Drewbie Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 I voted to soon as well......Never trust a goat. Link to comment
GaryK Posted June 15, 2008 Author Share Posted June 15, 2008 I voted to soon as well......Never trust a goat. I really felt the need to vote yes, but we all know the goat is a master of deception and misdirection! Keep the spit flames roaring Drew cause we still might be having a goat roast on Monday evening. Link to comment
MikeL Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 It has to be "to soon to say". It had better be that something is missing. Link to comment
Puppster Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 I voted yes, I know ya'll hate me for that, but, it seems as if CJ has absolutely no love for the boys anymore. I'm sure Dimitri will end up dead, but only at the hands of the Scar as a means to tie all lose ends up. Link to comment
GaryK Posted June 15, 2008 Author Share Posted June 15, 2008 I voted yes, I know ya'll hate me for that, but, it seems as if CJ has absolutely no love for the boys anymore. I'm sure Dimitri will end up dead, but only at the hands of the Scar as a means to tie all lose ends up. I don't hate you for that. I long ago suggested that Instinct was merely a sub-plot to the main event: Scar's nuclear ambitions, and that eventually Instinct would be disposable. One only has to look at the prologue to realize that Scar will be the ultimate focus of the story. There was no mention made at all of Instinct in the prologue. Having said that, I have to give the goat the benefit of the doubt for now only because he is known for his deception and misdirection. We don't absolutely know for certain that anyone is dead, just that apparently everyone has been shot or knifed. Link to comment
jkeeling Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 I don't hate you for that. I long ago suggested that Instinct was merely a sub-plot to the main event: Scar's nuclear ambitions, and that eventually Instinct would be disposable. One only has to look at the prologue to realize that Scar will be the ultimate focus of the story. There was no mention made at all of Instinct in the prologue. Having said that, I have to give the goat the benefit of the doubt for now only because he is known for his deception and misdirection. We don't absolutely know for certain that anyone is dead, just that apparently everyone has been shot or knifed. This is true but it would be difficult to survive a shotgun blast that close even with a bullet proof vest on wouldn't it. Did he even describe what the guys were wearing? Link to comment
C James Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 This is true but it would be difficult to survive a shotgun blast that close even with a bullet proof vest on wouldn't it. Did he even describe what the guys were wearing? No bullet-proof vests... They are in T-shirts and jeans. However, I'll give one little hint; read the four paragraphs closely. All might not be as y'all assume. Link to comment
GaryK Posted June 15, 2008 Author Share Posted June 15, 2008 No bullet-proof vests... They are in T-shirts and jeans. However, I'll give one little hint; read the four paragraphs closely. All might not be as y'all assume. I'm shocked. Shocked I tell you that you even have the nerve to show up in this thread. Go back to your cliff and keep in mind the fire for the BBQ is burning brightly. Link to comment
rbenn5 Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 I am bringing the rice and the curry powder. it will flavor the goat meat Link to comment
Phantom Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 :Sigh: I'm so upset by the last 4 paragraphs... I just can't think anymore about this... You nasty old goat... better redeem yourself cus I really wanna get a BBQ ready just for you cus well when I get sad I eat... and im in the mood for goat Link to comment
rknapp Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 It's definitely too soon to tell. It may look like the end of Instinct is there, but remember that no mention was made of Dimitri knowing about the lookouts on the Jacobs ranch. The bikers could have started taking up positions around the house as soon as the officer on the front porch was knifed. That said, one could be zoning in on Dimitri and could shoot him while Dimitri is focused on Brandon's shotgun being pointed at Eric. Further, if done correctly a shot from a high caliber rifle could be well muffled by the house as it pierce a window and blows Dimitri's head to smithereens. The effect of which would douse Chase in blood, but spare him from being turned into a pez dispenser and eliminate the possibility of Brandon shooting Eric. This is all speculation, of course. I have speculated a lot in this story and I have been wrong many times. What may be certain is that, unless the bikers know first-aid (very possible since they are out-laws and get injured a lot, but avoid hospitals like they were sport bikes) and can stop Helen from bleeding while awaiting the paramedics, she's done for. I don't think we know enough about Jon's injury to speculate where he'll be in the morning (hospital bed or morgue). Having said that, there might be a chance that Jon will be the hero. He might not be injured enough to be down for the count. Link to comment
