Of The Flesh by Comicality

[Graeme]

Of The Flesh by Comicality

 

Haunted by the memory of someone I've never met.

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Graeme]

A great story, incorporating both major interpretations of the word 'Haunted' -- someone haunted by an idea (porn) and then haunted in the paranormal sense.

 

I didn't see the ending coming, but I loved it! Since I don't check out porn sites I'm safe, but what about the rest of you

 

Thanks, Comicality!

[Rilbur]

Fascinating, scary, incredible story.

 

Nice work!

[Cia]

Okay, I did see the end coming in some ways, but then I've read the Dark Hunter books by Sherrilyn Kenyon. Your portrayal of a person locked in an image just waiting to be freed by/for sexual gratification is one she used in her very first book in that series. Plus the images were just too 'convenient' to not have some sort of paranormal twist. I have to say you certainly have a way of making a story entirely about sex but making the message be so much more. I loved it.

[Kev de Cauchery]

So highly erotic but so freaking creepy at the same time...

 

 

 

[JohnD]

Excellent Comsie, I'm never gonna be able to look at porn again.....

 

.....well, maybe (hehe)

 

Great story, Thanks

[Comicality]

Hugz all around! Thank you so much! I never wrote a winter, X-mas, website porn, ghost sory before! ::giggles:: So I thought I'd giveit a try!

 

Now...if only I culd get the ol' dream factory to think up something for Spring!

[Mrtdust]

Hi everyone

 

maybe you can help i have been looking around on G,A and started to noitce thatther is different things under peoples name i.e G,A Hosted Author and so on what dose that mean dose it have some think to do with the amount of storie and rep ??

[Nephylim]

That literally made me shiver. I love the idea of images stealing your soul. i can see how it might. It freezes a moment in time, stops time if you will and stopping time is a dangerous thing to do. Shiver

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Fascinating. Absolutely Fascinating! Just the transformation from picture to physical being is just wow

 

Very sexually frank, good read

[C James]

That was quite a surprise at the end!

[JamesSavik]

Now that came from the dark side of the Twilight Zone.

[Kanaye]

Good job, Comicality. I was also not expecting that, although, when it happened, I'm like "Of course!"

 

Oh, and I'm safe, I read my porn instead of looking at pictures. *grins*

[Agincourt]

It seemed to me as though the setup for what happened was pretty clear, and knowing that the overall anthology theme had to do with being "haunted" . . . well, maybe I have just watched too many Twilight Zone episodes or something. Somehow I could see that the narrator was getting sucked into something that he might have second thoughts about, especially when the guy on the screen was seen smirking.

 

So, now the narrator is trapped in this world of perpetual sexual gratification? Could be worse, I suppose. And it sounds like what he needs to do is find a new web visitor who is turned on enough by the porn content to take his place eventually. It will be the narrator's turn to smirk in due course.

 

I could imagine some interesting stories where, instead of being swept into the web scene, the porn visitor literally became possessed while continuing to live in the outside world. Imagine what would happen if the web "demon" had a handful of possessed minions to do various deeds in the outside world . . .

 

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[Freddyness]

Neat, I love it. Is deep and you really feel the emotions.