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You've got me hooked -- yet again. 👍👍👍
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To Everything There Is A Season
starboardtack commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in To Everything There Is A Season
Nice job all of he way through b'y.- 71 comments
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You.did way better than okay.
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While Noah and Jordan may Ben leaving, ya'll don't be a stranger. Come back soon. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for several very enjoyable weeks. Y'heah????
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Great ending. Don’t be a stranger!
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Wonderful chapter. Smart, well written, good dialogue. FWIW, I think having Noah's mother come around would be the easy way out. Think how interesting a story line would be if they had to navigate family relationships and interactions with mom staying true to her convictions. Not easy but certainly rich.
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One of the best chapters I have read anywhere. You captured the moments beautifully. Also, thank you for conveying the beauty of the dialect. I loved it.
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Chapter 23- We had the same blue eyes
starboardtack commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 23- We had the same blue eyes
I guess when you wrote that Dad was not going to stick around you meant it! Great cliff hanger, not just as regards dad but as regards James, too. -
Powerful, nuanced, authentic
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Chapter 14- Alfreda’s Make-Up
starboardtack commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 14- Alfreda’s Make-Up
I just read through all the chapters this weekend. Powerful, painful story. Content is excellent but it does need a bit better proofreading. Not enough to keep me from eagerly anticipating the upcoming chapters. Good work. -
If not for authors like you, I would be too. LOL
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I am half-way through chapter 2 and am looking forward to catching up. This story, so far (and I have no worries about future chapters), only goes to further establish your credentials as a consummate storyteller and wordsmith. Thank you for your efforts.
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The Light in the Darkness
starboardtack commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
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Good start. Interested in seeing where you take this.
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No apologies needed for combining the two chapters. It worked out well and I appreciate the continuity that you were able to maintain. Interesting how the story is developing I look forward to reading more as you post.
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I came across this today and read straight through. You have a great writing style, a good ear for dialogue, and the story itself tops. I have no doubt that you have a "day job" but, as I say to others authors, if at all possible please watch the gaps in posting -- so many otherwise good stories are ruined by lack of continuity. And, this one is too good to let that happen.
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An utter delight -- well paced, clever, fun -- keep writing, I want to read more of your work.
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Hot and fun.
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Good start. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.
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Welcome back -- missed he guys and you.
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Good storytelling and imagery. Curious to see what you make of this. Keep writing!
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Dahyum! A good story just took off for the stratosphere! Very very cool.
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Not sure how to put this more delicately but the only way I can describe this story is that each chapter feels like a new level of edging -- each more intense than the last, leaving me wanting a resolution as much as wanting to increase the tension just a bit more. Great story, great writing.
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Chapter 3 - A Few Steps Forward
starboardtack commented on kuragari129's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Few Steps Forward
The font change has helped — i am enjoying this and look forward to seeing how these lives intersect
