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Dang. Kent’s turn to be injured. Excellent writing.
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Chad/Flambe was not going to lose Robert this way, and was not letting people get in his way. Hopefully after this rescue, Robert finally opens up to Chad.
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Zafiro has always liked large men. Now he has his mother back, but is remorseful for all of the killing.
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Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
Damn cliffhanger. They were just moving to the next level. The festival sounded like a fun time. Wonder why Nos’ Mother would care about him now, she hasn’t up to this point. -
There is already chemistry between the guys and Hector, so I really see him getting the role.
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Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
Now it’s out in the open. Dating both brothers, and they are very different. -
Kaleo, was able to slow Niran down with mentioning consent. Very important, they still slept together.
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Great season, getting settled in to both spaces, they are communicating and have their own space to retreat to. The idea of inheritance from Uncle Edwin is interesting. He seems quite a mystery.
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Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
I had figured Willy James had gone directly to the homestead and not to town. With all the worrying about him Runyan almost ran off and missed him. That was fortunate he heard them talking while opening the gate. Looking forward to getting to see the house and some alone time. I bet it’s all furnished and ready to go for them.- 39 comments
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Why did Matt run away to leave Death to explain this to Andrew. Is the boy going to be the next Fool? Will Andrew still be there when Matt returns?
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Jack ever with the running commentary. That was a position that I wasn’t thinking of for them. DP is amazing with the right people. Now for a Vince sandwich for him to be fully mated to Theo? There was no biting in this mating?
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It’s amazing how the simple connection to home, with a brief call or letter, keeps hope alive.
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The sex was hot and we only get, Sky’s inner monologue so we don’t know if Brant is having similar thoughts… I find personally I really want to be focused on the person I’m with when having sex. On the other hand self stimulation leads to many other people…
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They will need the team to track down the operatives that got into the headquarters and abducted Robert.. Hopefully he is still in one piece....
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Robert, you just keep messing up a good thing... Dang.
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Niran is helping Kaleo with local connections, looks like the golf club outing was something that was needed. He got the local labor union contacts and some additional suppliers possibly. Why did Niran get so intoxicated? Will he remember his wanting to stay at the club in the morning?? How far will Kaleo go? He is still just getting over the breakup. What kind of product are these Shawick people moving?? Seems like it might be drugs? And if Brandon is involved, that could be his downfall, especially if Apico wins the bid for the work on this very large public project.
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The dinner went well, even if a little interrogated. Rico seemed more than curious about sex… wonder what was unfortunate about their future masterbation. Rico decides he’s straight and just experimenting with his gay friend?
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Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
Shanaya got herself caught in a trap of her own making. Fortunately Bass was there to stop anyone eating the poison muffins…. Now maybe some of the call records will have further insight to the other parties who hurt Mannly. -
Eli finds out they have another person identified as a subject…, so it seems they want to keep him around. They sill no clue Eli knows their secret, there is subtle noticing he is a little preoccupied, but nothing major. Adrien is the one that will be the hardest to do anything to.
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Nice apology, hopefully no ulterior motives there.
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Great beginnng. Looking forward to this story.
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Andrew really stepped into it… having your brother Death backing you up had to be terrifying. I can’t wait to see how Andrew explains himself, and Matt does as well… not quite aliens, but something similar to a human.
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Interesting that in human mating form the Alpha penis behaved like a wolf penis, with a knot… wonder if beta’s in this world can get pregnant? the strategy to get all of the non-essential pack members off the island before the fight is a good one, if kept secret. Caulder thinks he’s smart, but when he’s dying from the fight will realize the error of his ways. If Austin wins, does that mean he takes over what remains of Caulder’s pack? Only seems fitting.
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The casting continues, and they seem to be filling other roles than the lead in the threesome. I’m concerned that it will affect their relationship with Hector and Juanita if he takes the role.
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It is a tough position for Taylor wanting his best friend to be more than that and afraid of telling him that it would destroy their friendship. Seems like the latter happened after the mock trial.
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