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And we are off with a whole new adventure and looking forward to it!

This looks to be quite a story, bring on the next chapter

Loved this chapter from beginning to end…all I got is…where’s the measurement? Flynn squeezed his hand. "I don't run." “You might want to when Gary gets his dick out.” Who in LA doesn’t know about O’Briain’s tab Dr. Okonkwo watched them with an expression that was somewhere between amusement and exhaustion. "If you're done, I have other patients. Myra will handle the paperwork. And O'Briain?" "Yeah?" "Pay your tab."

It came to me in the last chapter that I thought our sun king was the culprit….and while that thought is the progenitor of a few red herrings, until otherwise demonstrated, I suspect Bastian is the killer…

Brilliant, the best time travel tale yet. What a fantastic imagination!! More please!

While I don’t condone what Sakis did, I can’t condemn it either.

Oh my goodness, won’t Granny be surprised….

Thank you for sharing this with us, not to mention your incredible talent. Being on the next!

Thanks to the wisdom of the comments above, what I had planned to say has pretty much been covered….just so tremendously sad, And as noted, even today our pick and chose religious zealots bastardized their faiths. They do so to cover their ignorance and bigotry and revel in their actions.

Someone once asked, how would one eat an elephant, only to hear, one bite at a time! Johnny has built the foundation form his career, and the next steps is to successfully build a fantastic career...

Slowly but surely, Neil is coming into his own as he begins to understand there is life after coming out of the closet! Eric Ravilious - Search

Hey @weinerdog, first on page 2….

But we know from an earlier blurb from you, he has a story of his own later on….

Early days, I have to believe Rhaelce isn’t too far behind…they both want to continue the trip to see what is on or near the mountains

I have to wonder, was the expression on George’s face before seeing the black hole event horizon, a direct result of seeing Mickey in glorious underwear action… George stood from his corner, and stared out of the viewport with it’s jaw hanging open, and pointing in sheer terror.

Much better and more effective than crop circles…

This chapter could have been called Stormy Waters…..I give Callum kudos for realizing he was so very close to stepping over the line… Aled was able to gain closure with his return to the farm….

A lot of hurt feelings in this chapter…and folks at cross purposes, and everyone needs to get their acts together…

In a way, I feel sorry for Frank, beneath that gruff exterior is a sad and miserable boy. it seems to me he was the clumsy outsider amongst his peers, the one picked last when teams formed up for games. Frank leaned back in his chair, arms crossing over his chest. For a moment the professional mask slipped just enough for Marc to see the man underneath: tired but satisfied, the loner who pushed everyone away but maybe did not want to anymore. Then the mask returned.

Who doesn't love a good short story, one that fuels the imagination when a new universe of possibility is created. Drawing the reader in and leaving questions and thoughts to ponder and ruminate on. One of my personal favorites was The Lottery by Shirley Jackson. Such great care was taken in creating a world that left me wanting to know more about this world, the whys, the hows, and the what-if's... And that, my friends, is the power of a short story...

Still not much in the way of information leading to definitive answers, and plenty of fodder in the comments to feed multiple red herrings!

This I gotta see…..as I wait with bated breath…ya gotta love rioters wearing only underwear….

The first weak link…if Gesi doesn’t have this man, he may never…Sazama might be the the second weakest link, he has his doubts and when pressed just may crack… I’ve been cleaning up our traces in the forged silver case. The magistrate at Naga Port claims the Draeya General received an order to capture the thieves stealing the Sura Clan Ore. We can’t find Hulan, who we placed at the port to track the Sura. Draeya General may have caught him.” Gesi Ajai frowned. “It doesn’t matter,” Gesi said, shaking his head. “The deal I made with Basileus Dio to get Naeri married into the Maenaer house gives us some protection. Basileus Dio will suppress any evidence brought to him by the Draeya General. Still, we should find Hulan. In case he has turned on us.” Let’s not forget the spy Gesi sent with his daughter, I have to believe she will trip up…. And now for Azula to see to their defense and new trading partners…

Gesi Ajai, as noted earlier is a snake, for all his plots he’ll never realize his fondest wishes. Arrogant fools such as he never realize or recognize that they plant unwittingly, the seeds of their downfall…Be it a simple mistake or oversight or diplomatic blunder, his fate is all but certain… While Azusa and sister, along with the remaining survivors of this purge, retreat back to their island it is important to remember, the trade with the kingdom is not their only option…we know from a previous chapter that there are other outlets for their wares…this perhaps will give them the time to rebuild their businesses….and Dio has much to answer for…