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At least they are getting Jordan back, but what about the skipper? Sin the identity of the kidnapper is known, once they get Jordan back, the police can reach out to the parents again. Hopefully they won’t wreck this yacht… and get caught and put in jail for the kidnapping.
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Glad your back, and have a frequency for writing that works for you. Nic does need therapy, and seems to have something that happened to him that’s causing him to push people away. Glad that Jake’s figured out reading Nic, and that he got called out by Kenny.
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If the person at the police station didn’t have a Detective Swift… the was he really a detective or just posing? And Scott seemed to have found Swift in person really quick… and had too many good things to say about him, is there more there? We’re they already together?
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This is going to be interesting, Macy is #40, and Jase is beginning to like Lucas. What’s going to happen after this last healing? Will he have a life with a relationship to go back to? Or will he make a new life with Lucas. Is Lucas going to be “chosen”? Is that why Jase can’t influence him? Or are they soul mates, and a chosen one can’t influence their soul mate? Looking forward to where this goes.
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Pretty simple chapter. No Drama. Sounds like we get to catch up on 7 years next chapter.
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Great chapter, they decide to be friends and see that expanding. They are both honest about their sexuality which is a good thing too.
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Chapter 14 - Underground, Part One
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Underground, Part One
Seems like magma would be hot not cold? And there was no mention of temp change after she entered the stairs and saw these others…? The reason she went in the first place was the cold. -
Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
It’s great that Agrell was able to find Lahari so quickly. As she may have had more trouble if it was others who discovered her instead. -
The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
VBlew commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Wow… cliffhanger there. Maybe this will end his relationship with Mike. Which would be a sad way for it to end. But will let him move on with Pete.?.? -
Thanks for this chapter. All are well and back home. Happy Holidays. Here is to a great 2023!
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Do You Ever Dream Of Cat Boys?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Do You Ever Dream Of Cat Boys?
Will Matty play the cat boy again and get caught? Rusty is still hiding his feelings, may need to address them after the game. -
Chapter 3: A triangle none of them even realizes is there.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: A triangle none of them even realizes is there.
Wow, Elena is worse than a wicked stepmother! David and Ben finally connect and it’s amazing, but will they find each other again? Or is Jim going to get in there and be hurt and then act like his mother towards Ben? Such intrigue. -
Seems like maybe Keenan should have taken off his clothes for the ritual too. If he’s smoldering now. Maybe next time😉
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Mini me is very persistent. And Ash still needs to learn why she is named after him…
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Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
This story gets more interesting. Here I was thinking that since all 3 types lived in this city that they had some understanding to get along with their neighbors, but apparently that’s not the case. -
I love both of your stories, and this I’d definitely a fun way to collaborate. Good to know that there is more coming in Elijah’s world. Kage as his guardian continuing is awesome. He was so loved. Interesting that the Fae king is the reason for the Guardians to come back into existence is interesting. looking forward to more.
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Great story. The jump in time for the epilogue was a little surprise. Glad that they are all getting along and stayed together and improved each other’s lives. Happy ending was very nice.
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Fantastic chapter, the travelers got back safely, and then an amazing beach birthday party. So far we’re just getting Joel’s perspective on sexuality on the ship. It would be great if it was shared by everyone. They are quite diverse in makeup and not had any issues so far. Love this story.
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Merry Christmas, with a Cliffie… hopefully everyone is safe and whatever exploded does not cause too much damage.
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Good for Alex standing up to defend his boyfriend! Hopefully Karl can help, and then maybe some therapy and if Ed gets a job he will be more secure in himself?
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Wow, an amazing time getting closer. It’s sad that Rusty’s background is makin* him struggle so much inside. Maybe they will talk more at breakfast, and hopefully Rusty asks Matty to come to his game.
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Nikio and the Salamander - Journey's End
VBlew commented on Refugium's story chapter in Nikio and the Salamander - Journey's End
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That was a crazy end to what had been a great time out. Bill needs some anger management it seems
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Fun story, from an interesting perspective. Bruce became the center of attention again, for a bit.
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What an awesome Christmas Eve for these two. Great short story!
