Timothy M.

tim, just by being the one you are, you shine a light into our world, and you give purpose and contentment to your man. We all appreciate you, and I for one am honored to be able to call you friend.

Lisa, that means a lot to me. I'm delighted you felt good about the story, and as always your comments are great to receive. I only know of the books, because my cousin and another friend were fans, and I spent a couple of days at my cousin's place reading most of them, while nursing a sprained ankle. My cousin (who's the only one knowing about me writing erotica) asked for 'some hot Van scenes' so I wrote a few as a birthday gift. But Jonne intrigued me, and I wanted to explore more of his story apart from the encounter with Van. So I began asking myself what this had meant to him, particularly if he was born near the border of Karse, which is an area of Valdemar mainly populated by the Holderkins - the most narrow-minded, unkind and uptight citizens of the country. I won't promise anything, but I'd like to return to Jonne one day, if I get inspired. I'm a sucker for readers asking for more.

Thank you, hoaluu, how wonderful that you enjoyed the story and even want to know more. Yes, Laryn will have a much better life with his uncles and a Companion than what his father would force him to do, even if he never found out about Laryn being gay. I can't tell you how pleased I am that Jonne became the important character here. Like you say , Vanyel is in the books, and anyone who cares to know his tale can read The Last Herald Mage' trilogy. A Guardsman's life is full of danger, a lot of Valdemar's soldiers died in the continual wars with Karse, but maybe Jonne will be lucky in life and love. Feel free to imagine the best for him.

Aaawww, Making readers cry is never a goal, but I'll take the compliment with thanks. God yes, don't we all wanna mail order those guys together with Kendall, Michael, Chet, Arron, Kellar and a few other of @Headstall 's men.

Oh, yeah, I'd forgotten about that. Plenty of people agreed there.

LOL, drought, you like ANY pairing better than that.

I'm delighted you liked Frankie and the people around him. Would you believe I feel slightly bad about disrupting his peaceful existence and leaving him hanging? I'll have to make it up to him at some point.

Thank you @Drew Espinosa - and I hope you won't regret following his advice. Making Sense is probably my best story, or at least the short story I've worked hardest on. He, he, the ice cream scene, yeah that was a hot memory for both of them.

Awww, thank you, buddy. I'm so pleased you gave my fanfic a chance and enjoyed it. Made my day

Thank you for the feature, Cia. This prompt chapter can be read separate from the rest of the story, but in case of new readers, please be aware by prompt story is continuous from ch.1.

Since the coaches won't allow any tackling, due to the risk of serious injury, I guess it will be mainly exercises in running and catching and Bailey will excel there.

Ha, ha, me too. Having your parents discuss your sex life is a definite no-no. Thanks for the @mention, JP, for some reason I didn't get the one in the chapter note. Of course, I loved the shout out to my story as well as the fact the boys wanted to follow the Danish tradition. And I'm glad their parents were supportive after they got over the surprise and the silly questions. Good follow up on the previous Tommy story.

Whoa, talk about blindsided ! And what a way to get proposed to, lol. But I'm glad they found a solution - except now Tommy had to face the fact his twin brother may have murdered someone.

Well done on a difficult prompt line. The shift in verb tense (from past to present) in the beginning is a bit jarring, though. I liked the idea that selfish magic will cost you.

Yikes, just goes to show, it's never a good idea to hide to your kid that he's adopted. At least it's not a question of his mom having cheated, if she's the AB blood type.

I don't think the attacker is part of the hockey team. He's someone John knows, but I hope the team will take it out on John's ass for inciting to a hate crime.

Hmm, are we about to have an reenactment of their first night together, when Liam was almost hit by a car, and Alek took him home to take care of him. And Liam is an idiot for not agreeing to press charges, but luckily the bouncer has given him a second chance. If his concussion symptoms come back, Liam may face serious consequences including not being able to return to work. Worst case scenario is he's unable to start on his education. I know two people this has happened to, and it set them back several years. Hit the bigot where it hurts most, i.e. his purse and his pride. Does Canada have extra punishment for hate crimes? I'd love to see the guy facing Arron or Michael and trying to explain why he hit Liam.

Is this where I repeat my suspicion of Raymond being Jeff's brother? Anyway, I loved having a whole chapter of Daniel and Raymond, and kudos to you for remembering the necessary preps for anal intercourse. (Raymond did his own as well, right?) I like how Raymond does his best to support Daniel in a professional manner, while still being the eager and besotted boyfriend in private. Great chapter

How detailed is this supposed to be? Are we talking about a comment on each chapter, and how many words do you expect? Any limits? In addition, I've run into a problem on Mann's story, since if I go into specific details, I'll probably spoil the story for people who haven't read it. But I suppose I could include spoiler boxes.

I'll join. Maybe @Puppilull will too.

I know, but it doesn't work for me. @JayT - @myr @reader1810 - see all the subsequent ones stay blank. @Cia I tried mentioning it in the Help section, but no one has come up with a solution. if I edit, I can do more @mentions - @Myr and sometimes two names @William King strange, right?

How did you manage to @mention so many people in one post? I can never get more than one at a time.

Sorry I missed this @JayT - but then, so did you. But it's never too late to like and reply so: Tillykke med fødselsdagen back in January.

Sigh, I'm hopeless at short stories... and at the end of the chapter people ask for more

Now he's called Michael in my mind too.