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Hector/Ricky really seemed to enjoy Sky/Aaron working on his body for the first time.
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Love the beginning of this story. The twins did good protecting Nick in the locker room the prior year. Looking forward to where this one goes.
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Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
Terrific chapter exploring the house. It is designed well and the layout is great. 4 bedrooms. The primary upstairs over the kitchen to be warm in the winter. Plenty of room for Fletcher’s brothers when they come with the sheep. Willy James speaking up for what he would like, a place away to make as much noise as he wants with his husband Runyan….- 38 comments
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Great dinner and a time to get to know the in-laws better. Did time move quicker in the veil, or was Ysolde saying they were older and Theo was just young?
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So the meet cute was a disaster…. At least they now know each others names.
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Chapter 31 ~ No Porcelain Doll ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 31 ~ No Porcelain Doll ~
Mannly wants to stand on his own, to be a partner with Jake, but the emotional response to Jake’s protective nature was anger and cooling off. The eagle I believe has some Native American symbolism, which has not been explained. Mannly’s self deprecation is making him nauseous and seemingly delirious. Hopefully it was one of his friends coming to see how he was doing. Seems like these guys need to talk, with someone else meditating to get their feelings out in the open. -
Did they really just do that, or was it a dream? If it was real, then Tyler as not really ready for feeling the way he did. He thought he wanted it, but could not handle the emotions… hopefully this didn’t destroy their friendship, but it may have which is sad.
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Nice song.
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The movie is progressing well. Rachel is really getting into her role. It’s interesting to see that they have to keep working and looking at new job opportunities all the time. Seems to be how the business works. Looking forward to Sky and Hector connecting in their scene.
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Jack is quite sad from having made what he thought was a friend and kindred spirit, turned out to be a frightened boy, but I’m not understanding why the subterfuge with the lame horse and broken wheel?
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Jack is quite sad from having made what he thought was a friend and kindred spirit, turned out to be a frightened boy, but I’m not understanding why the subterfuge with the lame horse and broken wheel?
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Chapter 1: The last message
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: The last message
This is very suspicious. The dreams, then the missing twin, and nobody is looking for Adrian. But so far he has not decided to be the impostor… very interesting premise to this story. We also don’t know much about Mateo… -
There is a love between these guys that has grown into ordinary, and going home is going to change all of that. I hope they get a time to be intimate. That is made very clear is not something that is possible in the camp.
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Congratulations to Chase on gettin the full time job. The ladies are all happy for him. Simon is clearly flirting, but Chase hasn’t decided what that is yet. Buddy/Raven is slowly cracking, and shooing Simon away from Chase, like he wants more but is not there yet. Pru is a delight. They are now on better financial footing, but seems like just barely. This is a delightful story so far.
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Now the suspense of knowing if they are father and son is over. Paul seems like an outgoing guy. Sorry for your loss. Longtime animal companions take time to grieve. Be well.
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Ace is having feelings, but that last part sounded like he was going to blow off Leo tonight…. That would not be good. Love the tie in with your other story. Leo is the PA to Jasper…
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Seems like at this point, Troy has been with Owen longer than he was with Miles… Owen did get surprised that this was “that” Mikes, and Troy had not mentioned it… but Troy never thought they would ever see each other again. Hopefully Miles is in a place he can explain what he was going through mentally that he had to leave… will Troy accept it, or want to get back together? Owen was right to ask about that. Can’t wait to find out the answer…Why?
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Very interesting…
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River is now seeing another side of Kai, and they have a lot in common outside of Fly.
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Brandon is getting payback for being the gold digger that he is. There is concern about Kaleo’s safety, with Gordon wanting to target Kaleo to hurt Niran. Niran’s introduction to the Rana seems to be going well.
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A very interesting beginning to this new book. Who is the mysterious tester? They could have identified themselves… seems like he’s inside a game.
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This episode almost seemed a little like a Doctor Who episode, which is high praise from me.
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Nice interlude between the sex scenes. Sky had to realize where his protective thoughts were coming from. Lots of eye candy at this party.
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So it begins, the first sex outside their relationship. The film’s emotional level is imitating their real life outside the film.
