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Why do I get the feeling I'm missing something? I don't remember them ever finding Jack's body - it is possible I missed that. However, I get the feeling at some point Jack is going to show up and that is going to put everybody in a pretty pickle.

This was a very good chapter. Koodos to will for stepping up to the plate so brilliantly. He does that so well. I agree what has been said about Cody. He wants to be part of Maddy's life - as well he should, and is going about it the right way. He obviously has her best interest at heart. I would like to say that I am offended by the conversation between Will and Carullo back at the hotel just before they had sex. The question "are you clean?" is offensive to those who are HIV+ . Because they are HIV+ doesn't make them unclean and it is time for all of us to correct those that think so. They both recognized their responsibility and even in the height of the moment should have suggested using a condom (rather than say "Are you clean?" That would give both of them the opportunity to say they had been tested and it was okay to have sex without a condom (I know some will say they should have used one anyway - but that's another debate). I know the slight wasn't intentional, but I wanted to call you on it anyway.

I'm anxious to see what happens when Rhyer goes back home. I think he is right though, his mother is going to give him a hard time. I think if father and perhaps sister will back him up.

Just when I wonder where this story is going to go next and how you will create some drama you come through with flying colours. This is a great chapter.

Great chapter, but a very worrisome ending. What is going on here? It sure doesn't bode well for Rydian.

While its not good that Mattie and Casey have been kidnapped, Its good that we're getting a different kind of excitement in the story. There is potential for a lot to happen. It wont' take long for someone to figure out that Ernesto is involved in this. unless he stays behind at the rancho. I look forward to the next chapter - thank goodness Andrew posts new ones on a regular basis and doesn't keep us in the air for too long. And what's with Brandon back home? What will be his role in the whole family story?

I can appreciate that Ben might think Mark went to the press, but he completely rejected Mark's denial. A bit harsh I think.

I can't wait to see how Marcus will put an end to Lucius. It's time to end that one once and for all. As for Koen and Marcus - it's good to see how Marcus treats him and as much as possible under the circumstances considers him an equal. I'm sure that soon that will be made as a permanent and open situation. Good writing - I look forward to the next chapter.

I like this story - but with everybody's name starting with a Z I get confused who's who.

I love this story. It's so sexy. I can't believe Zach is so shy(?). But Ryan is so patient. Love it.

Suddenly some intrigue. Great. I think Sandy is the key to where David is - he's her Dad and He was suffering a disease that is now in the realm of her expertise. So looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story. Very different. At first Tan seemed very naive, but as we found out he was far from it. I'm a bit of a rice queen (no offense intended to anyone) so you can imagine what that did to me.

Thanks Sasha. I've located it and will definitely buy it.

This has the beginnings of a great story. While it says the story is completed, the fact that it's called "Teaser" tells me more is to come. I hope that is the case. Thanks

Wow! Quite the curve ball there. When I started reading this chapter I was thoroughly confused and wondered if I was getting my characters all mixed up. But it is an interesting angle and I liked it. I don't know what I would do if I was Jeremy and Sam, but I'm sure the fact that David is giving his blessing is going to help. There are so many people who we could say should know that David is still alive, but all of the morning is done and the harm it could cause now would be too great to risk. I am anxiously looking forward to more.

In am thoroughly enjoying this story. Cole is amazing. Your omen for the future will only make this story better. I"m sure Jared (or Cole) hasn't heard the last of Joel. But knowing Cole it won't do him any good. I look forward to seeing the twist you'll put in.

I really enjoyed this story, and was a little disappointed when it ended. Although, I think you ended it exactly as you should have. Thank you.

This story is still new and its plot has to be developed, but for some reason I'm hooked on it. I look forward to see it unfold.

I look forward to seeing where this is going. My first reaction was that everyone was being to hard on Kei - but since it's everybody it must be a serious issue.

Good chapter. Micah is moving up. Unfortunately I can see the fame and glory is going to go to his head. That would be unfortunate for such a sweet boy. By the way, the story is repeated in the same upload. You might want to check that out.

This story was really enthralling. Well written. While I knew Callen was dead when he went into the water, but when he suddenly met with Sage I had some hope that he wasn't really. Of course when the realization that Sage too had somehow died I started looking at the story very differently. While I might have hoped for a happier ending, this one was appropriate. Thank you.

I enjoyed this chapter. It was great to see how relaxed Alexis was with his family. And what an amazing family. I'm sure like all famiies, it's not perfect, but you can tell that its great having the family reunions. Marion is amazing, and I'm sure Philip is as well. His initial gruffness is to be expected from a family patriarch. But, by getting to know Joshua he'll open up to him and probably end up being his most staunch supporter if and when things get a little tougher. I'm speculating that Alexi's parents (or at least his mother) will shop up at the get together. That'll be amazing for Alexis. I look forward to more.

The inevitable happpened. Ryo is going to N.Y. without Soubi. I don't understand why he couldn't have gone with him. It makes no sense to me. I can see Kaito and Sakura getting together. That would be an interesting situation. Ryo's mother would literally have a bird. While she hasn't accepted Sakura at all - I doubt she would ignore her own grandson. I look forward to seeing how Ryo and Soubi are going to keep their relationship going despite the long distance and the idea that there is four years ahead of them before they can get together. Or will the situation change?

Great to have you back X. Sometimes when you have to wait for a long time for a new chapter you forget what you've read before and have to go back and refresh your memory. But not The Brotherhood. I'm glad Jacob put Alex in her place and hopefully she'll be gone. I can't say I agree with the way he did it, even if she deserved it. What we don't remember is she comes from the same town as Jacob and can do some serious damage there if she wants - and I woudln't put it past her.