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Part XXXIV. Displacement
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXXIV. Displacement
Nice cliffhanger. Lovers with secrets, lovers trying to get their partner back. What a twisted web you’ve written. -
Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
Everyone on this ranch is supported and wants to give back for what they have received. Bass was afraid that he would have to buy Kidd some custom boots… the dog rescue sounds like a great addition to the ranch. Mannly, wants to use his talents to get a website up and running to help bring in money, volunteers and overall promote all the good things happening on the ranch. Wait, why would Mannly move into the bunkhouse? Jake needs to ask him to move into his place out of the main house? -
Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Back and forth. Ryan seems like the stable “family” man who wants to stay in town. Cameron really seems like a wanderer, and not likely to stay with one person. Marcus has a tough decision to make. -
The coincidence of them both being nominated for awards by the same entity is amazing. Then neither of them looking through the entire list of nominees to see their ex was going to be there. The foreshadowing a few chapters ago about Miles’ sunset post now makes sense. I was thinking it was about Owen finding Miles online, but seem more like this getting them back together. They both still love each other, but Miles seems so stoic about it that he would not let Troy know. Will Robbie get introduced and say something?
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I like this pair as private detectives. It was a very good ending to the story. Looking forward to more in the series with these guys.
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Kai’s interaction with River at the bar were pleasant, why back to the sworn enemy trope the next day? River is interested, but not enough to make a move. Is Fly really that oblivious?
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Brandon once again proves he is an utterly stupid person, thinking he can try hurting Kaleo, without consequences. Niran now knows for sure who killed his father. And they have royal security forces engaged to thwart Gordon Shawick.
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Seems like a crazy thing telling them they have to fight or leave. Zafiro doesn’t seem to have any problem with fighting at this point. It’s sad to hear that the treatment didn’t completely heal him though.
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Back on the plantation that he now owns, feels different and he is leaning into the work. Sam’s letter was a welcome surprise.
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Hopefully when Kent is healed they will explore more than quick kisses.
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Eli just enjoyed the day by himself. He did not reach out to Adrien. Which seems like a good thing. Lucien is very possessive. And I think they realize they really are just friends. Tonight the change happens.
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Yes on the new story. Noah as concerned seeing Ash with a bruise his face. Looks like they bot want some more alone time.
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Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
Now stood up to his mother. Cal came in strong to be with his man. Everything turned out ok. The bonding seems a little one sided… they need to swap roles. -
He survived the fight because he is telling the story, but lost some friends this day. Were the Romans not equipped to counter Guerrilla warfare? Seems not from this account.
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Why does River come and sit at the bar in Kai’s section if he acts like he hates him? That accident with the horse could have been tragic. Got to be focused around those big dogs…
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Brant won an Oscar, A very fun trip to Miami, flirting on the beach. The movie premiere was a success. Looking forward to them filming their movie.
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Kaleo was upset at not knowing they were going to Dragon’s memorial place, had not been prepared or dressed for respect. Niran got the brunt of the anger for the lack of communication. They seem to have been spending a lot of time in bed. Which is good too, but communication is necessary for a great relationship.
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Part XXXIII. Liquefaction
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXXIII. Liquefaction
Dang Robert. Tools can be used for good and bad, depending on the person wielding them, and in this case, it looks like the bad guys… will Chad find Robert all frozen and dying? -
So “Buddy” has a name tag, but isn’t wearing it yet. Hopefully he will when they open officially, and Chase will learn his name… I’m guessing the last name is Ashton… part of the ownership family, and the board sent him here to be “normal” Chase is smitten. The baking is good, he smashed the interview with the cookies.
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Mr Angry & Property Searching
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mr Angry & Property Searching
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Richie’s extra developed very quickly. It saved him from the scavengers, for a bit. Hopefully leaving this note will alleviate Richie’s need to tell his mom in person. Who was going to be watching?
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So the biting needed to be invited. And both Jack and Vince agreed. Vince was a virgin bottom, but took Theo like a champ.
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Chapter 17 Ain't No Place Like Home
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Ain't No Place Like Home
Seems like Augusts grandparents were the kind of people who didn’t cut corners. If the conditions of the outbuildings are any indication the house will be amazing. Someone has been there doing some maintenance. Grandma did say she was well off, and the ladies may have been spending some time here as well as in town. Knowing that August was coming could have been preparing for him. This roped moon seems like a full moon, not just a sliver. Looking forward to their further exploration of the place, but especially them picking out bedrooms…- 46 comments
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The awards were awesome. Brant is very busy promoting 2 movies he is in, and working on another one. Sky has his first on screen hetero role and seems to do well with it. Hector is really up front with his feelings about his role, and everyone reassures him it will work out. Will they again be on a secluded area for the main filming. That did wonders for the realism of the movie too.
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Chapter 29 ~ Brothers in Arms ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 29 ~ Brothers in Arms ~
Rhett, red leather for your bench yo get railed in. Really seems like he is into it even if he is unaware at this point. And Frank was the only one getting the sir treatment or the hardon. Hank could hardly keep from laughing. Can’t wait for them to use the equipment they are building. Jo has such a big heart, and apparently talent too. The guys are very encouraging to him, and let him know how the music moved them.
