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Normally I would be steaming mad at what the 4 bullies did but in @Lee Wilson stories the payback is worse then what they did initially so I look forward to that. Next up - “Suits and Birthdays” I eagerly anticipating that but I would be more eager if the title of the chapter was Birthday Suits

Since you were only making out at least you two didn't fire your own rockets BEFORE the fireworks began

You mean like me

It seems like Brandon's father is trying for an olive branch the best he can. I hope Brandon reconsiders a least a little bit maybe this go nowhere but at least hear him out to see if anything changes. “So I figured we can’t see each other, you could at least watch me shower.” My reaction to that? TYLER BEST BOYFRIND OF ALL TIME!!!😄

That's as good of a support system as one could have

You do the #Ghost genre really well.BTW is Halloween in Australia the same as the U.S.?

He could possibly get a baseball scholarship he's that good. So I hope Trace speaks to him🤞

How much of this is also because of Jack's so called parents letter? Is he worried that Nick will someday come to the same conclusion and with Tommy there.....That is irrational of course but Jack was acting irrational in this chapter. But I didn't grow up like him insecurity could have the mind imagining a lot of worst case scenario's I can't help but think the foundation is being laid for Tommy to make some revelation when Jack is in Seattle. especially once I mentioned the photos I’d been hiding away for a rainy-day emergency. Oh so Nick and Jack did talk about that “Pre-shredded is coated in anti-caking dust,” I said. I love the pre-shredded four cheese Mexican blend but because of that comment I won't buy pre-shredded again..... No more buying the four cheese Mexican blend🤔........Gee THANKS!!! @LittleBuddhaTW

Well you got the anxiety part down perfect.And so far it has gone pretty well Cody's Mom had a surprise of her own and Toby was cool. But there's Garrett and his thugs every town seems to have those. It will be interesting to see how this plays out will there be an incident during a Basketball game? Or in the locker room? I could see the goons trying to gang up on Ollie 3 against 1 but here I could see Toby arriving to help Ollie with both of them having self defense skills the goons would be dead meat.....Please tell me you plan to write that...😄

The one twin named Shiloh? Remember a TV western called The Virginian? Well it had one last season and the name of the show was called The Men From Shiloh(It did have a cool theme song check it out on YouTube)The way Noah is talking about Shiloh in the story it won't be The Men From Shiloh ...it will be The Man On Shiloh My mother’s brother. My Uncle Mark. The only thing that was missing is the suspenseful music 🎶Dun Dun DUHHHHH🎶

All that damage was done by @kbois chaseing me around the room.After kbois left I put the Huskie at the door to take the blame

They should make some kind of arrangement that Pop will be able to sleep downstairs I don't know if that means add a room and of course these seizures can happen anytime anywhere but it would be one less worry

So what is the timeline of this does this happened before or after Lance Bass came out of course it wasn't exactly the same circumstances

The type of justice Rufus had for Bobby Ray all rapists should get

, while Loz was also holding a dubious looking cigarette, the smoke from which could be smelt in the air. Oh that kind of dubious looking cigarette ‘Just sayin’,’ Tugger said, with a shrug of his shoulders. ‘The future’s going to be weird.’ He got that right and speaking of the future ‘Real men don’t eat quiche,’ That was a name of a popular book in the U.S. in the eighties and this story predates that.Are you implying the saying came from down under? That and two kids named Pheonix and River seems to be a lot future references here. I was hoping Jake would find a way to stay .Any thoughts of doing a story centered around Ethan and Pheonix?

Well he knew this day was coming but it doesn't make anything easier

“Well, at least I don’t piss in the cat’s water dish.” Uh-oh You may lose a reader in @Summerabbacat

Like @Seraph28 I had scary flashbacks with my experience with Finals. I looked you don't have the Horror category listed in this story. I was just so proud that he could get through his exams considering all the emotional turmoil he’d been through recently,Actually in Jack's case I think finals were the perfect distractions for Jack to not think about that letter. Like @Summerabbacat this got my attention And yet, even as I lay there smiling, a small part of me wondered how long this fragile peace could last. I went OH NO!!! this is foreshadowing what does @LittleBuddhaTW have planned. And I bet it happens while Jack is in Seattle.

I have a few thoughts but I'm thinking I'm probably wrong I usually can't guess with @Laura S. Fox stories. I am eagerly awaiting what other readers have to say. “No, I just happened to glean it when you were filling out the housing application at the start of the year.” That sounds like me in Middle school. Our schools ID's had our address on it and I just happened to see the address of an insanely cute boy on his card. Funny thing was after that I always seemed to ride my bike past his house ...wonder why🤔

How old are Brad and Mike? They sound young and full of life but I worry this could happen when nobody is around to help🤞

You are so punny

Good chapter but....... How does the word punishment fit in this chapter title🤔

Everybody in this chapter exceeded my expectations (In Jack's sperm donor and incubator case sunk lower then my expectations) Jonah response was surprisingly good and I expected Jack to be more upset. Nick is certainly smarter than I .I would have waited until they were back home with Nick's mom to tell Jack .Yeah I guess that's weasely Miss Charice was perfect.Could you imagine if Nick had a panic attack and had to go to Johnston? I know legalese is written that way for a pupose but This firm represents Mr. and Mrs. Raymond Thompson (“the Thompsons”), Really??? I Was so confused thanks for clearing that up for me

The Coach was classy in how he reacted.I'm curious if he heard any gossip. “I’ll show you my favorite spot on the ranch tomorrow,” “We just have to dodge Trace’s trail cameras.” Some have speculated that Colt and Davin may have had an encounter when they were younger....Wonder if that's the reason why it's Davin's favorite spot🤔

Gee I wondered why somebody called me asking questions about you? Don't worry I didn't say anything damning let me think.... uh... no I didn't say anything wrong Seriously Good Luck