Brayon

Thank you for reading, Firewall910! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for looking at my other work.

Thanks for reading the chapter, and for the review, Chris191070. Brayon, Chandon, and Jill will be back when we see Adam, Rob, Duncan and Giles.

Thank you for reading, Bft! All my stories have some elements from my life in them. In this one, the characters Brayon and Chandon are based on two High School friends, who were a couple. Brayon's parents did disown him, and Chandon's did take him in. The names are different, and most is fictionalized, but that was the key element.

Thank you for reading, Bndmetl. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Also, this was the 3rd story I posted to GA.

Thank you for reading, Bndmetl! I think I need to send a bill to the "Visit Tampa" tourist board, lol. I'm glad that the story has reminded you of my Hometown, and I hope it's all positive. I couldn't have done this story without Kitt's and tim's help. Thank you, again.

Thank you for reading, and for the comment, FlyOnTheWall. Rob and Adam both deserve something positive out of this long month, and finding their loves was it in my book. Their relationships will be more pronounced in the next book with them in it. Sorry to make you a little homesick, but as a Tampa Native, I'm glad it brought back memories for you. ☺️

Thanks for reading and for the feedback, Sweetlion. I can see where it might feel rushed. I normally only do 1 day in a chapter, and in this one there are 3 days.

Thanks for reading, Wesley8890! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and this chapter.

Justice moves slowly. For each action Adam took, three more obstacles would pop up before him. To satisfy the back child support, permission was granted from the court in Florida to set up a Trust Fund for Robert in the amount Massachusetts was charging: $276,672.00 based on an average cost of $1013 a month in child support, and $423 in monthly medical insurance. However, a petition to the court in Massachusetts fought the jurisdiction of the case. Ultimately Adam won the jurisdiction, and

That was a "one and done" type of thing. I've not gone back into a discussion of my work unless it's with someone I trust.

Good luck, Renee. Family comes first.

This is the next project, I'm working on, and I'm finding it tedious as well. While I have read and enjoyed stories in this genre, there are some expectations that "fans" of the LitRPG are very much varied on. Some like only settlement building, while some want to see powergamer tactics used, and if you even hint at romance, they'll toss your book into a fire somewhere.

One of the tricks of head-hopping is to keep in one head, until the scene changes. Some I've read, will stay in one head for an entire chapter or book.

I'll admit. Since this has happened, I can't even look at that project without getting seriously pissed off.

My main OCD... I put in way too many commas. LOL Aside from that, having a nice quiet place to write, little distraction, and some coffee or hot tea while I write. I carry a notebook everytime I leave the house in case I need to jot something down, while I'm out.

Main Difference is that Clubs are private if they are closed. Only members can post and read topics in that club. For Example: The Writer's Club is a closed group, and it's intended purpose is for us writers to chat with each other, ask questions about writing, and other private matters just between us. It's so we as writers can work together to be a more cohesive team on the site. Some clubs are open, like the Poetry Club. Anyone can look at posts there.

From what I have read, on various bogs, and some Deep POV stories: No. It is a Third Person, Head Hopping by scene, Omnisentient, point of view.

Just so people know, I wasn't trying to shame anyone for not interacting with the community. It was a personal observation of some recent postings.

Ok. I was wrong about Sam, and Cynthia. Great story tim. Fantastic chapter.

Likewise, but I've been reading a lot of eBooks lately via an app from the library. The only downside is when the library doesn't have the complete series if the book is part of one.

My Son, Chapter 7 - Retribution Final Chapter Will be here Monday, June 4, 2018. I'll post it shortly have midnight, like I've been doing.

My thoughts exactly.

No. Outlines are for Overall scene direction, and story arcs. Dialogue needs to flow naturally.

For my next major project, I've been reading up on different Subreddits for writing, and I've noticed a couple of different things. I'll quote one person I read, "I don't have time to read, and actually find reading boring, but if the book has an Audio Version, I'm all over that shit." In fact, one subreddit I read, at least half of the responses when discussing a book, is almost always, "is there an Audio Version?" I've done audiobooks in the past, A Song of Fire and Ice, and Harry Potter, when I was at work in payroll, and we listened to them as a group, but I've never sat down to listen to a book, by myself for pure enjoyment. Why do you think these types of "books" have become popular, and would you write with an end goal of your story/book/series being made into an Audio Format? Is there a different style of writing to do in order to make an Audiobook?