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Glad to have the chapter early. Ash can take the teasing about his boyfriend. Letting Taggert take the lead and not pushing, even though he would like more. They are working better together. Taggert is now seeing the bigger picture, and hopefully soon will step up and help get this new ranch, or possibly make his own run at it, with Ash.
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Finally an advocate for Caleb. Blanchard is formidable.
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Lust and love in a loud Irish family. Fun short story.
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Blake seems very interested, is he really Justin? Or himself.
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Interesting. Is Justin the sexy man who was dancing alone? Greg is interesting so far. Is the photo he just received from the photographer, or his friend?
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This seems like the first time that Marcus has called Sakis a name and it hurt. Seems like they reconciled. Grief takes many forms.
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Owen got a day of feeling what Ryder hast feel for the boy he wants to be with trapped in a closet of other peoples design. He will eventually have to do or say something. The conversation with all 4 of these queer characters is going to be interesting. Two who are out and two hiding behind lies…
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The Risky Business Variation
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in The Risky Business Variation
Even in a seeming manic state, they had a fun day at the beach. -
Ryan is following his dream, but working behind the scenes, he is over the hysteria that goes with being visible to the public, at least for now.
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The sex was very interesting, Lawrence thoroughly enjoyed it, as did Bastien, who is up for more. This book may be a key to unlock the diary’s secrets.
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Rhaelce is trying to be redeemed, and offered his people’s version, Malik now understands this, and offers another way. Rhaelce was interested in the fire play that Malik as doing and not afraid this time. So there is progress.
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Even Witches have a sore Spot - sometimes more than one
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Even Witches have a sore Spot - sometimes more than one
Romy is terrified of crowds, and was taking it out on Sam’s body. -
Casimir is going to do whatever is necessary to keep in Atreus’ line of sight. The arrival of the English is one more thing to complicate everything going on. The scale of this story is amazing.
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That suit malfunctioning like that, sabotage? Seems like they would have powered it up before putting a human in it… hopefully he’s not too damaged by the smoke.
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Bad communication. Now Chad needs to make up for it if he even has a chance at a relationship… great seeing it from the other side.
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It seemed like more of a booty call than what Robert wanted, but they really haven’t communicated about wants an expectations. So Robert should not be upset about being dismissed…
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Part II. Thermal Overload
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part II. Thermal Overload
Flambae Got jealous when he saw Robert seeming to be flirting with a female team member. The Manager is aware. I fear that when Robert reveals his past, and he is the one who took Chad’s fingers there will be some rage then too. -
Part I. Warmth & Friction
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part I. Warmth & Friction
Steamy scene. Had rRobert been in the apartment long? It was basically empty. Did Robert just get upset about Chad wanting to know more about him? Or was it the sex he was not expecting? -
If they had to physically break in, then they could not have teleported in, unless the did and made the noise on their way out? Little B is an amazing protector. Who are the ghosts wanting to keep Noah Safe?
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I love murder mysteries. This is off to a great start.
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Ashot saw himself in the street boy being beaten. And saved Him, then later the boy helped him. Kind of seemed like the mob was being directed though. Did the witch notice him spying? Then send these people after him? Wylan’s conversation with Atreus hopefully helped the boy focus on what long term was good for him. The princess could get married to Atreus and have a relationship like Julian does with his wife… and the men could still have their relationship.
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Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
VBlew commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
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Mannly had what seemed like some good memory recall about school, burying his father, and a new job he was headed to. With a few more details the Sherrif might be able to reach out and find out information from the town in SD about recent deaths, and a son, and at the paper, who they recently hired, who has not arrived for work yet. Or the school. Jake was clueless about his supposed date. And all through this Mannly really hasn’t given any clues to his sexuality…
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The first time sex for Xavier went well, then he was late for work? Why didn’t Austin wake him? Nathaniel being abducted was something they expected, and still let him go by himself….
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Good ending. Even if not the happily ever after ending. Very well done.
