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I started reading this the day it was posted. I read it in bits and starts as I had some fits in my life and this was the calming potion needed . You have again kneeded a bread of mystery, intreaue, and magic that allow the mind to walk a wonderful path in the mind of imagination. This story, as all of your others, has allowed me to live in a world filled with suspense and wonder. As you know, I enter the worlds created by the writer, and have found this world to be a beautiful place to live for a short time. The creativity and detail you show in your writings is simply amazing. I could feel the excitement, fears and joys as the story unfolded. I so look forward to the possibility of another Mooi story with a few small darvils in the cast. Keep up the excellent work.

I am with those above on my growing dislike/distrust of Sue. I think she is most likely a good person, but her two sided support of Robbie and idiotic support of Dons homophobia is tearing down any trust that Robbie may have had. I would be very hesitant to become a legal member of Dons family and I would be thinking very hard about how to explain this to Amy while assuring her that she is appreciated. Dons immage of himself needs a bit of dimming to a realistic level. I also agree that Alex is a bit of a lovable scmuck...... He could end up being a good friend with a bit of polish. Love the story. Please keep telling it to us.

WOW that was really good. Lets have more .

I have to agree with the above posts. Your writing is very good and tells the story very well, however, as stated above, this has been basicly a drama/romance story of a straight man and a woman. This is not what was expected. Please don't take it wrong, your writing is very entertaining and well paced, just more suited for a different audience.... Keep up the great writing.

I'll go with Droughtquakes answer and I claim the top half.... I too love carot cake and the cream cheese frosting . In reality, I would love to share a carot cake with friends, including the frosting ........

Happy Birthday MrM

Happy birthday Dave. I found your sentiments above very thought provoking and tidbits for the mind to work with. Again, happy B-day and many more .

Great story Geron. I agree with the above comments. This story took me back to the stories I read in my youth. I would read books and slip into the world of the characters. Your style and characters bring back this feeling in the first few pages. It is very refreshing to be able to go back in time and remember the characters of the old books with a very welcome twist. I will keep looking forward to more adventures with Frank and Joe and their... hmmmm...partners . You have a talent for putting into words seens and drama that many could not manage with film, video or animation. You are an excelent writer with a rare and valued talent. I love your stories and always wait with baited breath for the next one. Keep up the wonderful writing and creating wonderful worlds..........

This was a good chapter. Don is still on my $hitlist, but there is a chance for his redemption. Daniel will just have to accept that things are as they are. Nathan can still be his best friend if he will let it happed. Robbie is and always will be his cousin/adopted brother when that happens. I think an interesting turn for Don would be if Robbie in a calm and well thought out manner, told Don and Sue that he had reservations about being adopted into a family where the parents were unaccepting of who he was. Follow that with veiled trust concerns and I think Don would begin to really be humbled. Sue would be internally furious and Nicola might even teach her father and brother some new words . This whole situation reeks of old world thoughts and unacceptance of lifestyles. Gay is not wrong it is just something that many people need to learn to understand and accept. Like Robbie pointed out, Dating Fran was accepted including the touching, kissing and even the sex. Why is it so completely unacceptable if gender is the only thing changed? Don't bother trying to answer that question, it is simply the world we live in, unfortunately... Keep up the great writing and please lead us through Robbies journey into adulthood.

This story and all of your writings are wonderful. I agree with the above comments about your characters, they have a strength and humanity that just makes them special. I hope you are safe and find things getting better. I will keep you in my thoughts and look forward to more writings as you are able.

Great chapter Gary! The thought of old vinal albums turning on a turntable brings back memorys of a lost time in a different world. Those were times of youth, joys and pains. Overall I think it is interesting to remember times past, but live for the present and future joys. That is what I see the guys and boys doing. Great work, keep it coming.

Thanks Carlos for an unexpected CJ fix. I wish more people in higher places would take a lesson from CJ. Violence is not the answer, but appropriate defence is a must. Great story with a very much needed theme. Keep up the GREAT work.

