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Liam and Hudson beautiful. Mateo is the ultimate friend. Marina will hopefully die at the hands of Mateo's gay mafia acquaintances. Beautifully written and great dialogue as always!
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"I Know You're In There"
dboggs9700 commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "I Know You're In There"
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Liam needs to grow a pair and tell Marina it is her job to keep his life private. She obviously feels she is capable of maintaining her investment. At least Hudson did not sign an NDA. So well written. Otherwise, I would not feel this pissed off.
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"Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
dboggs9700 commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
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Great interplay between Liam and Hudson. The texts at the end were a perfect set up for things to come.
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By the time I got toward the end of the chapter I was hooked. Your words seem to flow so naturally without being flowery or ostentatious. I am anxious to get to know Hudson and Liam better.
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Not quite sure what to say. Your descriptions of surroundings, sounds, dialogue, and actions are so perfect. The sex scenes are hot as hell, and you keep them with the story and not gratuitous. Great chapter Jack.
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The first night will definitely be interesting for all the guys. Can't wait.
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This story is wonderful. Beautifully written with characters I would like to meet. It brought out emotions and is also thought provoking. Thank you for this story and please keep writing.
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Absolutely beautifully written! I loved the song also. Thank you!
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Things are starting to get a little sad, but the beauty of the triad is still outshining that. The strength Chris, Nate, and Tad give one another is amazing. It also seems the new friendship between all five men will help as time goes on. Great story!
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Just keep writing and I'll keep reading. Sleazy Miller seems like an interesting character.
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Damn......Throw some more twists and turns into the plot Jack. Every time I think I know where things are going you change direction. Great chapter and story. As aways, thank you for sharing it with us.
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Loved this chapter. The developing relationships are so interesting. The dialogue is absolutely fabulous as always.
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This chapter committed me to the story. As always, the characters are excellent. Not that I agree with him, I do understand where Chris is coming from. Were Chris and Miranda at odds over things previous to Chris leaving? Thank you Wayne for this story.
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Loved this chapter and the inventiveness of the prank.
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Beautiful ending to another great story. So many wonderful things were stated in all the comments for the story I have nothing to add. Your characters and their interactions are what has drawn me to your stories. I plan on reading Fleeting Eternity soon. Thank you as always for sharing your talent with us.
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Hank seems to read Jesse like an open book. Jesse is just confused not understanding Hank's motives or what he expects in return. Very anxious and excited for the next chapter.
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Thanks Wayne...great chapter! I really like the way the journal was handled. I did not want to see things go off the rails between Troy and Grant. I am very excited and a little fearful of Mommy Dearest coming up. John's sister was mentioned a couple of times earlier. Will she make an appearance? Don
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Loving this story. So glad Troy has stabilized his situation and like that we are getting to know more about Grant. But I know you will be shaking things up sooner or later.😁
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Damn...for some reason this story is more emotional for me than your other stories were. Not sure why unless it is because Troy and Grant both seem like good guys. Troy's situation breaks my heart.
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I am glad that you recommended this story for me to read. I am already hooked into it because the characters are being developed so well. I was a little afraid of spoilers in the comments after chapter 1, but I am so happy that your readers really avoid doing that. I'll continue reading and comment occasionally. Thank you for sharing your talents.
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Thank you Wayne for a great read. Story, characters and dialogues were great.
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Great the way you have Charles and Rachel keeping Wren and Caleb honest with their feelings. The dialog between these characters is excellent.
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I am really hooked on another one of your stories. I don't understand why most didn't like Wren from the beginning, his circumstances excused his behavior in my opinion. The setting reminds me of summers spent helping at my grandparent's farm in West Virginia.
