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Adjustments and… Hazing?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Adjustments and… Hazing?
All I can say is that Carl would be in for a significant attitude adjustment once he picked himself up off the floor....- 61 comments
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Chapter 2: : Venice Beach
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: : Venice Beach
I'm pretty sure Flynn didn't teleport himself out of the car going 100 MPH...so...who did??? -
Chapter 2: : Venice Beach
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: : Venice Beach
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Why??? “I do,” he says, “but I can't be out, at least not now.” He looks up at me, and the vulnerability of his expression makes my heart burst with protective affection. “Can you be patient with me, please?” I’m not surprised, but having a DL relationship is better than nothing.
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It could not have happened to a better person, I weep not for that man... Wryyt's eyes weren't closed. They stared sightlessly at the ceiling, and equally frozen was the grimace upon the Darkurian's ugly face. The blood that pooled on the floor had already begun to clot. Renn collapsed before the wheel and wept. It was the bitter grief of a man who would never be whole again. Life as a proto eunuch is a fitting end for as long as he breathes...
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Well done and spot on!!! laughter chooses its own messengers, and the best ones never know they’ve been chosen.
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The feast was spectacular, and everyone cemented the bonds of family....TBH, I hope Daniel finds a love of his own; he deserves as much. I truly enjoyed the steps taken in preparing the pig; it brought back memories of pig roasts I helped with so long ago.
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Self-centered much and no passive-aggressive issues here....oh the fireworks to come...
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Hockey is something I would never cross the street for, but...knowing the author, I thought I'd give it a chance...and...so far...so good. And one other thought: to those calling out "also ran," what are their stats???
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First times are always instructional...
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Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
Both Tweek and Guy saved the day, with an assist from Doc and Mikkel, and Liam is a prat... disobeying a direct order.... -
We have a new story!!
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Group Synergy Exercise
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Group Synergy Exercise
A fantastic beginning, Rupe is an ass, he's sniffing money and is bound to be disappointed... Like @Summerabbacat, I misread a different word, Nunhead, and first thought it was Nonhead...what was I thinking??? -
Here I have to disagree with Shakespeare as to parting is such sweet sorrow....Part of me hopes that there is a path forward for the two of them....Hopefully, and most likely futilely, there are several chapters left. Would either of them ever fully be welcomed on either side of the river?
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This was the Christmas that both boys needed, along with the gift of the picture of the four of them at the restaurant labeled 'Family" had me reaching for my 'hay fever' tissues .... Later, when the worst of the heat had eased and most of the adults had drifted into the backyard with cold drinks, Jamie found Levi in the hallway. ‘This is the best Christmas I’ve ever had,’ Jamie said, very quietly, as if saying it too loud might break it. Levi didn’t try for anything clever. He just pulled the younger boy into a brief, firm hug. ‘Good,’ he said. ‘I think that’s the whole idea. And it’s the best Christmas I’ve ever had as well.’ I must have missed it, or at my state of age and decrepitude, what is the significance of the fuzzy die? Like others, Casey's disappearance is very troubling. He's a known sexual predator, a behavior that leads to unfulfilled desires and unfinished business...that his two cohorts seem to be troubled is equally bothersome...Perhaps the cricket bat should be a constant companion following the two boys... Other than that @Summerabbacat, how do you truly feel???
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I have to agree with the comments above, tho I suspect in a former life stingy jack was a lawyer... "I sent nothing that was not already within my gift to send," said he, and here his smile widened, though it touched nothing of warmth in doing so. "I promised you a companion, Jack, and a companion I gave you, freely and entire, exactly as you asked it. What he did with the gift once given was his own affair, and none of mine. I am a scrupulous man in the matter of my own word. You will find no fault in the letter of it, search as long as you please."
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Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
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Well...I was gonna post 14 stories for the anthology, and then...I woke up....
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I understand I may have been a bit harsh in my comment last week, and while I would like to blame it on sheer stupidity, which is usually the case with me. Having gotten back from a wonderful vacation and then a plane ride from hell, filled with tiny, crawling germ factories, I had a head cold from hell. It's been nearly 10 years. Along with the news that one of my closest friends since 1969 is losing a 5-year battle with lung cancer. I'm not using these as excuses; I know better than to temper my reactions in my comments. Yes, I can be harsh, but I try to be fair, and in the case of my comment last week, I totally missed the mark. For that, I can only offer the author my... What does Mia Culpa mean? If you’re in the habit of saying mia culpa or mia copa, I’ll say you may have been led astray. The correct phrase to use is always mea culpa in response to being shown your mistake. While mia might work if you’re speaking Italian and referring to my something, it’s not how the Romans owned up to their oopsie. I'm, along with the jury in my head, still processing these last two chapters, and will have a comment with the next. And for all of you smart asses folks out there who are wondering, yes...I still remember when dinosaurs roamed the streets of our neighborhood.
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Chapter 32 ~ Echoes in the Mind ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 32 ~ Echoes in the Mind ~
JR Ewing was played by a B-list actor whose claim to fame was starring in the television sitcom I Dream of Jeanie. He could have taken the role in Dallas or another sitcom called Waverly Wonders, which cast Joe Namath as the lead when Hagman played JR Ewing. An interesting note: his Mother was Mary Martin, a well-known and respected actress on Broadway...Waverly Wonders did not make it to a second season... This was, like all the others, an excellent chapter, and I feel Little Man is going to have a breakthrough soon!@!! -
Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
Your government at work making things better for all of us.... -
Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
Still loving this, and when do we see Tweek with the baseball cap??? Hopefully a Red Sox insignia....even tho they sucked last night -
Oh my goodness...there is hope if they both discuss the situations a bit further, at his age Dremakk may think he is out to pasture so to speak, losing a loved companion after so many years can not be easy, but Dremakk should ask himself, what would Varokk want for Dremakk in this situation?
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Gesi Ajai still walks free….that worries me….
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Gesi Ajai, the snake, still walks free, he needs to be carefully watched. The whole process was a masterpiece in unraveling this plot! Cant wait for that snake to meet his just rewards!!
