't feel like I know Leo, and I am trying to sort out why he needs Azrael. Anyway, I am having fun being a bit confused, and I intend to keep reading until I get things sorted. Thanks.
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"If I was ever going to use a cliffhanger." I think I have heard that comment before, and not just from you. And halfway already? Eeeeek! Seriously, I am enjoying this.
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Grandpa is terrific! He is a classic patriarch with a lot of class! You did a great job of letting us get to know him, but isn't chapter two a little early for a cliffhanger? I am looking forward to reading more. Thanks.
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Two more names to add to your roll call of interesting characters! I really enjoyed this first chapter! It was a fun way to get to know the cousins a bit. I loved the banter and playfulness between the two! Another example of your ear for good dialogue. Thanks.
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There's no people like show people, they smile when they are low. Irving Berlin Looking forward to meeting the new and improved JJ's mom! I'm also anxious to see what is next. Thanks.
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Magic to Do: A Cast Party for the Ages
JeffreyL commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Magic to Do: A Cast Party for the Ages
It has been quite a while since I read this, and I'd forgotten about Simon's accident. I don't think he survives, but I seem to remember repercussions for the other characters. This is just as much fun the second time around! Thanks. -
This was a great first chapter! I feel like I really got to know your characters. Well, maybe George has a few secrets yet. I'll have to wait and see. The dialogue you created sounded realistic, and I liked that you didn't overwhelm us with too much description. I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks.
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Cancer Sucks--But I Don't!
JeffreyL commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Cancer Sucks--But I Don't!
Nate's vlog was a great way to get through his treatment without dragging it out. And that is exactly what he would do! This was a heartwarming chapter. Thanks. And I am jealous about their trip to Disneyworld. 😉 -
Mom and Dad are bizarre in a fun sort of way! I think they will add interest and more fun to the intensity of the twins and Etienne. I am enjoying this story. Thanks.
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I came across this story as I was looking for a different title. I decided it would be fun to read it again, especially after reading that you and Carlos edited and revised it. This is my fourth reading, and I really enjoyed it again! Your characters, dialogue, and descriptions were all excellent! Thanks.
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I don't want to agree with so many readers that Grant has stepped over a line although, he has been rushing things. I suppose his efforts to help could be forgiven, but not without some conflict first. I do want to agree with so many other readers and say I really love these characters and their story! Thanks.
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It's kind of like deja vue. I was looking for another story and came across this one. I decided to read it again, and I am hooked, again. And I am enjoying it as much as the first (and second) time! Thanks.
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Troy and Grant are two terrific characters! I liked them from chapter one. I am enjoying how their relationship is growing. It is nice to see Troy accepting some help from Grant. It is already making a difference. I don't know for certain where you are taking this story, but I intend to be reading until I see "The End." Thank you! I am really enjoying this!
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This was a great chapter! I like the way the families all are trying to blend and get along! It sure seems to be working. Your cast keeps getting bigger. I love the new characters, but I think I may need to create a program or cast list to keep everyone sorted! 😄😄😄😄 I continue to enjoy this story and all the wonderful characters! Thanks.
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I got a little behind, but am caught up again. I really like the way this story is progressing! Your trio is becoming more interesting the more we get to know them. I agree with the other comments. I am hopeful Lysander will help both Damian and Jordan become comfortable with themselves. Thanks.
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I think supernatural porn pretty much sums things up. And if you add in sex zombies what can you do but laugh hysterically! Your soap is even more over the top than ones I watched back when! It is a great parody! I really do like the story part. Frank and Ben are interesting characters, and I like the way they are taking things slow. I also liked Devin's conversation with his brother. I wonder if he will mess things up for Ben and Frank or file for divorce and move on. And Terrence and Gail are a crack up! You are both (Wayne and Tim) really good writing dialogue and it shows in this story. I can't wait for episode four of "As the Houseboat Floats!" Thanks.
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I enjoyed this story, but it ended too soon. I would vote for more about Reg and Jack. Thanks.
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Blood army?! That sounds ominous. Chris's life is getting more and more complicated. I am enjoying this story! Thanks.
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It's good to see Indie again. In a story full of interesting characters, I especially enjoyed him! I don't remember lots of details about this story because it has been awhile since I last read it, but I am really enjoying this rewrite! Thanks.
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Wonderful chapter and great dialogue! I am glad Troy has softened a bit toward Grant helping him. Grant is doing a pretty good job thinking on his feet to get Troy to go along. Thanks.
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We Are Not Party People!
JeffreyL commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in We Are Not Party People!
More fun with one of my favorite couples! I hope you'll fill us in on Troy and Dan are up to. 😆😆😆 And I hope before this story ends, Jett and April are on the same page. No spoilers! Thanks. -
I don't remember Jahke being turned into a faun like Sitka. Is that a revision, or have I forgotten? I love the idea of the contrast in color between the two! It sounds very striking! I also loved how much pleasure Nassau got from observing the two of them. Of course I imagine the excellent blow job by Jahke didn't hurt! Thanks for another story to enjoy! I wondered how to pronounce Jahke. Is it like jockey? Or maybe jackey?
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I think many people enjoy a good time travel story! I always wonder how I'd do. Of course Phillip is at a disadvantage because he didn't end up where he trained to be. I look forward to seeing how he gets along in ancient Egypt. Thanks.
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