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On Your Knees, Boy

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MichaelS36

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I, dressed only in black denims and boots

Watch you strip down to nothing

You are always unclothed, baring all to me

For you belong to me, you are mine

 

You stand at room’s centre, in submission

Rising for my chair I circle you, gaze at you

When my hand caresses your back you flinch

The skin there still soft, unscarred, sweet

 

You utter no sound as I walk around you

I want you, desire you, control you

My own manhood, hard, wanting

And I could take you, but I too must wait

 

I take your hand and pass it over my hardness

No sound from you, but I see you swallow

“Control it, boy,” I whisper

As your own member betrays you

 

You breathe deeply in your concentration

In your scramble for control of your body

“On your knees, boy. Eyes on me.”

You gaze up at me as you comply

 

I retake my seat as you kneel

There is disappointment in your eyes

You will learn patience, control

And learn I know what’s best

 

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Mike, your words bring this scene to life with perfect clarity. 

Nicely done. :) 

 

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Controlling the interactions with a look, a touch, a simple command. Words are hardly necessary. You own the moment. You demonstrate how the passage of time is important, for both of you. And with it, your boy's patience, concentration, compliance. You've written a compelling piece, Mike. Thanks.

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On ‎7‎/‎16‎/‎2017 at 10:36 PM, mogwhy said:

wow. i've read 3 love poems today (JIMHO) and all were different in flavor but all left me saying wow

Thank you moggy. I'll take wow, anytime. 

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On ‎7‎/‎16‎/‎2017 at 10:36 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Wonderful, Michael, Sir

Thank you, boy.

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 1:36 AM, Lyssa said:

I knew there were more than one song to sing inside you. Great! XO A.

Perhaps, but you do not want me to sing! Thank you, A xo

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 2:37 AM, BlindAmbition said:

The intricate dance of power, control, desire, release and ultimate completeness of two souls. A need and feeling beyond anything.

thank you, my boy. it is a dance of sorts - a most satisfying one. 

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 3:29 AM, Caz Pedroso said:

Very well written

Thank you very much Caz. 

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 6:23 AM, Kitt said:

An insight to the D/s dynamic. Lovely work.

Thank you very much Kitt. It's interesting to write it. 

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 8:21 AM, clochette said:

Great writing, very intense and powerful.

I appreciate that very much, clochette. 

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 8:47 AM, Defiance19 said:

So, maybe a poet yet?  This was very well expressed Mike. Well done. 

Lol, Def. I am not so sure about that. But on this topic, I feel somewhat inspired. Thank you. 

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 0:45 PM, Reader1810 said:

Mike, your words bring this scene to life with perfect clarity. 

Nicely done. :) 

 

Reader, thank you very much !

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On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 4:34 PM, MacGreg said:

Controlling the interactions with a look, a touch, a simple command. Words are hardly necessary. You own the moment. You demonstrate how the passage of time is important, for both of you. And with it, your boy's patience, concentration, compliance. You've written a compelling piece, Mike. Thanks.

Thank you for your comments, Mac. It's wonderful when you get to that place but, someone or something new is good too!.. 

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2 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Thank you for your comments, Mac. It's wonderful when you get to that place but, someone or something new is good too!.. 

This is true!

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36 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Perhaps, but you do not want me to sing! Thank you, A xo

Why shouldn`t I? XO A

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7 minutes ago, Lyssa said:

Why shouldn`t I? XO A

I'm not a choir boy anymore. LOL 

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Just now, MichaelS36 said:

I'm not a choir boy anymore. LOL 

LOL Thought you were more a basso profondo.

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1 minute ago, Lyssa said:

LOL Thought you were more a basso profondo.

Yes but very out of tune. 

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