sat8997 Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 I've got an even better scene than that. <snaugh> I'll say. Link to comment
paya Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 <snaugh> I'll say. So hurry up, Mark! POST IT! ;-D Link to comment
Rad Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 Oh...wow, Mark. I've read your story "If It Fits" but this is the first time I put a message in the forum. IIT blew me away. The story, the interaction between the characters, etc. Bloodlines too! I was delighted at the beginning of the story. Hot guys playing sports! I was wondering why you named the story Bloodlines. Now I understand why. But it suck to be Matt! Young, athletic, handsome and about to be crippled... I hope you are not going to let him waste away. BTW, what is the deal with Cam? I'll be waiting for the next chapter Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted September 6, 2009 Author Share Posted September 6, 2009 Oh...wow, Mark. I've read your story "If It Fits" but this is the first time I put a message in the forum. IIT blew me away. The story, the interaction between the characters, etc. Bloodlines too! I was delighted at the beginning of the story. Hot guys playing sports! I was wondering why you named the story Bloodlines. Now I understand why. But it suck to be Matt! Young, athletic, handsome and about to be crippled... I hope you are not going to let him waste away. BTW, what is the deal with Cam? I'll be waiting for the next chapter Thanks! Hang in there. More chapters coming soon. Link to comment
Rad Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 Thanks! Hang in there. More chapters coming soon. I'm hanging by a thread... :wacko: Gimme more chapters! I'm addicted! Link to comment
KJames Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 I'm hanging by a thread... Gimme more chapters! I'm addicted! Boy, Rad, it didn't take you long at all... If you really want to, and if you get into Mark's storytelling style, go onto his sub-web here and read the entire CAP series, it's presented in order of writing chronologically, so don't worry about getting messed up. Link to comment
amBIguoustwo Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 Mark, Unbelievable, but each story is better than the one before. The first chapter grabbed me by the balls and the story just won't let go. I've been waiting for hockey to finally show up in a story and I hope it continues. As always, thanks for sharing your writing. Bryan Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted September 8, 2009 Author Share Posted September 8, 2009 I'm glad you're enjoying it. Chapter 3 is up now! Link to comment
Mark M Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 OH REALLY WHERE?!?!?! I NEED TO FIND IT NOW!!! I"M SO EXITED! Link to comment
Mark M Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 so exciting....rather a short chapter but excited!! love ya mark it's an awesome Read....Ohio....who do we know in ohio state??? Clarmont? uh oh....if it's BITTY or JP's Mom....who is dead....so lets rule that out....but if it's BITTY or.....i don't even know! then there will be hell to pay Whens next chapteR? Link to comment
paya Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 so exciting....rather a short chapter but excited!! love ya mark it's an awesome Read....Ohio....who do we know in ohio state??? Clarmont? uh oh....if it's BITTY or JP's Mom....who is dead....so lets rule that out....but if it's BITTY or.....i don't even know! then there will be hell to pay Whens next chapteR? eaaasy! Bitty's dead as well. nice chapter... sort of "finish off intro" chapter but it was necessary... yeah and probably a small typo - but the watch is "Tag HeuEr" one E missing there (without it, it's sort of difficult to pronounce that correctly) - and damn! what a good watch! :-) Link to comment
mikelivrpl Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 As always, really enjoying a continuation of the CAP series. I've decided not to speculate about Matt's blood parents as I'd rather leave it up to Mark to let us know what is in his "twisted" mind LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment
Rad Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Oh wow! Mission: Get F*cked Status : Accomplished Mark, I soo like this chapter. Then again, I like all of the chapters so far Too bad that Matt doesn't love Cam back Ah well, I hope you will arrange so that Cam will get someone Hmmm....in Ohio huh? Matt's biological mum. Things are getting interesting. Hehehehe It's very amusing to see how Matt goes from top jock to active bottom, I can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment
