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I wish we had more of the boys. Although seeing Ray get his just desserts... extremely satisfying. Great job Parker.
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I hope Riley lets the Dr help. He took a substance that might have been laced. Pot can be used for depression, anxiety and other diagnosis. With his other meds, not the brightest move. His sneaking, and lying will come back to haunt. He still acts like he’s all alone. There’s a family with love that won’t judge. They want to help.
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Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
A busy chapter. Great to see Michael well after surgery. He’s surrounded by lots of love. Peter and Patrick expanding family leaves room for story expansion. Always nice to have Angel and Imp pop in. Good chapter Tim! -
Happy to see these guys again. The Christmas story was delightful. Lovable characters with more story to tell. Looking forward to it Sam.
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Prism understood Styx. The reason for his fondness of the boy. Nice to peek in the beginnings of Prism and Grim. Good chapter. Loving this series.
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Another great offering Carlos. A lot of hours of enjoyable writings by these authors. I’ll send you a staff question!
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I’m glad Riley talked to Carter. He needs someone to turn to. No one can get through like Carter. The remark made at lunch table by Trey speaks volumes. Someone not to be trusted. He’s bad news. I like the new Noah... Trying to start crap telling tales.
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Technology improves leaps and bounds. Often improving on tedious tasks and replacing outdated processes. Another thing that improves is accessibility with the technology. As a blind individual who is fiercely independent... this is a welcome benefit of technology. Things like Alexa help me do 99.9% of things for myself. Technology is also allowing me to interact with the world at large on a greater scale. An example of this will follow. Ford is working on a smart window that has vibrating sensors. Along with vibration, description is given to blind passenger as to what they are passing. This is amazing and a pretty ingenious use of technology. Riding in a car can be dreadfully boring for a blind individual. Let me know what you think. Feel free to add more examples you’ve seen. Ford Smart Window: https://www.engadget.com/2018/05/01/ford-smart-windows-help-blind-passengers-take-in-view/
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It's time, Sam and the BBQ
FormerMember4 commented on FSELL's story chapter in It's time, Sam and the BBQ
Mason is a twat. I’m wondering why Sam made the face at Jamie. It seemed to grab his attention. Good chapter. -
These were both very good tim. April 30th was very clever. It makes me think of Hotel California for some reason. Great challenge this year. xoxo
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Trey is a privileged bitch. Daddy can’t buy talent. You are born with it. If you think you got it... earn it! Riley realizes it’s all him now. The center is no longer a crutch. Time to use the tools he learned. Carter won’t take his crap. Noah was cute at the end.
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I’m with you! Nolan was just soo sweet in that bonding... While Quin is just so fricken sexy and insatiable. MMM!
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April 29 through April 31
FormerMember4 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 29 through April 31
Great as usual Parker. The 29th is sad, thoughts that i consider often. Way too much killing. People miles apart... instead of standing together. April 31st is delicious. Cheese is just about as good as sex. I love the homage to this sinfully wonderful delight. -
Good chapter Ace. Riley I fear will fall plenty. Before finding peace within himself. A crack addict usually isn’t cured in their first rehab. The same for psychological and emotional issues. Riley not only has baggage, he is a teenager. Teenagers push boundaries to see how far they can go.
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Good use of the idiom. Well done Northie.
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Very clever use of the idiom. Definitely used in the literal. Cash is king... barter my ass. Great job Val.
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This was unexpected. A wonderful and humorous response to the idiom.
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Great use of the idiom Puppi. Awful what happened, but future looks promising. Good job
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You should have seen me...
FormerMember4 commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in You should have seen me...
Great job Caz! I love the direction you took. A great world to be introduced to. It’s a good thing @Defiance19 didn’t get this idiom. 🤗 -
When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
FormerMember4 commented on comicfan's story chapter in When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
As someone who loves fantasy and magic, this is a great use of the idiom. Very happy that you were able to finish. Great job! -
This was wonderful Sweet Pea. I love the direction chosen. Great job! xoxo
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I really like how you chose to use the idiom. Well written and original.
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It’s a good day when we get to visit with James and Faris. They did not disappoint. Great job with the challenge tim. xo
