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Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
VBlew commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
It’s sad Rory is ignoring Robbie. But words can really hurt. Stephanie is really manipulative, getting pregnant over a $50 but was stupid. -
What an excellent ending. Not a happily ever after, an after of a terrible fight brought about by an egomaniac, and ended by a grieving Elven Mage.
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Interesting that the spire returned to the planet. Gremlin is an excellent spy. I’m thinking Mickey needs to capture the spire, and name it Vega Vixen 6, that ship could deter the father from getting Isiah back!
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The body swap is interesting. They are able to speak the necessary languages to communicate with those around them. Wylan being able to see is new, does he retain his ability to hear as well as he did in his own body? Ishan is doing really well being blind. He should still be able to do magic, if Wylan is as powerful as he believes he is. They are learning that people are just people. It’s the stupid religious zealotry that is helping both sides fighting….
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Marvin is very good for Kent. They will make a great couple if they finally decide to go there.
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Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
They have a while longer on the train… and time in New York to develop their relationship even more, and another train ride back to school. That’s a lot of time together to really get to know each other. -
I think Malik and Rhaelce are staying in the forest while the others go to the village, they don’t really have anything to trade with, and have been trying not to be found, even if they are so far away from Rhaelce’s home. The similar light and transportation to this world story by Chihiro is interesting, so he’s not the only one traveling, there have to be others from the asylum too… another language to learn. Does Souza speak Japanese? I’m surprised that Malik and Rhaelce are not trying better to teach each other their languages…
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I Think I Secretly Enjoyed It
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Think I Secretly Enjoyed It
Gran is full of surprises. Her advice is sound if it feels good try it out, labels about sexuality at a young age are confining, and just because you’re primarily attracted to men, doesn’t mean you can’t like a woman/girl… -
The location with the cabins is amazing. I remember those Northern California lakes with no lights around, the night sky is amazing. You can see so much more than anything near a city. Brant is being very romantic, and hopefully honest about his feelings as Sky is loosing his ability to keep any sense of distance emotionally.
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Johnny seems to be at a turning point in his life and Bruce comes along seeming to offer an opportunity for something new. They are both insightful. Is Bruce a bodybuilder? It doesn’t say, so I’m assuming we will find out. They sure seem attracted to each other. Looking forward to the story.
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They could have warned him about the jump scares in the haunted house, he could have hurt the actor. Chocolate was different from what he had before.
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If the Father pursues, I think he’s going to be in for a rude awakening, if Isiah asks Quar to get rid of him…
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He will be back at the solstice, which will be a shorter time for Cian than for Aiden. It was a very nice goodbye for now.
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Great discussions during the ride to the cabins. This seclusion being around each other 24x7 will be a good test of their ability to be in a relationship. Brant seems genuine in his attraction to Sky. We know Sky would like this to be more and is being cautious with this formerly heterosexual stud. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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This is a long trip. They are gettin along well, and Malik is learning some survival skills.
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Great flashback. Some of this has been mentioned previously, but we needed some levity after that last chapter full of killing…
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The Bulwark wanted her spouse out of the palace so Daryan could not try to influence her again, or hurt her. Hopefully the plan to get the guards on board will work.
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Seems like Jesse is going after Isiah and gremlin. His AI knows Gremlin is a Dreknar, juvenile. But also does not seem to know what the Aliens who attacked are or could translate their language yet… Gremlin did seem to know the written language on the planet, maybe when they come to interrogate he will understand what they say? This got very interesting.
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It will be interesting what Graeme tells them, the truth or a story?
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Can’t wait for tomorrow and whatever Mike meant by slow.
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Beautiful ending. What an amazing story. Tears of joy. Bren had more depth to his magic than he even knew, and when called upon, it helped save everything. The dark magic is gone. Brava.
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Chapter 10 Boy Meets the One
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 10 Boy Meets the One
Sam figures out what he wants. Is Emory going to agree?? He seems really conflicted with 2 suitors. -
Pregnant was my thought too, but had they even had sex. Kevin said they were just getting to know each other. Seems like there is a Kevin and Jack attraction.
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Fenn getting some backup that he was not in control doing all the terrible work, hopefully helps Petre forgive him.
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If the gremlin was correct about the language in the temple, then he may be able to communicate with this race.
