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Morningstar: The Malaise - 33. Chapter 33 The Business at Hand

Modus operandi...

Morningstar: The Malaise

 

 

Chapter 33

 

 

Kellar and Tobyn worked side by side, putting together the purchase order for pure-copper, jewelry-grade chain. There was a readily available ball design along with the pure-copper joiners, perfect for what was needed. They made the decision to include a surplus to take with them when they searched out Vega pack, and the requisition was put through the pack store, since all deliveries were handled there. Fitting individuals with necklaces would require only a pair of cutting pliers and some simple measuring of their wolf’s neck. The chains were thin enough to be easily hidden, but rated as strong, and just as important to a shifter, they wouldn’t snag on fur.

Paying extra for two day shipping was approved by Elinor, as was ordering enough to equip shifters from other packs they might come across. When she finally took her leave to find Denver, Kellar understood. Their euphoria over this discovery was accompanied by underlying fear at a known hunter being in close proximity to pack lands. She was compelled to lay eyes on her mate. By now, thin strands of copper were being distributed to all members as temporary defense, along with the explanations for the reason and use, so there was little more Elinor could do.

Upon earlier checking, it was welcomed news the hunter had not been seen at the store out on the highway, so it was decided with copper necklaces or bracelets on all the workers, it was safe to continue to operate for the rest of the day. All shifters were instructed to keep them hidden from view since it was possible Reznick knew the countering effects of copper. Guns too had been distributed, and everyone was warned to be on the lookout for the camo-painted truck and the man who matched Warren’s now-circulated description. Kellar was impressed with how efficiently Elinor had covered each and every base. This new Reznick might be formidable, but so was his adopted pack when they needed to be.

“And… send. All done. What are you thinking about, doc? You look miles away.”

Kellar felt Tobyn’s gaze on him, so he turned his focus back outward. “First of all, I’m thinking I’m not letting you out of my sight.”

“That goes double for me. We stick together, right? No excursions without me.”

“Not a chance. Did you see your mom when she left? She’s a remarkable woman to have gotten everything taken care of before she went to find Denver.”

“That’s my mom. I heard her on the phone with him, and as cool as she acted and sounded, I could detect the fear in her voice. I’m sure Denver did too. She’ll be at the garage right now, ready to shoot that bastard if he shows up again. You’d be amazed how good Elinor Berenger is with a gun.”

Kellar chuckled. “I believe it. You know, sending Warren that train ticket has proven to be the best thing we could have done. For centuries, shifters haven’t been able to figure out what he did in mere minutes.” Kellar shook his head at the absurdity of it. “I’m beginning to realize just how much more there is to my brother than I thought. I used to think he was a complete dolt, but he’s proven to be far from it.”

“I like hearing you call him your brother. This whole thing has been good for both of you. It’s too bad you didn’t connect with him growing up. You wouldn’t have felt so alone.”

“Yeah, it’s funny how life works. I’m so proud of that guy, I could burst. Who’d have thought?” He shook his head again. “You know Adelin’s with him at the garage, right?”

“Of course. Where else could she be. It’s pretty clear their joining has started.”

“Do you think they…?” Kellar didn’t need to finish.

“That, I don’t know, and I really don’t want to, but with Adelin, I‘ll bet they’ve only been sharing spit so far.”

“That’s what I thought too. Enough about their joining. I guess we’ll have to put our plans on hold for a few days.”

“Sorry, but we really can’t leave now. Until Reznick is dealt with, we have to be here, don’t you think?”

“Oh, absolutely. And why are you apologising? I meant what I said about being happy with the way things are. Any better would probably kill me anyway.”

“It won’t kill you, it’ll only make you stronger,” Tobyn said snickering.

Kellar groaned. “That was really bad, but true. Completing ours will make us stronger… I don’t know how I know, but somehow, I’m certain we’re not all the way there.”

“I feel that too… I guess everyone can tell when their joining is complete.”

“Maybe.”

“Okay, enough talk about sex. It’s making me horny.”