This story took me a bit to warm to, but it is a very special introduction to a new idea. It is different to your previous works and that is why it took a bit to get into. The idea of different worlds and unknown dangers and beauty make for a very open pallat for new artistry. You have the gift of being able to relay emotion and feeling to your readers through your characters. I know you never hurt your characters, but when the spider captured Derry and Cally I found myself reading faster and faster to get to the solution. The potential for future storys, featuring these characters and more is limitless. Finding what happened to other worlds is an open book for the imagination. I look forward to any future adventures Derry and Cally experience. Great Writing!!!

Simply outstanding and wonderful. If the boys can keep the talking going they have 90% of the war won. Excelent chapter Gary. Keep them comming .

I have read this story and do agree it is great with one exception....... The follow-up story, placed 8 years in the future is just to painful. I tend to follow authors and just do not do sad outcomes. This story is A+++ the follow-up, not so much, in my opinion. Either way this author deserves your time and reviews. He is an excellent writer, with a diverse subject list. Give him a go and decide for yourself!!!!!!

CG, I loved the chapter and ditto everything said above. I find many likenesses to my time in high school, less the growing group of friends. Those were very lonely and stressful times. I too would encourage you to read just a smidge less and write a bit more to lessen the gap between chapters. However, what you do and how you do it is fine with me as long as you watch your health!!! Great work !!!

Drew, This is a wonderful view into your feelings and the care you felt for the new member of the family. Anyone that puts the care of a pet that high deserves recognition and praise, so..... Drew hold your head high and be proud of your actions. Great Job my friend .

Great chapter Gary. Everything I wanted to say has been said above. I really want to see and HEAR more of Mrs B. She is going to be a real interesting one to follow. The wedding cake may have more suprises than we think.......... Please let Bodie and Nate help each other learn and find pease and hapiness togeather. I can't wait for the next chapter .

I loved this chapter. Christmas was always a special time for me as I was growing up. We don't realise how special until it goes away. Creating christmas traditions with family or friends mean so much, especially if someone has little to be happy about. Good Job!!!! Only one complaint, and it is a northwest thing... was the misspelling of Oregon intentional or a fluke? Either way I love grandma when she gets riled up .

Great chapter!! I think Alex is trying to help in his own twisted way. The money thing is very tempting to a person that has little. I hope Alex is just being Alex and does not turn out to be harmful, but it is very possible. I really want Don to get wraped in barbwire and beaten with a bat by the rest of the family. His actions are simply cruel. Dons family is all Robbie has left and his words and actions have made his feelings very clear. I would never trust him again, no matter how things play out. Daniel was hurt, but seems to have been able to reconsile his feelings some what based on him calling Nathan. Nicola has really steped up to the plate. She is going to be a very valuable ally when the time comes.

Great Chapter!!! Finally the truth is out there. George will be true to his feelings. I don't know what will hapen with Billys mom, but she NEEDS the truth beat into her head with a hammer. I really want to see Dustins dad in jail and it would not hurt my feelings if his mom went in also. As for the preacher man...I am not allowed to use those words here........

I most definitely want Rafa to get his. I think an appropriate get even would be to capture him and turn him into a vampire. Then the serum cure and the pain that goes with it and then repeat over and over and over and......... Yea, I am also sadistic when it serves the greater good . Devon would never take this approach, but Colin may have a different view now that his husband is in danger.... As for Amasis driving a Charger, I think I will stay well off the streets for a while. On a more serious note, Amasis being a leader and planer of military action, even 2000 years ago, will most likely turn the tables very well. We will see in coming chapters. Great story!!!!!!

James, It seems wrong to 'like' this, but remember the good and that our best thoughts are with you...

Great chapter with the exception of Derek. I am very glad CC is on the mend. Maybe the snake will bite Derek...Oh Yea, the snake is not even deserving of that taste..... I do understand that people have most likely promised the world and then failed to perform, but Will and Liam have both proven themselves with their commitment to each other, family and the kids in the shelter. Lee, Beau, Ollie and Kat and so on.... Derek really needs his butt kicked. Being cautious is one thing, being an ass-hat is a whole different show................................ Keep up the great writing.

What a start to the week. Derrick may have his heart in the right place, but I would make it a point to move my support to another shelter AND make Derrick see what his asshat mouth cost him, PERIOD. Don't you dare hurt the furbaby any more. You can kill the snake if you want to hurt something. Keep it comming....