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Thank heavens that Wyn is as stubborn as his dads! He saved the day!
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He's really getting into it now, if he still thinks he's dreaming, then he is at least immersing himself into the dream! It's a good thing he has Val, he would be figuratively and literally lost without him.
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Apparently I'm the only one who feels that Kavan threw a temper tantrum worthy of a petulant 13 year old girl. I will agree that Konstantin should have handled his side of the conversation better, Kavan jumped to conclusions, made up his mind, then refused all attempts by Konstantin at an explanation. I was hoping his time away would help get his head out of his ass, but refusing to speak with Gideon, regardless of Gideon's mistakes, shows that Kavan is still guided entirely by emotion. He has a lot of growing up to do if he wants to survive in this world!
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As powerful as Shay became in this chapter, it wasn't enough to kill the monster. But he learned a lot in the exchange. If our heroes could just figure out how to prevent them from healing and regenerating, the enemy, both the Herald and the fleet around Earth, can be hurt, even killed. Will the Stone of Dagen help them with this? If not, what purpose will this mineral-based life form serve? We need the A-team to see and talk to the Stone, especially Yugan, what will he see? But how do they get there without the Herald following?
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Thank you so much for the satisfying ending! Michael had it in him, he just needed some prompting. He'll do well in college, I hope his summer of exploration will match his self exploration.
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Its amazing what a little communication can accomplish! Now, Michael needs to try it with Eric.
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Did he remember socks? He got a lot of stuff for a pair of jeans! Too bad he doesn't have an insulated fleece jacket, it would come in handy flying around on dragons.
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Thanks for the emotional chapter. And, for the record, Meep has a looooong way to go before he approaches Kalian's level of "spoiled brat"!
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Oops, I got the wrong Dr!
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All in all this was an entertaining chapter and two douchebags got a comeuppance. But I agree that Devin is not honorable in the way he uses his abilities. Also, as @drsawzall pointed out, they are making very little use of the house. If it is so out of the way, why did they walk to the house to get the car, drive to Arby's and back, then walk back to the dorm. They will go through all that to get fast food for one evening, but not to study? I thought studying was the whole reason behind all the deception?
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I survived! I loved the story, you created an amazingly intricate world and I look forward to rejoining it!
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Please let this be a moment of weakness, a blip, a temporary wrong turn on the road to happiness! Until he decides he is worth it, Michael can’t help himself. I just hope Eric doesn’t give up on him, and that Pete gives him a much needed kick in the ass!
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Thanks for the organizational breakdown. I'm very happy to see you're still working on this fantastic story!
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I’m hoping that Pete makes the decision easier on him. Pete has been going through his own transformation, thanks to Eric then Maggie. If Pete no longer needs a caretaker, due to gaining a partner in Maggie, Michael will lose his big excuse. He will have everything to gain and nothing to lose.
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Talon would have turned me into charcoal if he heard my "aaaaaawe" at the end of the chapter! I agree with @drpaladin, they need to let Wyn help. I have a feeling that even if they leave him behind, his minders will again become "indisposed". If Wren is left behind as his minder, I think Wyn can convince him to join the fight.
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If you're ever in my neck of the woods, visit Jungle Jim's supermarket. HUGE international supermarket, biggest beer and wine selection around, privately owned with two locations, ever evolving, no self-checkouts, thriving in Kroger's corporate home. Independent stores can work. I loved the short story, and the message.
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Best date ever! Even though Eric was the master architect of the date, it felt like Michael was taking a leading role in their relationship. Eric is still kind of fragile, but Michael recognizes this and handles him with love and care.
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I can’t decide if Michael is rediscovering himself or becoming a new person, regardless Eric is performing miracles in Hickory.
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The lingering anti-decisioner? The name-dropper for discounts? The loud douchey know-it-all? The time-sucking buy one thinger? Hmmm, maybe I've been in retail for too long!
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I'm pretty sure my insurance company bought a Manageroid!
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I think it's been so long since Michael looked within himself, that Eric is able to see things about Michael that he can't see himself. Michael really needs this trip.
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Oh, that makes much more sense! I can’t imagine Beckett being the protector!
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I'm not sure just how Beckett will "make sure Valrinda doesn't get captured"! He is starting to at least take this seriously.
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Segment 12: The Discus Of Time
CincyKris commented on MrM's story chapter in Segment 12: The Discus Of Time
M'yn made the right decision this time. I still don't fully trust him, but I have hope now. This is like a crazy cross between Raiders of the Lost Ark and a travelogue! Looking forward to China. -
The previous chapter was the beginning of Michael looking at his life, and at Pete differently. I think this chapter is the beginning of hope being reinstated in Michael's life.