Kellar laughed, “Me too.”

“So what else is new,” Tobyn said as he reached over and ran a finger along some pretty obvious growth. Kellar groaned for a different reason this time. “Not the time, mountain man… so you said first… what else were you thinking about?”

“Huh?”

“Earth to Kellar.” Tobyn smirked. “Having trouble thinking?”

“Yeah… no, I know what you meant.”

“So then?”

“So then what?”

This time Tobyn really laughed. “I so own you,” he said with glee. “When enough blood returns to your brain, you can try again to tell me what else you were thinking about when you looked like you were in another world.”

Kellar flushed and chuckled at the same time. “Right. I knew that. I was thinking about checking my theory on the burnt umber.” He took in Tobyn’s questioning look. “That means seeing if the pure silver pulses when it’s near kids who haven’t shifted yet. Burnt umber comes in a variety of nuanced shades, but the one in our patterns is the color of copper that’s been exposed to the air for a while, pretty much like old plumbing pipes. I’m betting without it in the patterns, the kids won’t cause silver to pulse.”

“Right. Got it. We’ll need our resident human for that. But that won’t change anything, will it?”

“No, but curious minds want to know.”

“There’s my healer man.”

“If I’m right, it’ll be enough to know the kids are naturally protected. I’d hate to think they’ve gotten to pack children in the past.”

“You’re ahead of me again,” Tobyn said somberly. “That is a really important thing to know. Should we go get a kid and take them to the garage?”

“It can wait. By now they’re all wearing copper anyway.”

“That’s true.” They sat side by side in silence for a few minutes. “Kellar, what do you expect he’ll do?”

“I’ve been mulling that over. Reznick knows he’s in shifter territory, so setting traps would be my guess. I believe that’s their modus operandi, but who knows what some of his other tricks might be.”

“Modus operandi? Okay, professor,” Tobyn teased before continuing. “It makes sense to me. Anyway, it’s the only tactic we know for certain.”

“I’ve been thinking about elk scent, and why they would use it over deer or moose?”

“And… what did you come up with?”

“Wouldn’t it stand to reason that with deer and moose scent being all through Northern Ontario woods, they would use a scent we’d be curious about? I mean the trick is to cover the smell of the iron and to draw us to the traps.”

“You’re good at this. So are you saying we shouldn’t worry about any scent but elk?”

“No, that would be a mistake I think. We have to be on guard for everything. It’ll be easier to protect ourselves when pack noses improve like ours have. I guess the biggest tell might be ones that don’t move. If we smell a deer, and five minutes later it’s in the same spot, we should carefully investigate. It could be bedded down, or it could mean trouble. That’s not to say, though, the hunter would be there, but if we do find a trap, we know he will be eventually.”

“What I’m hearing then, is we should be the ones out searching for Reznick?”

“I don’t know,” Kellar said with trepidation. “I hate the idea of you being in any kind of danger, but we do have the strongest noses. The only ones close would be your mom and Denver… Adelin has only begun to improve.”

“Same here. I don’t want you in any peril either, but…. We need to spend more time with the members.”

“It won’t make much difference. Mealtimes and normal contact are sufficient. Remember, the mist isn’t endless, and it needs time to recharge. That’s why the need for more mates.”

“Yeah, right. I wasn’t thinking. Are… are we prepared to do whatever it takes?” Tobyn’s voice stumbled over the question, and Kellar knew he was reliving what he’d been forced to do with the old Reznick.

“We have to be. It’s not like we can take him to the police or scare him. These guys see killing shifters as their mission in life. I’ll never forget the old Reznick calling us were-scum.

“Me, neither. I remember everything he said, and I know what needs to be done.”

Tobyn’s sigh of resignation struck a chord in his mate. He would do his best to ensure it wasn’t Tobyn who dispatched this new threat to the pack. It was a subject they didn’t need to dwell on.

