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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Like every one else we’ve been waiting for this day…here’s hoping all goes to plan… Ok all you haters…the jury is out to lunch, no…dumbkoff, not the liquid kind…. Listen to me,” Caleb demanded. “You had no way of knowing. You did precisely what you should have done. The poison may have affected my decisions, but it was not the only reason. My head was fucked up for a long time. I won’t blame it solely on the mercury. I know better. There are so many things I could have done differently, but I’m done beating myself up over them. We need to move forward
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The cure for mankind ills, oral sex followed by oral sex followed by oral sex until the end of time….
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It is important to plan for the eventuality we will all face, and Roger has had a true impact on his students!,,
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There you go...exorcism by insemination!!!!
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An interesting start..
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An interesting chapter, where I used to live there was an Audubon Sanctuary on my street with 3 large ponds and several feeder streams. This was just under 30 miles from downtown Boston, they had to call in a beaver remediation expert as the impact the beavers were having was impacting not only the sanctuary bit one road going by it. By damming the stream they were impacting the safety of the road with the large volume of water behind the dam. Back home and living on the farm, the beavers created a large dam, flooding nearly 4 acres of lower, fields that were mostly swampy and wet for the most part of the year. It is interesting to see how the ecology of the area has changed. If I had to guess the beaver dam is nearly 100 feet in length!
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I could not have said this any better, while never having owned a horse, or owned by a horse, I grew up with dogs who meant every bit as much and can understand the complex mix of feelings and emotions one feels when they lose such an important part of their lives...my heart goes out to you Gary. This was a seminal chapter, and a masterclass in pacing, tension, fear, and raw courage to do simply what needed to be done! I shuddered, winced, felt the scrapes, herculean effort, the abrasions and minor cuts, and the determination to do...for the one you love. Lots of directions this can go in, I have to believe Lucas will live, he's lucky there was an exit wound. The danger now is the possibility of infection. If Lucas came back from washing up down at the crick wearing his shirt, the bullet most than likely brought some fabric from the shirt, and we know it would not have been clean...I have to believe Lucas survives this due to the quick thinking on Jubal's part. How far is Sheriff Reid down the road, would he have heard the shots fired??? Once again, thanks for this chapter and my deepest condolences Gary on your loss....
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I'm confused byTy, he appears to be like a will-o-wisp, his affections all over the place. After years of longing for Seth, he for the lack of better words, dumps him. Will he need a lock for his belt to protect the next good looking boy that catches his attention??? I give the boys credit for the yard and house work and lord-almighty...we finally see Seth's father. Why am I reminded of an old TV show...Instead of Lucy, transpose Jim...and boy does he have....
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Which Jeremy Wakes up on Saturday?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Which Jeremy Wakes up on Saturday?
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It is amazing to see how Toby is thriving n a loving, positive family setting. One that encourages personal growth. He is learning not to see the world as black and white, that it OK to be inquisitive. As equally important, Toby knows where home is!!! Time away from his incubator has given him the freedom to understand the difference between his parents and it is all to the good... As noted above, this chapter has some serious foreshadowing. I suspect some serious bumps in the road ahead, however...keeping track of the comments made by the incubator and the previous behavior of the Neanderthal she is sleeping with, will work in Brian and Toby's favor along with competent legal representation.
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One of the constants in life is that nothing stays static, you can lead or follow, grow or stagnate... The following is so frigging true, specially when the chips are down and the odds look insurmountable...The old axiom applies hee...safety in numbers and never leave a brother/sister behind... What is the definition of insanity??? Doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results.... Everyone turned when Rory said, “For the strength of the pack is the wolf, and the strength of the wolf is the pack.”
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Oh...it's slamming alrighty....
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The Siege at Southport
drsawzall commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in The Siege at Southport
It looked like the enemy was like a bad rash that just wouldn't go away...I fear that this is/was the first of many waves of assaults... Where is Simon??? He can't be dead... -
Ya know...you had me and the jury with the water under the bridge comment, such a beautiful metaphor... Then you had to describe Caleb's scent as leather and...coconuts....freaking uggg... Everyone knows how evil coconuts are, I mean ya caint' even go to a beach without smelling the slippy rascals...the jury might/may be deadlocked...mistrial anyone???? BTW, loved this chapter...
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What a brilliant idea to have James write a book, with a renewed sense of purpose and a potential best seller!!
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Let's hope the time the folks who run and work at this fine institution have a chance to experience all the benefits that JJ and others do...hoping their brains then turn to jelly before being put down...
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Four Gay Boys at a Water Park - What Could Go Wrong?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Four Gay Boys at a Water Park - What Could Go Wrong?
If Mark lets his lower head to the thinking for an hour or two, he just might see the light and come on over to the other side for at least a visit... I get the feeling the troglodytes have a few stupid moves up their backsides...Did anyone think to have the security cameras covering the waterpark car lot checked for potential culprits??? Just saying... -
There was a lot of stuff crammed into this chapter, and Greg has a lot to learn!!! So don't we all!!
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Was on the road wrapping up a vacation and for those aficionados of red herrings...and boy...o...boy, do we have 'em!!!
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The March of the Wretched, Part 1
drsawzall commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The March of the Wretched, Part 1
Well, it's hitting the fan now...no telling how Fran can pull this off... Where is Lothar and does Gustave somehow survive to work with Edith? And what of Gustave's brother??? -
Somehow I think these folks are find a way to use Pro...
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Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
drsawzall commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
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Spot on and were there security cameras??
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Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
drsawzall commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
Thanks Bill for another entertaining Halloween story!!