Conner Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 I don't think Matt's biological mother is anyone we know. I'm betting she's the woman Robbie bedded. Of course, Matt will still have to go through her to get to Robbie. She'll tell Matt about Robbie because of his kidney situation and Matt will track him down. Brad's an outside chance in all this. He slept with woman as well. We'll see I guess. I haven't done any of the math here. Too lazy! Poor Cam has a broken heart. Probably the first of many. But you never know. He and Matt could re-meet somewhere later in the story. Bit of a long shot, though. I'm anxious to see Robbie's reaction. Brad's too! Fantastic chapter, Mark! Link to comment
paya Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 I'm anxious to see Robbie's reaction. Brad's too! Fantastic chapter, Mark! :worship: Yeah! Can't wait till we get to CA! Link to comment
Tiger Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Well, the Robbie connection is likely. Still, I wonder. Could it be something else we're overlooking, someone not so obvious? Expect the unexpected is what I've always been told. Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted September 8, 2009 Author Share Posted September 8, 2009 Chapter 4 has a few surprises. It will be up within the next 24 hours. Link to comment
methodwriter85 Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Poor Cam has a broken heart. Probably the first of many. But you never know. He and Matt could re-meet somewhere later in the story. Bit of a long shot, though. You're right about that. Matt's going to college out in California. And I dunno- if Matt doesn't feel it, he doesn't feel it, and I can't see that changing. Link to comment
Conner Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Chapter 4 has a few surprises. It will be up within the next 24 hours. This is what is called a "cliffhanger" post. It's only purpose is to cause the anxiety within us readers to swell beyond all proportion. I bet Mark is being paid by the manufacturers of "Red Bull", a drink laced with caffeine, so that we'll stand by our computers for the next 24 hours. We readers give you 12 hours only, Mark! :2hands: Link to comment
Conner Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Well, the Robbie connection is likely. Still, I wonder. Could it be something else we're overlooking, someone not so obvious? Expect the unexpected is what I've always been told. Expect the unexpected only when the the unexpected is suspected. Link to comment
KJames Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Well, the Robbie connection is likely. Still, I wonder. Could it be something else we're overlooking, someone not so obvious? Expect the unexpected is what I've always been told. Wasn't it mentioned in If It Fits that JPs parents had a baby before they were ready which they gave up for adoption? Could this baby be Matt's grand-parent? If so, then would Matt be JP's 2nd cousin and Brad's 3rd? Mark Arbour's hint, and Paya's reminder, that Robbie mentioned getting it on with a woman could also be misleading... Link to comment
Rad Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Wasn't it mentioned in If It Fits that JPs parents had a baby before they were ready which they gave up for adoption? Could this baby be Matt's grand-parent? If so, then would Matt be JP's 2nd cousin and Brad's 3rd? Mark Arbour's hint, and Paya's reminder, that Robbie mentioned getting it on with a woman could also be misleading... Isn't that a bit of a long shot? I'd go for the Robbie-has-a-kid theory. Although at this stage I'd prefer to just stay back and let the story takes its course. Meaning, I don't want to make predictions and prefer to be surprised I wonder how dialysis will do to Matt's toned and ripped body I hope not bad tho Can't wait for the next 24 hours to pass by Link to comment
Mark M Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 anyway i'm saddened now....there's no more questions....we know alot of the history which is saddening now we just wait and see how it plots out. lol Link to comment
Mark Arbour Posted September 9, 2009 Author Share Posted September 9, 2009 anyway i'm saddened now....there's no more questions....we know alot of the history which is saddening now we just wait and see how it plots out. lol You have such little faith in me? You think I can't hold your interest? :king: Link to comment
Conner Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 There may not be as many questions, but there's still a lot of fun to come. Particularly having Matt meet Robbie...and the looks on Stef's and JP's faces are going to be priceless when they realize that they had sex with Robbie's son. That's going to be a hoot. Nice seeing Fred again, too! I love it when people don't go and change on you. You've set this all up nicely, Mark! Link to comment
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