When Tobyn cleared his throat, Kellar saw his struggle to move away from the haunting memory. “You know, there’s the lake to the north, and the river to the south, so those might limit his access somewhat. Maybe we can pinpoint where he’s likely to enter pack lands… at least come up with a best guess.”

“That’s good thinking, babe. He has no idea we know his advantage—past advantage. Are there any places to cross the river?”

Tobyn smiled, and Kellar knew it was because of the endearment. “Not without a boat. Maybe in a dry year in the fall it could be forded, but even then it would be difficult. It’s not all that wide, but it’s deep.”

“That’s even better. What about any inroads. Are there any to the west, in back of pack grounds?”

“Nope. Just like your place, it’s all crown land. But, remember when we were at Eagle’s nest?”

“Yeah, of course I do,” Kellar said with a wiggle of his eyebrows, drawing a little laugh and a light punch in the arm from his mate.

“Well, then you know the river curves up toward the lake and eventually empties into it, so if he came in on crown land and tried to circle behind us, he’d still have to get across it. There was no canoe on that big truck, right?”

“No, but we can double check with Warren about what he saw. What about places to hide his vehicle and set up a base?”

“There are a few places I can think of, but at your place the truck was just off the highway and on the same side as where they set traps… you think that’s part of their modus operandi?” Tobyn asked with teasing eyeroll.

“Shut up, you. It’s a perfectly good description for their known methods. And yes, I believe a hunter would be most likely to stick with what works. He won’t want to be too far from his truck, and he’ll want it well concealed. He’ll want to be able to clear out in a hurry, so yeah, my guess is he’d want to be just off the highway and on our side if he can. Having to walk across a highway makes him vulnerable to exposure.”

“Jeez, have you done this before?”

“Nope, just plain old common sense. My ass is getting sore. Let’s call Miss Sybil and see if we can visit with her. I have some questions for the lady.”

 

“Come in, come in.” Miss Sybil pulled each of them to her for a hug and a kiss on the cheek as they entered. “Never a dull moment since you two found each other, is there?”

Kellar laughed. “No, ma’am. I guess a lot has happened in a short time.” He gripped Tobyn’s hand as they walked through to the sitting room and took their familiar places.

“So, what brings you to this old woman’s house on such a crazy day? My goodness, hunters have found us, and now your brother has given us a way to defend ourselves. Amazing… just amazing.” She fingered the copper strand around her neck and Kellar felt a jolt of sadness at her next words. “If only we knew of this years ago. So many precious lives might have been saved.”

He knew who she was thinking about, but said nothing. Tobyn wasn’t aware she’d found her mate only to lose him, and it was her story to tell. In that moment, though, he remembered her mention of a few stolen kisses, and realized her joining had probably been started. Even though it was never completed, the separation must have been excruciating. A deep ache for this tragic but incredible woman made itself known, and he silently thanked the earth mother for whose hand he held in his grip.

“Well? There must be a reason you picked today to visit.” Miss Sybil was back to the no-nonsense woman he admired, and her strength to carry on all these years took on a new significance.

“Ma’am, remember when you told me of a nest of hunters being dispatched about eighty years ago, just before the last conclave?” He hated bringing up something that might remind her of bad memories, but his curiosity demanded it.

“Yes, almost seventy-eight years ago now, dear. Is there something I can help you with?”

“I was wondering... do you know anything about it, specifically, like where it happened, and how they managed to get close enough to carry it out?”

“It was the talk of that get-together, so yes, I do remember some of the particulars. It’s rather difficult to forget the things I heard. I know the pack involved was from the Timmins area, and that they lost a few of their members. Some were killed by gunshot and some by stabbing. The survivors talked about how good the hunters were with knives, but even so, they still managed to take out five of those horrible creatures.”

“There were only five hunters killed?” Tobyn asked with eyebrows raised. “I thought there were more than that.”

“Stories do tend to get exaggerated over time, lad, but yes, only five, and it was believed at the time that three got away… two on horseback and one in a truck. There was some speculation there could have been another in the bed of the vehicle, but it was never for certain. You know how people talk.”

