Dom Luka's stories

[Drewbie]

I love the story Dessert Dropping keep up the good work.

[Myr]

Chapter 7 is up.

[dkstories]

Damn you Dom, Damn YOU! How dare you write such a damn good chapter that had me squirming in my seat!

 

I especially loved the ending.

[ethan thorn]

Great chapter cant wait till the next.

[JotaJota31]

Incredibly good chapter. Quinn's life is changing, hopefully for the better? The emotional upheaval in this character is incredible, because you write it so eloquently. Can't wait for more!

 

JJ

[Umbathri]

Of course his life is going to get better. You dont actually think that rumor is true that Quinn is going to blow his brains out in chapter 14 do you? I didnt belive it for a second!

 

btw at least one person loved the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 6. Will he throw a fit or will he jump into Jude's arms? or both and in what order? the end of 7 was almost as good.

 

 

~Umbathri

the bearer of the mask

[NaperVic]

Quinn's going to WHAT in chapter 14????

 

Where's my inhaler? I need to sit down....

 

Vic :wacko:

[DomLuka]

Thanks guys! I

[dkstories]

Thanks guys! I

[Myr]

Geesh Dom! What is with you and these cliffhanger endings? (ducks rotten fruit) Okay... I've written them before too... but still...

[dkstories]

That's it! I'm rewriting everything to have a cliffhanger ending just for Dom to feel the frustration.

[Myr]

Chapter 8 is now posted...

[DomLuka]

Thanks for posting Myr!

 

Fed up with cliffhangers, huh? Well...there are still a few more with breaks in between. Hope you enjoy.

Smiles, Dom

[boy on a string]

I thought you added chapter 6 to DD. But I can't find it.

 

Really like your story so far. The grandmother is a riot ... and very realistic. Makes me have to ask ... is she based off your own grandmother?

 

Boy on a String

 

[dkstories]

ACK! Another chapter to read after a big argument with grandma about her addiction to her pain pills...just what I needed!

[Phoenix78]

Great chapter Dom! Can't wait until the next one!

[ethan thorn]

Another great one.

[Myr]

The Log Way chapter 25 is now up.

[DomLuka]

I thought you added chapter 6 to DD.  But I can't find it.

 

Really like your story so far.  The grandmother is a riot ... and very realistic.  Makes me have to ask ... is she based off your own grandmother?

 

Boy on a String

 

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Nope, only 5 chapters so far. I

[Lor83b]

I love your stories.

Just read The Log Way chapter 25 and I loved it. However, these CLIFFHANGERS ARE KILLING ME . Can't wait to read what Aidan is going to do about his mother and Owen. And what did Dennis do when he was younger for his parents to go all psycho on him?

 

Edited March 5, 2005 by Lor83b

[ethan thorn]

You left it right there you bloody git.

 

 

Great chapter anyway dom.

[Jay]

Dom, you write some of the best sories on the net. I'm loving them all but these cliff hangers are evil.

[Umbathri]

Bah stop your cliffhanger WHINING! As Martha would say.. Its a good thing

[DomLuka]

Hey guys,

So, I

[dkstories]

Dom, I think you were spot on with the councillor character. While the majority are NOT like him, they are out there spewing their crap. Don't believe it? Just go to http://www.narth.com/index.html. You'll find plenty of lies, half-truths, and mistortions for your fill, all given my psychologists who put their faith before science. I've even gone on a few 'rescue runs' over the years, and got involved in a big court case to help a minor who'd a) been thrown out, and then kidnapped by the authority of the parents and sent off to one of these centers.

 

They like to say that they only take clients who WANT what they offer, but the trugh is in the case of minors, they have decided that if its what the parents want, the child's wishes are immaterial. The smart religious parent these days does not kick their kick their kid out of the house as long as they are under eighteen. They contact some people like the above and have the child committed to the hospital under the care of one of these type of people.

 

Unless the minor has the ability to call for help, and knows who to call for help, they have VERY little recourse until they turn eighteen, at which point a refusal of service gets them out of the care clinic. Give someone like me a call, and the ACLU and a few other organizations I know people in will start looking into the situation.

 

Depending on the state, there might not be much anyone could do. Some states have more leeway than others. The best news is if the transportation from home to the clinic was across state laws. At that point the case moves to Federal Court where children are usually recognized with more rights than most state court.

 

OH, and Dom, still waiting!