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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Beautiful and sad at the same time.
  2. This is a time for family and healing and it started with Jay. They love Adam so much. He is beginning to finally accept it, that he can come back to Vancouver, and be OK.
  3. VBlew

    Chapter 46

    Good on Jesse making Shaun actually do things around the house. It got his mind off his troubles and actually working on the house which needed it. Hopefully with the online sleuthing they will find “Erin” and be able to have him arrested.
  4. VBlew

    Crossing Lines

    Paul is slowly accepting this version of himself.
  5. The separation without being able to say goodbye was rough. The phone number was enough to maintain contact. The writing is amazing. I feel like I’m right there with them.
  6. Wow, this is an amazing first chapter, you captured the reality of the situation, and the attraction of these two incredible men,and their realization that they had been looking for each other for a long time. Looking forward to more of this story. It could be a good ending, but feels like there is so much more to be told.
  7. Wow, that was a huge plot twist. Not sure that Andrew can really come out of this as anything beyond the Bully that messed up Marcus’ life. Maybe it’s time to go back to Edmonton, be with his best friend. Could that subconsciously been part of the reason he never said yes to getting married?
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 6

    Awesome, we get a little more of a view into the real Charlie. Maybe he’ll be nicer to the caregivers now. Interesting twist wanting to know how the date goes.
  9. Very funny interlude….
  10. VBlew

    Bollix

    Hopefully there is a good safe room in the apartment for Scott, would not want to loose him, or maybe he can take out the would be assassin? Sean is interested in more for his life. His hacking skills could come in handy for working with Gabriel…
  11. It’s like a family reunion with the older generation popping in to help.
  12. I loved how they moved to the next level. Five using his specially mad tool to finish the bet, and that getting Percy all worked up that he had to go all Dom on him. Their honest conversation about who they wanted to be with. Loved the interaction with the flirty twins. The surprise getting back and possibly interrupting a robber in the house, but I think it’s Ethan, all of those clues around strange things in the pool area, maybe he hacked the security or saw the code Five or Percy were using… Percy clearly knew who they were, and he’s not going to loose Five now.
  13. VBlew

    Chapter 45

    Gretchen is right. Shaun needs to post his own video. Sam is great support, first finding that Bobby takedown video, then suggesting how to get Erin back… they have their song selection ready. Halloween is going to be interesting.
  14. Given the appearance of the artifact in the photo, it could be anywhere on the property, and not be noticed. Like the Barn for example.
  15. Dean was so devastated, and it’s all Julian’s fault. He lied about being Mateo’s boyfriend, and possible Fiancée, that was really cruel. Find out where in Switzerland he is going and follow him, and apologize.
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    So they now know the rules of the game, and saw another set of “pieces” playing their roles. Can they band together and shut down the game?
  17. I’m still reading the original story, loving it. Almost through chapter 26. Pacing myself a little, as I tend to binge when I come across older completed stories that are long.
  18. Stephen made a huge mistake and now the truth of that is going to haunt him. I see a strong woman in Susan, not putting up with his BS any longer.
  19. VBlew

    Delicious Hunger

    Wow, Jack is very forthcoming with his desire. They took a very good first step to getting there.
  20. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Wonderful short story and a happy ending for the 4 guys.
  21. It’s interesting to see this from Damian’s perspective. Glad he got Josh.
  22. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    Is Mark openly gay? Or is he another compromised individual? He was really excited for his best friend to have a boyfriend! Is he another of the 13?
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    It seems like Tyler has some mystery of his own. Roman numerals date, written, note spoken as if he’s hiding that from someone?
  24. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    No, is this going to turn into a musical? I loved those movies… It may be better learning they are not the only ones being manipulated. But that kiss did seem to spark something they are not willing to admit yet.
  25. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    The meet cute was funny. Tyler seems obsessed now. Is he who he appears to be. With the possibility of body swapping, it creates an interesting world. That daemon seems like a version of Loki bringing chaos into the world…
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