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Jack ever with the running commentary. That was a position that I wasn’t thinking of for them. DP is amazing with the right people. Now for a Vince sandwich for him to be fully mated to Theo? There was no biting in this mating?
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It’s amazing how the simple connection to home, with a brief call or letter, keeps hope alive.
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The sex was hot and we only get, Sky’s inner monologue so we don’t know if Brant is having similar thoughts… I find personally I really want to be focused on the person I’m with when having sex. On the other hand self stimulation leads to many other people…
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They will need the team to track down the operatives that got into the headquarters and abducted Robert.. Hopefully he is still in one piece....
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Robert, you just keep messing up a good thing... Dang.
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Niran is helping Kaleo with local connections, looks like the golf club outing was something that was needed. He got the local labor union contacts and some additional suppliers possibly. Why did Niran get so intoxicated? Will he remember his wanting to stay at the club in the morning?? How far will Kaleo go? He is still just getting over the breakup. What kind of product are these Shawick people moving?? Seems like it might be drugs? And if Brandon is involved, that could be his downfall, especially if Apico wins the bid for the work on this very large public project.
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The dinner went well, even if a little interrogated. Rico seemed more than curious about sex… wonder what was unfortunate about their future masterbation. Rico decides he’s straight and just experimenting with his gay friend?
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Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
Shanaya got herself caught in a trap of her own making. Fortunately Bass was there to stop anyone eating the poison muffins…. Now maybe some of the call records will have further insight to the other parties who hurt Mannly. -
Eli finds out they have another person identified as a subject…, so it seems they want to keep him around. They sill no clue Eli knows their secret, there is subtle noticing he is a little preoccupied, but nothing major. Adrien is the one that will be the hardest to do anything to.
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Nice apology, hopefully no ulterior motives there.
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Great beginnng. Looking forward to this story.
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Andrew really stepped into it… having your brother Death backing you up had to be terrifying. I can’t wait to see how Andrew explains himself, and Matt does as well… not quite aliens, but something similar to a human.
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Interesting that in human mating form the Alpha penis behaved like a wolf penis, with a knot… wonder if beta’s in this world can get pregnant? the strategy to get all of the non-essential pack members off the island before the fight is a good one, if kept secret. Caulder thinks he’s smart, but when he’s dying from the fight will realize the error of his ways. If Austin wins, does that mean he takes over what remains of Caulder’s pack? Only seems fitting.
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The casting continues, and they seem to be filling other roles than the lead in the threesome. I’m concerned that it will affect their relationship with Hector and Juanita if he takes the role.
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It is a tough position for Taylor wanting his best friend to be more than that and afraid of telling him that it would destroy their friendship. Seems like the latter happened after the mock trial.
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Glad to hear that Troy survived, and is moving on with his life after being devastated by Miles abandoning him… Owen seems like a nice boyfriend, but not necessarily the love of his life.., but Miles was his first, and they were really codependent for a while.
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Kaleo’s crew did a good job surveying the land for the construction site. Just need runoff data, then they will be set with the land part. Niran finds out some interesting news about another family’s business moving into the city, who possibly had ties to his father the day he died.
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After the second feeding, Lucien is able to open the bars enough to squeeze out. The lovemaking was a first for Eli, and he blissed out. If Lucien goes back alone, can he lock himself in from the underside of the floor? If not, someone might notice the ring twisted…
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Marcus and Ingomar had a very interesting conversation in the baths after the skirmish. They seem to be deciding to be more open about their relationship. Will be interesting to see the camp reactions, since their leader encouraged it.
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Chapter 10: The Observer Effect
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The Observer Effect
Vane is neutered, and the cold and cruelty replaced by a psychological pathology, possibly more cruel. Trap pamphlet seemed like something from a conversion therapy camp… -
Dang, seemed like everything was going well, then silence from Andrew??? Did something happen, or someone say something about Matt?
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Kamyak responded to the kindness he had been shown. They got out with the children and the Shepard’s family.
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Part 12: For Real This Time
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 12: For Real This Time
Apparently Mateo has been studying. While suppressing his desire for Cole. Hopefully after tonight there is no doubt left. -
Marcus didn’t fare too badly for the summoning of Sakis in the theater. Patrick stood by him. Hopefully the testosterone patches help him move into puberty. Poor Sakis, a modern game has an ancient song on it, which makes him sad.
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Kaleo is fitting right in. Niran didn’t need to be jealous of his son.. the apology was good. They are good for each other. The challenge may come when the project is over, but we have a long way to go before that happens.