“Horseback?” Kellar asked.

“Yes, dear. Remember it was a different time. Most of us had horses back then. We had motor vehicles too, of course, but horses were more reliable for the north, and necessary for some things. Once they were used to the smell of us, they were quite comfortable. We don’t carry the same scent as feral wolves, as you well know.”

“Miss Sybil, do you have any idea how they snuck up on these guys?” Tobyn was fully engaged now, leaning forward in his seat, and Kellar was pleased he asked the right question.

“There was talk they were drinking, and let their guard down. We didn’t know about this advantage they had on us, but it was unusual we ever came across them. It was always hunters who found us, and now I know why.” Kellar watched the wheels turning through the sharp woman’s expression. “We shouldn’t have been able to sneak up on them because of the silver. That’s why you’re asking the questions, isn’t it?”

“Yes, ma’am,” Kellar answered.

“I’m sorry I can’t help you boys. That’s really all I know, other than the fact when shifters located them, they had the young man the pack had been searching for. He’d just had his first shift… those monsters had that poor soul strung up over a fire and they were getting ready to lower him. He survived, although he suffered some severe burns and a broken shoulder, but he was rescued from certain death, thank the earth mother.”

“That’s it!” Kellar exclaimed, jubilant at having an answer. “They would have thought their silver pulsing was because of that poor kid. It pulses the same whether there’s one of us or ten. I thought it might have been because they were in an area where there were a lot of copper deposits... Timmins is one those places... but it didn’t make sense because ore in the ground would not complete a circuit to protect a shifter from detection.” He looked from one surprised face to the other.

“Is he awesome, or what? I think I love your mind as much as… ah… never mind.” Tobyn turned a lovely shade of red, and Miss Sybil chortled with glee.

Kellar grinned at his mate. “It’s nice to be appreciated for all my attributes,” he teased, and the lady laughed harder.

She took her time regaining her composure. “Never be embarrassed by what you feel for your mate, dear boy,” she said kindly. “So, I was a help then? That’s wonderful.”

“You were a great help, Miss Sybil. Thank you. You just verified there are no holes in our new theory. Everything fits.”

“That’s my mate’s brain for you. I had no idea what we were here for,” Tobyn confessed.

Miss Sybil didn’t answer. She had suddenly stilled as she perched on the edge of her chair.

“Ma’am?” Kellar turned his head to Tobyn, whose eyes were glued to their hostess. Turning back, he saw her expression had changed to one of intense concentration, almost as if she was in pain. Suddenly, a serene smile lit her face and her eyes opened. “Miss Sybil, are you all right?”

“Oh, yes, I’m fine. That was interesting. I told you I’ve been getting these nudges, and this time I got a few in a row.”

“Why are you smiling?” Tobyn asked. “Did you have one of your visions?”

“Oh, ah, no, Tobyn, no. Just nudges like I said. Pictures and feelings that could be from the past or the future… nothing concrete, but I did get this burst of joy, and it had to do with you two. It may have already happened, and I felt your happiness, or it could be coming still.” She was still smiling as she looked from one to the other. “Sorry. It’s not much to go on, but it does feel good to have these flashes again. I might actually become of some use to Morningstar again.”

“I think I speak for the whole pack when I say you provide us with so much,” Tobyn assured her. “Your visions might have stopped for a while, but you’ve taken over the role of keeper. You have wisdom and a wealth of knowledge we need. Today is another example of that, so never think you don’t contribute. You’re like the grandmother of our pack who gives us answers when we need them.”

“Tobyn certainly speaks for me, ma’am. You helped me understand some stuff when I was kind of lost over what was happening to me after meeting my mate.”

Miss Sybil looked slightly embarrassed as she took in their words. “Thank you, boys. Whatever joy you get, you deserve. Something is happening with this pack... we can see our future again, and that is because you two came together. I have no doubt the earth mother sent you to us, Kellar, and provided you with the perfect mate to help us defeat the malaise. Now we need to worry about this hunter who affects our well-being for the moment. Do you have some sort of plan?”