MikeL Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 The effect of which would douse Chase in blood, but spare him from being turned into a pez dispenser and eliminate the possibility of Brandon shooting Eric. Pez dispenser? Good one. I hadn't expected any humor to come from this wretched scene. Link to comment
jkeeling Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 No bullet-proof vests... They are in T-shirts and jeans. However, I'll give one little hint; read the four paragraphs closely. All might not be as y'all assume. I stick to my guns on there being no such thing as single sentence paragraphs. Your bad bad bad. Im still waiting on Graeme to loan me those spines to keep CJ imobilized for the tenderization and BBQ'ing. Link to comment
Site Administrator Graeme Posted June 16, 2008 Site Administrator Share Posted June 16, 2008 I stick to my guns on there being no such thing as single sentence paragraphs. Your bad bad bad. Im still waiting on Graeme to loan me those spines to keep CJ imobilized for the tenderization and BBQ'ing. Oh, okay. Since you asked so nicely. I'll email some to you now.... :mace: Link to comment
C James Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 I stick to my guns on there being no such thing as single sentence paragraphs. Your bad bad bad. Im still waiting on Graeme to loan me those spines to keep CJ imobilized for the tenderization and BBQ'ing. AACKK!!! Now, now, let's not be hasty!!! If you BBQ me, I can't post Ch 44 and you'll never know what happened!! Oh, okay. Since you asked so nicely. I'll email some to you now.... :mace: AAAAACCCKKK!!! E Tu Echidna?!?!!? Oh no! Not the spines! Not the spines!!!! I think I'll go hide now... Link to comment
Benji Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 AACKK!!! Now, now, let's not be hasty!!! If you BBQ me, I can't post Ch 44 and you'll never know what happened!! AAAAACCCKKK!!! E Tu Echidna?!?!!? Oh no! Not the spines! Not the spines!!!! I think I'll go hide now... ........See the mess you created for yourself goat? I voted no, I mean what kind of sequel would there be if the band dies?? Link to comment
shadowgod Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 AACKK!!! Now, now, let's not be hasty!!! If you BBQ me, I can't post Ch 44 and you'll never know what happened!! AAAAACCCKKK!!! E Tu Echidna?!?!!? Oh no! Not the spines! Not the spines!!!! I think I'll go hide now... He may not be able to, but I may know of a couple of people who could piece together what he has and get it edited and out for public display. Heck I can even arrange to have the announcement look like it came from CJ. roast Goat anyone? Link to comment
Benji Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 He may not be able to, but I may know of a couple of people who could piece together what he has and get it edited and out for public display. Heck I can even arrange to have the announcement look like it came from CJ. roast Goat anyone? ...........Hell, just burn him in effigy for those "paragraphs" Link to comment
rknapp Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 ...........Hell, just burn him in effigy for those "paragraphs" Technically, a paragraph consists of several sentences, but CJ is right in that a change in subject or idea requires a new paragraph, particularly when writing a story and a quick-paced event such as this is occurring... quite a quandary, eh? Are they, or are they not paragraphs? Methinks we need another poll! Link to comment
Benji Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Technically, a paragraph consists of several sentences, but CJ is right in that a change in subject or idea requires a new paragraph, particularly when writing a story and a quick-paced event such as this is occurring... quite a quandary, eh? Are they, or are they not paragraphs? Methinks we need another poll! .......Hell with the polls, get me a flamethrower!!! Link to comment
Tiger Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 My vote is for too soon to tell. CJ, along with being The King of Evil Cliffhangers, is a master of misdirection. Thus, we could have it all wrong. Link to comment
MikeL Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Technically, a paragraph consists of several sentences, but CJ is right in that a change in subject or idea requires a new paragraph, particularly when writing a story and a quick-paced event such as this is occurring... quite a quandary, eh? Are they, or are they not paragraphs? Methinks we need another poll! I hereby challenge CJ to write a one-sentence cliffhanger. Link to comment
Phantom Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 I hereby challenge CJ to write a one-sentence cliffhanger. Let's not tempt the Goat shall we Link to comment
jkeeling Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 I like the idea of a poll about one sentence paragraphs. lol Link to comment
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