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Brayon

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  1. Granted - you locked the thread, and I used my cosmic powers to unlock it, I wish I had cosmic powers.
  2. Brayon

    The Pledge

    Excellent story! I thought it was completed, but I just noticed it's in an On Hold status. I can't wait to see if there is more!
  3. I read this story in one sitting. It was very well written and structured in a way it flowed well. Rick and Andy are two characters that I will remember and had a very interesting dynamic.
  4. My last cat loved fried chicken and meat lover's pizza. We always would make her a few tenders when we made it, and for the pizza, if was the toppings, cheese, and sauce. The dog ate the crust.
  5. Brayon

    Part 1 The Pledge

    Did not see the Vampire angle coming. I enjoyed the story, and I could feel the emotions of the characters.
  6. Thanks, I hope to have a new chapter ready soon!
  7. Thank you. I'm a mythology geek as well, and I hope I'm doing them justice.
  8. Thank you. I hope I do him justice in future installments.
  9. Brayon

    Wanted

    An incredibly hot scene! Very enjoyable, and a fantastic story/
  10. Thank you. I was going to make it longer and tempted to go back and do so, but when I got it to the end above, I realized I wouldn't be able to keep it a short. So, I cut it there, with a promise to revisit. You may have noticed, but Gavin and Kyle are from an earlier prompt.
  11. Brayon

    Chapter 1

    I liked the twist, where the Kitten becomes a human. Did not expect that at all. Very good story.
  12. Brayon

    Dessert

    Tim... You have a knack for getting me to tears. Loved this story!
  13. Brayon

    Chasing Jayce

    This was a great story, hands down. I felt Andy's anxiety, and then the Joke. WOW... I know what I would have said, and then to find out it was a Joke... dude! After that kiss and a good long laugh, I'd be wondering when would be going to bed.
  14. Brayon

    Story

    Tears, hun... You gave me tears of joy for this story Tim. I Wish I had a Morgan now.
  15. I've noticed several of us, have been asked to expand upon our shorts.
  16. Brayon

    Radiated Love

    Thank you! Same here on wondering what life would be like in a PA setting for Homosexuals. I felt in this case, that the Leaders of this shelter felt that Breeding a new Population was more important than anything else. And if you're not doing that, well you're no use to the collective. I've read a story once, where all men regardless of sexual orientation were required to sire so many children. If you refused, then you were killed.
  17. Brayon

    Radiated Love

    You're welcome, and thank you for reading! I know all about that grit, lol. As an FL Native who grew up on the coast, we had salt and sand from the beach blowing on the cars all the time. Was a pain at times.
  18. Tempted too. There's a few I've done I would love to expand.
  19. Brayon

    Radiated Love

    Thank you! I agree it is wrong on so many levels. I wrote it, and it still makes me mad. LOL Thanks, Drew. I'm sorely tempted to turn this into a full story. Given its nature, the 2017 Fall Anthology Theme The Fall Out would be a perfect fit. Thank you, Cia. I've been a SciFi junkie since birth. Mom said I used to play with Rockets and Spacemen long before I could remember it.
  20. I agree! Was fun, and all the stories were completely different. Directions Unknown does sum this game up perfectly.
  21. Thanks, I'll look him up!
  22. Brayon

    Radiated Love

    Thank you! At one point, I though I might have to break out the Black-n-Decker, to clean off some of the dustiness. Thank you. Once I got the overall theme, (thank you, Morgan Freeman,) I felt it had to be harsh, once I wrote in the Extinction Level Event. I'm just glad it turned out good, for being short.
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