Kellar eyed Tobyn before he answered. “Yes, ma’am, I guess we do. We’re going to be the ones hunting for a change. This person threatens our very existence and we can’t have that. His kind believes our kind has no place on this earth. He’s wrong, which means there can be no place for him. He needs to die. There is no other option.”

“Surely you boys aren’t going to take him on yourselves?” Miss Sybil’s face changed slowly, and before long, Kellar saw fear. Did she just get another nudge?

Tobyn calmly answered for them both. “The other members aren’t strong enough yet to face a hunter. We are, and we’ve already done it. Kellar has the strongest nose and hearing in the pack, and I’m not far behind. We need to find him before he does any damage, and before he figures out his advantage has been neutralized. And we can’t have anyone stumbling upon him, because these guys are deadly.”

“Oh, dear. You must be careful… I… you boys have already done so much and are so important to the pack. What if he…?”

“Ma’am, these men have had us cowering for a century or more. Fear has been our biggest downfall. He’s formidable, yes, but he’s just a man, albeit an evil one. We’ll be careful, but he’s not going to wait around if he knows shifters are near, so neither will we.” Kellar was speaking to her, but his attention was on his mate.

Tobyn nodded in agreement as he held his gaze.

“May the earth mother protect you both,” Miss Sybil whispered, and he couldn’t miss the tremble in her lowered voice. Tobyn, though, appeared not to hear it. It was understandable the woman would worry for them, and he wondered if maybe they should have kept what they were thinking to themselves. The last thing he wanted was to upset this special, warm-hearted lady.

Thanks, Tim, for all you do. Thank you to those who support my writing. Cheers.
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On 12/07/2016 12:16 PM, IBEX said:

I have a thing for shifters.... so you got me hooked easily with this wonderful tale!

If I only could talk to these guys! I would not let them out of my sight until they finish that joining! NO hunting hunters before...

And no, it's not sound reasoning to face the threat alone. There is strength and safety in numbers. In particular for pack animals! Even if it's only for making the remains dissappear!

Hey, IBEX! I'm glad you're hooked. :) . You have a good point. The fact is, the pack isn't as strong as it should be, and that's a problem Kellar and Tobyn are aware of. I think they're in the mindset...'It's a dirty job, but someone's got to do it,' and so many things could go wrong.

We'll keep our fingers crossed, right? Thanks so much for reviewing... it means a lot to me... cheers... Gary....

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Sorry it took me so long..
Stronger together..I want these guys to complete their joining so they are stronger against what they may face. Who knows what abilities will manifest in their favor..
I hadn't thought about it but since Ms Sybil is worried, I'm a little concerned..
Good chapter Gary.. Im moving on..

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On 12/12/2016 09:51 AM, Defiance19 said:

Sorry it took me so long..

Stronger together..I want these guys to complete their joining so they are stronger against what they may face. Who knows what abilities will manifest in their favor..

I hadn't thought about it but since Ms Sybil is worried, I'm a little concerned..

Good chapter Gary.. Im moving on..

No worries, Def. Yeah, joining would make them stronger for what they have to face. Ms Sybil's worry? Was it worry... or something more? Thanks, Def, for your constant support... cheers... Gary....

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I have to be careful while reviewing this chapter, because I've read the subsequent ones and I know how important Ms Sybil's nudges turned out to be - as well as the comments by several reviewers.
So I'll focus on the list of Business at Hand, which kept K&T from taking the planned trip to Kellar's cabin to complete the joining. It couldn't be helped, as every item was important:

  • ordering copper chains
  • warning the pack: Elinor does a superb job and it's nice to see it acknowledged
  • reminder to check the kids re pulsing of silver
  • discussing the hunter and his MO: 'know thy enemy' is very important !
  • discussing the lay of the land and how to spot him or his traps
  • talking to Miss Sybil to test the silver/copper theory


The other matter suffusing every part of this chapter is the MO of earth mates:

  • helping each other
  • teasing each other
  • supporting each other
  • needing each other
  • trusting each other


The banter of Kellar and Tobyn is fun, especially when Tobyn distracts Kellar completely, but the important aspect is how they are in synch and bounce ideas and thoughts and emotions back and forth in a way which brings them to greater understanding.
This earth mate Modus operandi has been missing from all the pack for far too long, and I think Elinor and Sybil are right when they say the Earth Mother has given them Kellar and Tobyn as a final and best effort to break the viscious circle.

