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The dinner went well, even if a little interrogated. Rico seemed more than curious about sex… wonder what was unfortunate about their future masterbation. Rico decides he’s straight and just experimenting with his gay friend?
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Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
Shanaya got herself caught in a trap of her own making. Fortunately Bass was there to stop anyone eating the poison muffins…. Now maybe some of the call records will have further insight to the other parties who hurt Mannly. -
Eli finds out they have another person identified as a subject…, so it seems they want to keep him around. They sill no clue Eli knows their secret, there is subtle noticing he is a little preoccupied, but nothing major. Adrien is the one that will be the hardest to do anything to.
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Nice apology, hopefully no ulterior motives there.
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Great beginnng. Looking forward to this story.
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Andrew really stepped into it… having your brother Death backing you up had to be terrifying. I can’t wait to see how Andrew explains himself, and Matt does as well… not quite aliens, but something similar to a human.
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Interesting that in human mating form the Alpha penis behaved like a wolf penis, with a knot… wonder if beta’s in this world can get pregnant? the strategy to get all of the non-essential pack members off the island before the fight is a good one, if kept secret. Caulder thinks he’s smart, but when he’s dying from the fight will realize the error of his ways. If Austin wins, does that mean he takes over what remains of Caulder’s pack? Only seems fitting.
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The casting continues, and they seem to be filling other roles than the lead in the threesome. I’m concerned that it will affect their relationship with Hector and Juanita if he takes the role.
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It is a tough position for Taylor wanting his best friend to be more than that and afraid of telling him that it would destroy their friendship. Seems like the latter happened after the mock trial.
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Glad to hear that Troy survived, and is moving on with his life after being devastated by Miles abandoning him… Owen seems like a nice boyfriend, but not necessarily the love of his life.., but Miles was his first, and they were really codependent for a while.
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Kaleo’s crew did a good job surveying the land for the construction site. Just need runoff data, then they will be set with the land part. Niran finds out some interesting news about another family’s business moving into the city, who possibly had ties to his father the day he died.
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After the second feeding, Lucien is able to open the bars enough to squeeze out. The lovemaking was a first for Eli, and he blissed out. If Lucien goes back alone, can he lock himself in from the underside of the floor? If not, someone might notice the ring twisted…
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Marcus and Ingomar had a very interesting conversation in the baths after the skirmish. They seem to be deciding to be more open about their relationship. Will be interesting to see the camp reactions, since their leader encouraged it.
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Chapter 10: The Observer Effect
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The Observer Effect
Vane is neutered, and the cold and cruelty replaced by a psychological pathology, possibly more cruel. Trap pamphlet seemed like something from a conversion therapy camp… -
Dang, seemed like everything was going well, then silence from Andrew??? Did something happen, or someone say something about Matt?
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Kamyak responded to the kindness he had been shown. They got out with the children and the Shepard’s family.
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Part 12: For Real This Time
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 12: For Real This Time
Apparently Mateo has been studying. While suppressing his desire for Cole. Hopefully after tonight there is no doubt left. -
Marcus didn’t fare too badly for the summoning of Sakis in the theater. Patrick stood by him. Hopefully the testosterone patches help him move into puberty. Poor Sakis, a modern game has an ancient song on it, which makes him sad.
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Kaleo is fitting right in. Niran didn’t need to be jealous of his son.. the apology was good. They are good for each other. The challenge may come when the project is over, but we have a long way to go before that happens.
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I think bringing the older Leclair to see Lucien and killing him would save Adrian. Just a possibility. Learning the chant in reverse is going to take some time.
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Chapter 9: The Sound of the Cage
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: The Sound of the Cage
Vane was tipped off to the inspection only moments after he was reported. Seems someone want the institution to remain open. That BBC report was very interesting. Hopefully Vane will be removed and someone better will replace him. -
Levi is really growing emotionally. The desire to help these young guys is impressive, even with all the trepidation about visiting he is a compassionate person. Are there only the 2 boys at the center now?
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Seems like Brant had an epiphany…Hector should audition…
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Gregg is falling for Justin… but it would be a long distance relationship if they tried to make it work.
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Chapter 8: The Frequency of Truth
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Frequency of Truth
There are more boys than masters, could they all work together to revolt? Or is the machine Vane controls too powerful? The punishment seems severe for just singing a song.
