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What a surprising turn of events. Crazy things people will do. At least everyone was safe. Hopefully the yacht was well insured, and he gets an even better one, and the culprits are caught this time.
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Very interesting story so far. These unseen creatures are something new to the were stories I’ve read before, and the mystical weapons are interesting too. Looking forward to this story.
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The first suspects would be the Chinese, but it could easily be anyone not liking the development that they are doing.
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Master Caspian's Collection
VBlew commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
This was a very interesting development, and now we know the reason for the title. Mysteries, what will having all of the stones for the mirror do? Sounds like a power trip, and hopefully for good and not evil purposes. There is something about Guideon being so interested in Kavan, and now having to train together will bring it out. -
Where Did Rusty Parker Sleep Last Night?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Where Did Rusty Parker Sleep Last Night?
Matty’s response should be not “dudes” just one dude, and let Rusty squirm some more….😏 -
Excellent story, great explanation for what caused the flood. And the idea for what could be done to reverse the damage of clear cutting forest. Glad that the both were ok after recovering in the hospital. And a nice happy ending.
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Wow, what a chapter, and a huge cliffhanger. Another example of climate change in action? Or a dream?
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This seems like there is some redemption for Corbin. I do question if this is Mike’s last attempt before he returns to his reality, and leaves Corbin? Hiding in the room having sex is one thing. Having an open relationship is something entirely different. Then there is Pete who he should have been honest with. Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
VBlew commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
Cliffie! Loved this story. Nice segue to the reminisce. Looking forward to where you take this story. -
Their discussion about dressing up as girls was interesting, the wake up about being focused on helping to do something about climate change was good too. I agree abut them being honest and forthright about being transparent with each other was good too.
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Great chapter with this loving family all together.
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Armand is such a giving person. If Tommy had not needed to go to the bathroom, the would have been robbed. So it looks like there was some good timing with that.
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I. Sorry to hear about the diagnosis, glad that Pam will have loving support for her treatment. And it was not a sinister character.
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Chapter 12 — Prairie Playmates
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 12 — Prairie Playmates
The discovery of the prairie dogs intelligent use of building their burrows with a raised mound to naturally circulate the air was brilliant. They are not using soap but are jumping in the River to clean off the sweat is probably why they don’t stink after several days of not using soap. -
What an interesting interpretation of being an uncle forced to have an extended visit with his hellion of a nephew, and have Lucifer be so helpful with his care. Loved it.
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Chapter 10 — Sunrise Surprise
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 10 — Sunrise Surprise
This was an interesting chapter, more of the camping, getting to know more about each other, the prairie dogs, seeing the buffaloes was a treat. And the conversation about the trustees and guardians clarified things for Bumper. Their growing love for each other is wonderful too. -
I Almost Touched A Pussycat Tail
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Almost Touched A Pussycat Tail
Rusty is so intelligent, but can’t seem to identify that he’s falling for Matty. It will work out, hopefully soon. Or he’ll still be having that weird 3way dream with the cat boy 😏- 38 comments
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They are having so much fun being together. Very joyful and experience so far. I do wonder about Marcus’ adventures out at night when they first met. Was he being followed?
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What a fun story. Marcus put in the effort, was confident in himself and played well, he deserved to win. A mostly fun group of people. Kelly was the surprise backstabbing one. Sampson did great, and not sharing his new project with his British friend, while hinting of an upcoming project.
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Chapter 6 — You Can Get Anything on eBay
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 6 — You Can Get Anything on eBay
Fun chapter. The boys now both ave working scooters, and the test driving got Bumper acquainted with driving his. The trial wearing of the kotekas went well. They really are getting along, building their friendship. -
So Rusty seems to be accepting of his attraction. Is he just figuring out that he is Bi, and exploring that with Matthew? If so what will that do to a totally gay boy, if he gets played with? Hopefully they both get to the point of accepting their attraction and are able to communicate about it.
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Seems like working and living together was good for the relationship to grow. Lovely ending to the story.
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I loved how the street artist captured each person that he did a portrait of. And how Armand took it as a learning lesson as well.
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Glad to see that they worked out the house issue. Now furniture…it’s all about compromising, and communicating. And yes, big dogs and leather are not good combinations. On to moving in together.