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On 12/25/2016 11:11 PM, Timothy M. said:

I have to be careful while reviewing this chapter, because I've read the subsequent ones and I know how important Ms Sybil's nudges turned out to be - as well as the comments by several reviewers.

So I'll focus on the list of Business at Hand, which kept K&T from taking the planned trip to Kellar's cabin to complete the joining. It couldn't be helped, as every item was important:

  • ordering copper chains
  • warning the pack: Elinor does a superb job and it's nice to see it acknowledged
  • reminder to check the kids re pulsing of silver
  • discussing the hunter and his MO: 'know thy enemy' is very important !
  • discussing the lay of the land and how to spot him or his traps
  • talking to Miss Sybil to test the silver/copper theory

The other matter suffusing every part of this chapter is the MO of earth mates:

  • helping each other
  • teasing each other
  • supporting each other
  • needing each other
  • trusting each other

The banter of Kellar and Tobyn is fun, especially when Tobyn distracts Kellar completely, but the important aspect is how they are in synch and bounce ideas and thoughts and emotions back and forth in a way which brings them to greater understanding.

This earth mate Modus operandi has been missing from all the pack for far too long, and I think Elinor and Sybil are right when they say the Earth Mother has given them Kellar and Tobyn as a final and best effort to break the viscious circle.

I really like that you bring up the teamwork, and how well they work together. These are dedicated men on a mission. It falls to them because it should. Going to the cabin will have to be put on the back burner for now. I love your lists... they're perfect. I think the boys are starting to realize their part in the big picture... thanks for a marvelous review, Tim. I believe you have covered it all beautifully :) cheers... Gary....

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Preparations for war.
I like Ms. Sybil. Those who sense things have always been great characters in fiction. Sometimes it's just your favorite grandma and her 'hunches', and sometimes it's someone with a real ability to get glimpses of the future. As a medium (heh) for alerting the reader to coming events, she is quite cool.
The resonance of the shifter's auras with silver, and the dampening effect provided by copper, is an interesting twist. You know your folklore, it seems.
Kellar and Tobyn are just great together. I get the feeling that they are going to be tested to the limits, and I am just hoping their combined strength is up to the task at hand. I do hope that we get more insights into the hunter's motivations. They obviously think of shifters the same way that shifters think of them. Good and evil are entirely relative.
You are doing wonderfully with this one. Back for more soon!

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On 01/20/2017 08:28 AM, Geron Kees said:

Preparations for war.

I like Ms. Sybil. Those who sense things have always been great characters in fiction. Sometimes it's just your favorite grandma and her 'hunches', and sometimes it's someone with a real ability to get glimpses of the future. As a medium (heh) for alerting the reader to coming events, she is quite cool.

The resonance of the shifter's auras with silver, and the dampening effect provided by copper, is an interesting twist. You know your folklore, it seems.

Kellar and Tobyn are just great together. I get the feeling that they are going to be tested to the limits, and I am just hoping their combined strength is up to the task at hand. I do hope that we get more insights into the hunter's motivations. They obviously think of shifters the same way that shifters think of them. Good and evil are entirely relative.

You are doing wonderfully with this one. Back for more soon!

Exactly. Preparations. Miss Sybil is a favorite character of mine to write, so what you say about her means much to me. As far as the silver and copper, I did some research, but I did work much out in my head... surprised myself to be honest :) . Yes, Kellar and Tobyn face a huge challenge, but that's all I can really say... I hope you like what's coming, buddy... thanks for your support and encouraging words... cheers... Gary....

