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Complicated Relationships
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Complicated Relationships
Well we find out more about Tyler's past I thought his cutting was caused by the murder of his family but it goes farther back I wonder if those past events Tyler described are connected to what happened to his family. Well Zeke is officially off the case but we all know he's going to keep working it.Just like Zeke was emotionally attached to Wyatt I think he's more so toward Tyler.Only this time it may work to his advantage because Zeke will learn from his mistakes. -
This stuff involving Tuva makes me think Casper and Tasha are from a similar place but they don't seem to be aware of it.I'm guessing there is some kind of connection.For as smart as Peter is I believe he might have been lax on keeping a closer eye on James knowing what's possible he might know about James starting to fly if he had.Oh and Peter's father mentioning teaching his grandchildren martial arts?Well that could have came in handy during James attack.
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So Brad and Tom can't go home.I take that to mean Tom's parents feel the same way.Is it Brad's entire family or just the dad? I would hope other family members would reach out.
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It should not be but what happened to Brad still happens way too much.What I would like to see is Brad's dad be ostracized by the towns people for doing what he did. I wonder what it's like with Tom's parents. I'm glad they have Tony
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You would hope The Doctor could help clear this up but sadly just as in real life these days the immigration and customs people might be arrogant and not listen
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Man I don't know what to say about that ending but we hear a lot of stories these days about stuff like that happening .The only way I could see this happening is some yahoo who saw Gus in the waiting room must have made a call. Despite the way they got there this still ended up being quality time between Rick and Gus.I hope Rick keeps his cool during this incident for various reasons although I would not blame him if he got angry. Being that Gus is somewhat well known this could make the local TV news and get the hometown gossiping.Dumber things have happened. BTW my chapter reaction not angry at you Parker.Angry at what happened in the story.
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95 chapters?OMG I've read stories almost that long before so I'm looking forward to it I just hope all of us readers stay alive long enough to see it through
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Four horses?They'll eat ALMOST as much as Brad and Tom LOL.Tony said bars as in plural bars of gold that should more than cover the cost of the Horses.As far as the old currency goes my step-dad collected coins I did some research on it you would be surprised how much they can be worth and they always appreciate in value
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I think @chris191070 got it right it seemed like some kind of cult I was almost expecting somebody to offer everybody kool-aid.There was line about Marcus using his father's gift I'm guessing that may relate to Tasha,Casper and James somehow. The words customers and regulars gives a clue what kind of "business" this is .The first room Tasha came across sounded like a classroom but it maybe more like programming or brainwashing.I think these kids were street kids or kidnapped
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I knew the Chevy had sentimental value for Tony but it must be some kind of classic if it got a lot of attention when he drove it to the school.
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Will Charlie find out about the boys before he leaves?He might already know Dad taking the rooster reminded me about what was said last chapter. I didn't know roosters can't co-exist with each other. I guess that's why it's so easy to stage those illegal fights
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Welcome back hope you're feeling better. So you said in the future Tristan will be what in high school then?Or if he is still a kid and he's doing the narration since it's his thoughts instead of him speaking will it still say " brudder" ? The three idiots are still alive in Siberia I could still see a high powered bad guy getting them out of there to cause more misery.Then a relative of one of the decoys will show up and want revenge and🤔...ah I'll just wait for you to write it.Looking forward to it
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Tony better not ever ask me to help with the casing because half the salami product will be gone before its done.So what it's not ready.
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Very good suspense when Jake was afraid of finding Spencer in the freezer only to find out it was actually staff workers.That tells me Spencer is going to be OK.But how was he able to get away when he should have been asleep?If Spencer was turning into a zombie would he be immune to that shot Dr.Vega gave?Since the door is locked from the outside the only person that could come and take Spencer would be Officer Logan unless I'm missing something
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It's not unusual for for some authors to have long stretches of no new chapters with their stories most of them usually get back to it but some don't I hope that's not the case here.
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I guess there's still a lot to be revealed all three of them had bad things happen to them before they discovered their powers. That makes me think there is another entity or person who is supplying that power to them if I'm wrong it will be interesting to find out. Where and how is Tasha living.There's a reason why Peter's gun was mentioned so a lot of stuff still to find out I'm loving this
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I really see no reason for Brad and Tom to be in a fraternity unless it's a real serious one with a purpose.How would they react if there were a gay fraternity?It would still be a bad idea IMO. Does Tony know what to do to make the different types of salami like cotto or genoa?If he makes Italian dry salami I'm there
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I was slightly confused in a previous chapter if I remember right you said Brad and Tom called Tony's parents Mom and Dad .I should have known they were referring to their parents because why would Tony's parents have peeps.Brad and Tony might be unaware but don't be surprised if Charlie already knows about them and just hasn't said anything.However the Dad that was ranting could be a problem
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Well while I was reading this I was wondering how James and Casper would find out about each other's strange ability but Tasha catching James in the act will help in that.When Casper passed that building and got a bad feeling I thought it might be the scumbag that attacked James and now that James met Tasha all three would find out about this when they meet.But part of me also thinks it's too early in the story for that we'll see very interesting. I preface this by saying I'm not a parent thank God I would try my best but I would probably fall short of being a good parent.Having said that if I were Sarah I would have insisted on picking up James after the movie considering what happened.But I get it if she did that then how does James and Tasha meet LOL.
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It may have took Mom awhile to understand what Tony was saying about the guys but she understood they were good for the place. Did Charlie forget to come about the car?🤔
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Ditto Hey it happens
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A cow might be a good idea if it already had calves and is being milked everyday.Not being a farm boy I don't know the cost to maintain it.I guess his student will meet his parents when they come to dinner
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A couple of unexpected things.Did not even see James being in mid air over his bed unless it was all in his imagination.If it's not whoa what up with that?And Peter with the gun makes me curious what his background entails Since it seems like there is not a bullying problem for James at school so then school would be a great place for James to go especially with Casper befriending him.Unless of course it was a teacher who raped James but nobody thinks that. I like the sarcastic exchange between James and Casper especially the line about a rich guy with too much time on his hands😄
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Chapter 9 - The Aftermath
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Aftermath
I was good with the story stoping but this is good also.Most of this is what I figured it would be still friends with Sarah and friends with James.I wonder what Torry did this time.I like how Dexter is trying to make it right. Kudos to Kevin for wanting to be open but if there's gossip just because Kevin,James and Sarah are sitting at the same table then imagine how this news would be viewed.I would limit it to people they can trust but Dave already knows so it may be too late. -
Everything's coming together nicely. One thought I would have if I were Tony is why is everyone interested in his office furniture? I would check into that.
