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That was a crazy dream, but it did make Nathan realize how much he cares for Brohm. Then he revealed everything. Brohm seems all in, even with the background out in the open. Now they can possibly start a relationship.
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Very good chapter, we are now up to I in the murderer’s alphabet scheme…. They seem able to take advantage of people’s momentary being alone… J would be next…. Jason needs to be very careful.
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Fun chapter, Jamie kind of hazing the minister, but he did need to know how the vehicle handled. So we now know if the minister touches someone he gets information about them. That’s an interesting power.
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So, that was a typo, should be attention
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The boys talked through why Kenny was feeling overwhelmed with all of the purchases for him. The house rules are good th know and doing chores for that allowance is setting him up for good behavior in the future.
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Fantastic, captured my ATT all the way through. The control that Mike exerted in their one sexual encounter was very comforting for both of them. They survived this, now on to possibly more stress being on the bodyguard detail….
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Jamie missed the opportunity to tell Mike about his demand that the Minister change his public message on gays. But that could have led to needing to discuss powers, which he is not ready to do yet…
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Maka was good to set boundaries and have a good conversation with Charlie about expectations in their potential relationship.
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Bully saying he is not a bully was a bold lie…
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Their friendship continues to grow. And a couple of times are near being seen by people searching for them. A good nights sleep should help.
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Otis doesn’t know that Vegas is Hudson’s work name. If he sees him and calls him that around others that could be a problem. What are all of these other models going to be doing for this 3 person show? Hudson was so close to freeing Otis. The suspense is thick.
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Interesting chapter, Kaito playing along letting people think he doesn’t speak English… will they stay boyfriends?
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Jury Selection and the Prosecution's Case
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jury Selection and the Prosecution's Case
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It’s good to see Liam interacting more with Mike. The date at the mall should be interesting.
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Great job finding Bailey. And they seemed to make some more friends at the game. Wondering who has a trap that big in an urban area? And what are they doing with what they trap?
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There is definitely an attraction between these two men, we only have Nathan’s inner dialogue, so there will need to be a conversation to see if they are both feeling the same. What is Brohm’s profession and why was he to be hanged? Hopefully we will find out soon.
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Wow, an alphabetical serial killer… who has access to a jail cell, not just the house. The mystery continues. Such great writing. The suspense is palpable.
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The Space We Used To Breathe
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in The Space We Used To Breathe
It seems like Adam is possibly growing wings…- 8 comments
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Great premise. Those of us aging into life it seems like so many things happened and are just faded memories. This is a really good thing that Colin is doing as well.
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Interesting start to what appears to be an interesting world.
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Is Dani just grateful for being saved by Abbie, or is there more? Besides the pressing need to relieve his pressures? Ralph seems very possessive as well.
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Apollo may be out on the street again after that episode with Ebony?? Or will Amir be tolerant of this behavior?
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Another interesting chapter, pulling Keith gently out to himself and others. The gay team play may be good for him to meet others with similar likes. He has had a sheltered life.
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Interesting chapter with these serpent people. What will Simon/Yidian do here to increase his strength?
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So this Theodore is the father of Mark and Dave, and wants to return from the dead… trick entity forced the bite to make him a werewolf. So now both brothers have been changed. Maybe the will help thwart the plans.
