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I just had to respond when I noticed that you had no reactions yet so I guess this was the first story you read after you joined GA .Well you picked a great story to comment on.There may may be a downside IMO you have already read the best story on GA so everything else you read won't be as good LOL.But there are a lot of great stories on GA feel free to e-mail me I could give some recommendations of authors who write stories similar to Parker's great story.
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Found out a lot of stuff this chapter.James is half Japanese I don't remember his appearance being described earlier.so if he has a Amerasian look to him more often then not that's a hot look. From what I can tell Casper can sense emotions but not details of where the emotions come from like he doesn't hear thoughts so Casper will know somethings wrong with James but he doesn't know why. We don't know who James attacker is but the line in the story that said adults makes him nervous would imply an adult was responsible for what happened.Since James was so anxious to get back to school I'm guessing it wasn't a teacher.Casper might be the best person James can be friends with right now with Casper's ability to emphasize
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It sounds like a great deal for the guys to move in the apartment.As long as the chores don't interfere with school.With Tony being their professor that should not be a problem.I think it's a no brainer
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Well we now know the reason why it became dangerous at Zeke's house.Wyatt wasn't a pissed off ex it seems he was working with the bad guys and was pretending with Zeke only how did the bad guys know about Zeke?Keeping Tyler at the house wasn't the reason why it happened because Wyatt was already in the picture before then. I could understand why Tyler isn't sure who the bad guys are the way G was described he could easily pass for somebody ominous.These guys must be elite.
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Now did Brad and Tony apply for college first and then saw Tony's ad or did they see the ad first THEN took his class pretty clever if they did. I may be showing ignorance here or I misunderstood. When Brad and Tom mentioned their friend Charlie fixed a 1850 tractor I didn't know they had tractors then what kind of technology was it? Or did you mean 1950?
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4 horses?It sounds like he's going to have to hire some help.Maybe a couple of his students?
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Interesting way for the two to find out more about each other.As I hear Rick tell Gus more about his past I can't help but think the Willy Kohler incident will rear it's ugly head pretty soon. I could see the incident come in to play if it becomes apparent that Rita's project is a scam.Then Gus would find out about it but I think it's clear he would have a lot of compassion. You better tell us who won the game next chapter.You could have had Lyin Fraud er..Ryan Braun batting for the Brewers then I would already know the Yankees won
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AHHH!! You're killing me I want so bad for the shit to hit the fan for Zack's bastard dad.Man all that stuff Zack was thinking of like what if they don't believe him?Although we haven't got to the part we are waiting for yet I think Brody is the perfect guy to for him to see before he does this
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Wow Chase is really bad news. If Trent goes through with the nipple ring Kayden would have to have his shirt on all time in the house because of Mark and don't wear anything too tight.I don't remember they don't have a pool do they. @Wesley8890 hates all you're characters but he keeps reading.What is that called? Being a masochist?
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The power Casper has would be exhausting .I have enough troubles coping with my sometimes bad thoughts and then the guilt that follows them let alone feeling everybody else around me thoughts.I think it's safe to guess that Casper and James will cross paths and it sounds like Casper will relate to what happened to James.Casper might get so angry that he would have Tasha really do a number on the person who did that to James.The name of the chapter was Mistake 1.1 and there wasn't a mistake made in this chapter so in an upcoming we will probably see it and I'm afraid it will be Casper who makes the mistake.OK enough babbling by me lol
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So are Mom and dad aware what is in the safe? Sounds like they are not.Although Mom seem to know a little about the ring.I'm guessing the royalty connection is unknown to the family.About those 100 dollar notes I bet they'll be worth a lot more to a collector.
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I had my share of family politics when it came to wills or living trusts. And you really see a lot of ugliness. You know I'm sure Nonna would have let the right people know what would happen with the jewelry. Where does Marlene get off thinking she and only she gets the jewelry?She didn't even know Tony had a room in the house so she couldn't have been too close of a relative. I think I'll stop here I could go on and on.Tony better speak to an attorney just in case because I suspect other family members might try things
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Well Kevin is on a roll he's doing everything right on this date.Pretty impressive considering how unsure of himself he was earlier in the story.I can't see anything going wrong but I'm not the author here LOL. It was interesting to hear Rory mention old drive-ins.We still have one where I live in San Diego.So there isn't any left in Chicago?
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Is he going to be Antonio or Tony or both?Is he aware of the royalty background?It's possible nobody in the family knows about because it was an'scandle".I'm betting this comes into play somewhere along the way.
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I was all set to do a review on a story CL just finished as I write this called Rome(A story I recommend).I saw that someone already did a review of that story and to my shock I noticed no one did a review on this one.For no other reason is to make sure 5 stars are next to this story and I hope that gets other readers to read this. I has everything you would expect from the very prolific CL Jobe indentifing the flaws of our world and having people who give a damn do something about it.And he does it in such a feel good way.Its how the world ought to be.IMHO I think this one is his best I know that's saying a lot but it is what I think
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Interesting topic.And this first chapter was very well done.I hope you don't mind me asking is this this story based on an incident you know about? It is also interesting to find out why they think Dr. Sharpe should be restricted in this case
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Hey your characters from the story Carel went on a archaeological dig and they found the fifth scrool you can finish the story LOL. Seriously thank you for an excellent story.I was going to ask this question last chapter then this got posted.Would there be some kind arrangement of for when Lucinius passes away for all the kids still at the villa to be taken care of?I guess he could have instucted Junius on what to do when he got old enough.Thank you again
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Some random thoughts It was awesome what Gaius said to Lucinius about looking upon him as a son. Briefly when you first mention the plants I thought oh no not cannabis.Have you ever thought of doing something like that😆 If Felix was born in our time he would have his own cooking show.
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Can the Grandfather's try to intervene?No that they will be able to get through Appias thick skull.But it sound there were unaware of a lot of it.Is there some kind of tradition that you don't interfere with your son trying to raise their son?Otherwise I can't figure out why they haven't tried.
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Saying Appias is a piece of work would be a gross understatement. I hope when Lucinius does the thing with the oil there will be a lot of witnesses to observe Appias . When Appias made the comment about Junius being a soldier and then Aleta shaked her head no she would have no say would she.
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For some reason out of the blue I was thinking of this story and then this thought came.I don't know why I didn't mention this and I checked nobody else did as far as I can see.After the mishap what about Gus cast?Eh maybe it was due to come off in a few days anyway.I have no idea why that popped into my head.
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What an incredible haul from the hunting trip.It's really good to see Dante contributing like he did in this chapter. Okay one concern Grandfather health is failing right?So why put him in a room on the second floor where he has to take the stairs.But I guess it's not a problem because the Grandfather didn't complain. I'm glad that one boy showed them the pillow but I would have thought Lucinius would have figured that out eventually
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I'm wondering if this trip Grandfather is taking to Lucinius villa might be a long stay or permanent specially after seeing all the changes.If Appias ever sees it he would be jealous
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Lucinius and the boys(and men also there's a tendency to forget that) are good at what they do.What will happen if a drought comes?Will the watering system cover it or will some things be affected?I guess the scrolls will tell us.
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Legally Lucinius is buying the boys but what he's really doing is adopting the boys he's just going about it a different way.
