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Ozymandias

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    Male
  • Sexuality
    Gay
  • Favorite Genres
    Romance
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    somewhere in "fly-over country"
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    children and grandchildren, cooking, reading, volunteer work, travel

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  1. Ozymandias

    Finding Warmth

    Good story, W-L. I think it is hard to develop a well-rounded picture of a character in a short story but I think I got a good idea of what makes Ben tick. That's good writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
  2. Ozymandias

    Chapter 1

    What a hoot! I loved every snarky word of this chapter. I hope Demented can sustain the atmosphere for a whole story because after this first chapter I'm hooked but good!
  3. Anal Sex + NO Condoms = too stupid to live! What a shame. They survive cancer only to die from venereal disease. --The Old Microbiologist
  4. Ozymandias

    The English Year

    I can understand why you had to take a break from the weekly time and effort necessary to produce a new chapter. What I can not understand is how you could simply abandon your readers, who after 34 chapters obviously had some personal investment in the story and deserved better from you. In lieu of chapter 35, could you not have published something like the explanation you just provided? I think your readers would have been supportive and wished you well and waited for the story to resume (well, I guess waiting faithfully for three years is a bit much to expect).
  5. Ozymandias

    Chapter 5

    Some days it just doesn't pay to get out of bed.
  6. Ozymandias

    Chapter 2

    I'm enjoying how the author has kept us in the dark about whether Gil is a man or a woman. Given that the story is in Gay Authors, i'd bet male.
  7. Ozymandias

    Lon Chapter 10

    How about putting a map of the entire station (if that's what it's called) in a future chapter. There have been so many buildings, paddocks, roads, etc. described by now that I have no mental image any more and feel like head is going to explode if you put in so much as a single fence post in a future chapter. Thanks in advance.
  8. Ozymandias

    UJ Chapter 1

    This chapter seems to be a good start for a story about two boys' adventures on the high (probably several meanings could apply to this word in this context) seas. That said, I am becoming increasing irritated by stories with word choice errors all over the place. The very first sentence of your story contains one! I nearly stopped reading right there. I assume that these idiocies are a result of your computer helpfully supplying a word it thinks you might want and you carelessly accepting it and moving on. You must proofread your chapters slowly and carefully so you can catch and cor
  9. Thanks for reacting to "I arrived a week early'. I'm curious to know whether your angry response was directed at me for the ideas of the characters,  or at the fate of the Numen.

    I called my first Siamese cat  Ozymandias , when he tore the curtains to shreds. It seemed apt after he glared at us with   slightly crossed blue eyes  that clearly said - "Look on my works, ye mighty and despair."

  10. Ozymandias

    Chapter 12

    I wish I had been a fly on the wall to witness George at his aristocratic best play that old fart for a fool with every sentence! What a gem you wrote in that exchange!
  11. Ozymandias

    Chapter 44

    It's great to see that you are well enough to resume writing new chapters of Black Widow. I'm always anxious to read more about my favorite completely dysfunctional family.
  12. Ozymandias

    Chapter 4

    I like the story but I was appalled that a supposedly smart guy like Davey would have unprotected sex with a man who just got out of prison. Even fictional people should not be shown as that dumb.
  13. Where can I find the listing of new chapters to existing stories that was on the right-hand side of the old format? Or is it no longer available?
  14. Ozymandias

    Chapter 35

    Great timing, Mark You gave me something that I could actually be thankful for today. I wonder who has the sword to cut through the horrific Gordian knot your plot has created. Welcome back to my favorite GS author!.
  15. It's a good thing for Toby that Simon was too incapacitated to punch his lights out. I look forward to the rapist ex-boyfriend getting what he deserves when Simon feels better. This is a great story, one of my favorites in fact, but the last several chapters have just made my blood boil - not good for my blood pressure, by the way - so I wish this situation would get resolved quickly. I suspect that it will take a lot of doing to get poor Simon back to physical and mental health, however.
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