Listen to Your Heart by Dolores Esteban

[Graeme]

Listen to Your Heart by Dolores Esteban

 

Jeremy is torn between two lovers. Eric listens to his story.

 

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Procyon]

This was a lovely and happy story, even though nothing happened with Matthew in the end. Thanks for posting. I liked Jeremy and Elisabeth's friendship, and you managed to make the 19th century setting plausible.

[Graeme]

Thanks, Dolores, for a wonderful story. Elisabeth is one in a million and I hope her husband truly appreciates her.

 

What struck me most was Jeremy's letter ending the engagement. It rings very true, because practically all of the married gay men that I know of do love their wives and want them to be happy.

 

Congratulations! I really enjoyed this tale

[AFriendlyFace]

That was an excellent story

 

I'm so glad that everything worked out so well for everyone involved and I do hope that Eric and Jeremy enjoy their night at the theatre

 

-Kevin

[Dolores Esteban]

Many thanks for reading my story. I appreciate your kind comments and I feel glad you liked the story.

 

Many thanks again to David McLeod for editing and encouragement. David's comments on punctuation, grammar and flow improved the story.

 

 

Thanks all!

 

Dolores

[Linxe Termoil]

Was a wonderful story. I could see the images in my head of the meetings and conversations taking place. I almost feel that though they weren't the bestest of friends, that if they wanted too they could indeed find love, having an open communication from the start. Was definitely a good read.

 

 

Jon

[AFriendlyFace]

Was a wonderful story. I could see the images in my head of the meetings and conversations taking place. I almost feel that though they weren't the bestest of friends, that if they wanted too they could indeed find love, having an open communication from the start. Was definitely a good read.

 

 

Jon

 

I agree. They did seem to connect in an immediate, direct way which definitely puts me in mind of a sort of "kindred spirits" bond.

[jfalkon]

Beautiful story. I could really picture the cold morning and the unexpected encouter. It was sweat and the ending was pleasant. There were a few places where the dialoge seemed a little modern to me but I'm no expert. Overall it was an excelent story

[Dolores Esteban]

Many thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

 

Dolores

[Sir Galahad]

I have to agree with everyone, excellent story. I'm sure that will be an enlightening trip to the theater!