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Silver copper was a great idea and explains a lot. I hope Keller and Tobyn are careful with there plans for taking the hunter out. He has been doing these killings longer then they have. Oh btw I hope it hurts a lot when they get him. 

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It amazes me what my mind comes up with :) . I'm pleased you liked the copper/silver explanation... this story is all about being connected to the earth mother... and all her elements. I think Kellar and Tobyn will be as careful as they think they need to be... you just never know... so glad you are continuing the journey, and I thank you for it... cheers... Gary....

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Ok do not laugh, but my boyfriend just reminded me I have work tomorrow. I was off today. I have been giving him brief synopsis of each chapter (He is NOT a reader LOL), and he is enjoying it as well. He thought someone in the pack was a traitor … I am really trying to finish this though tonight. So maybe I can or not, but I know it will be on my mind all day lol. BTW, their lovemaking scene was brilliant!

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31 minutes ago, patrick1991 said:

Ok do not laugh, but my boyfriend just reminded me I have work tomorrow. I was off today. I have been giving him brief synopsis of each chapter (He is NOT a reader LOL), and he is enjoying it as well. He thought someone in the pack was a traitor … I am really trying to finish this though tonight. So maybe I can or not, but I know it will be on my mind all day lol. BTW, their lovemaking scene was brilliant!

Oh, that's awesome that he is enjoying it through you. Tell him I said thanks :) . Don't push yourself too hard... there is always tomorrow after work ;) . Thanks for thinking the lovemaking scene brilliant... I love hearing that... I'm reliving the story as you read through it... much appreciated, as are the comments... cheers... Gary....

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Vermin extermination plans are coming along nicely, but some of your readers have a good point about the strategic advantage of further joining. :P  Any excuse to get some of your heady mix of sex and romance. ;)  Even dughlas can't help taking a peek while :blushing: 

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This was a very enjoyable chapter. Things are coming into focus. I just love Miss Sybil I always enjoy our visits with her:yes: And danger on the horizon. Perfect.

 

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On 1/23/2018 at 6:09 PM, Timothy M. said:

Vermin extermination plans are coming along nicely, but some of your readers have a good point about the strategic advantage of further joining. :P  Any excuse to get some of your heady mix of sex and romance. ;)  Even dughlas can't help taking a peek while :blushing: 

LOL... It's an honor that dugh will peek occasionally through his fingers. :) Sorry, Tim, but I just found this comment now. They have a tentative plan, but we'll see what the future holds soon enough. Anytime I get to write Miss Sybil, I'm a happy man. There is something about that woman.... Yes, there would be certain advantages to further joining, but they have a tentative plan for that too... in the future. Thanks for the wonderful comment... heady mix... love that! Cheers, my friend... Gary.... 

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4 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

This was a very enjoyable chapter. Things are coming into focus. I just love Miss Sybil I always enjoy our visits with her:yes: And danger on the horizon. Perfect.

 

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Thanks, Albert. I agree about Miss Sybil. As I just said to Tim in my reply of his comment, there is something about her I love. Are things coming into focus? We'll see. :)  And I'll take the 'Perfect' any day. :D  Cheers, buddy... Gary....

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4 minutes ago, watcher said:

Outstanding story.

 

Charles 

Thank you so much, Charles! This story was over a year and a half of work, but it was a labor of love. I'm truly proud of how it turned out, and it means a lot to get good feedback like this. Hold onto you hat, because there's a lot more to come. :D  Let me know how you like the developments if you can... cheers, my friend... Gary....

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Good to see that the Shifters are getting armed to protect themselves. They'll be able to avoid being detected until the more permanent copper chains arrive. Plus they are getting enough protection to keep a few groups safe. 

Miss Sybil really brought out the full brutality of the Hunters torture and killing spree. They actually burnt their victims alive. Worse still, this was just young lad who had just shifted, so was probably 16 or under before they half burnt him. More than enough motivation to kill Reznick, if ever it was needed.

We now know that the Silver appears to give the Hunters the same signal, for one or more Shifters nearby. They can use this to their advantage and trick the Hunter into thinking he is dealing with just one Shifter, and then ambush him with others. They could always lure him to where they'd set up their own death trap. Get their own sniper at the ready. There are lots of options here.

 

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11 hours ago, Bard Simpson said:

Good to see that the Shifters are getting armed to protect themselves. They'll be able to avoid being detected until the more permanent copper chains arrive. Plus they are getting enough protection to keep a few groups safe. 

Miss Sybil really brought out the full brutality of the Hunters torture and killing spree. They actually burnt their victims alive. Worse still, this was just young lad who had just shifted, so was probably 16 or under before they half burnt him. More than enough motivation to kill Reznick, if ever it was needed.

We now know that the Silver appears to give the Hunters the same signal, for one or more Shifters nearby. They can use this to their advantage and trick the Hunter into thinking he is dealing with just one Shifter, and then ambush him with others. They could always lure him to where they'd set up their own death trap. Get their own sniper at the ready. There are lots of options here.

 

The pack is on full alert now, and with the copper thay are much safer than they would have been, that's for sure. 

Miss Sybil is one of my favorite characters to write of all time. I can picture her so clearly to this day. Her story is a  sad one, and the fact she was able to overcome her loss and still be there for her pack shows us how strong the woman is. 

Unfortunately, in the deeps woods of the north, there are not as many options as we might think. These hunters are expert killing machines, their craft honed over years. I'm sure one little noise would put them on high alert, so any plan would have certain perils. 

I ca see you're starting to worry for our young heroes... are they biting off too much? Time will tell... time will tell. 

Thanks, Bard. I am truly enjoying rereading the chapters along with you, which is why it takes me a while to reply... well... that and the fact my grandaughter came for a visit. :) Cheers... Gary....

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Oh no I have a feeling that Sybil saw something she couldn't share or it's just me being paranoid. Ugh this Hunter is truly the bane of my existence at this moment. I am eager– extremely eager for them to get rid of him. Sybil as always is a very intelligent woman and glad she always nudge them to the right direction. And yeah may the earth mother protect our boys. 

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1 hour ago, Jasmine94 said:

Oh no I have a feeling that Sybil saw something she couldn't share or it's just me being paranoid. Ugh this Hunter is truly the bane of my existence at this moment. I am eager– extremely eager for them to get rid of him. Sybil as always is a very intelligent woman and glad she always nudge them to the right direction. And yeah may the earth mother protect our boys. 

She does seem disturbed by something, doesn't she? The thing is, she is only getting nudges, and really can't tell much as yet. It appears the boys are going to search out the hunter alone. That is scary indeed. We'll have to wait and see. :huh: 

God bless these boys... and may the earth mother have their back. :hug: 

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I love any chapter with Miss Sybil in it❤️❤️❤️

And Wow you do such a great job with old lady's:yes:

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51 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

I love any chapter with Miss Sybil in it❤️❤️❤️

And Wow you do such a great job with old lady's:yes:

Lol. Thanks, Albert. I do seem to have a fondness for 'old' ladies. I love any chapter with Miss Sybil in it. And, I could feel the tension building throughout this one. :)  :hug:  

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Please let them finish their joining to make them stronger to get rid of the hunter(s)! I wish the hunters would leave them alone cause all they want is the same kind of life as humans, (a earth mate, family and children)! But even these kind of stories don't have some happy things happen, just like human lives don't! 

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1 hour ago, Story Reader said:

Please let them finish their joining to make them stronger to get rid of the hunter(s)! I wish the hunters would leave them alone cause all they want is the same kind of life as humans, (a earth mate, family and children)! But even these kind of stories don't have some happy things happen, just like human lives don't! 

Shifters are good people... they do no harm to anyone, but because they are different, they are targets for an evil, fanatical group of haters. Sound familiar? It's the world we live in. As far as the joining, that's up to Kellar and Tobyn. :)  Cheers, my friend. :hug:  

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