Timothy M.

LOL, yeah research is always good, or else your readers will be more than happy to point out your mistakes. I always have to remind myself about the US drinking age limit too.

As I said to dughlas, I think Nelson is more worried about upsetting Carolyn than Jasper. And I think Jasper is too kind a friend to burst in on Nelson on purpose. He'll leave that to Rob. I think I can promise walking hand in hand, no matter what. Or you'll have to remind me, when we get that far.

I'm not sure Nelson worried so much about showing Jasper respect as about seeing something he didn't want - or pissing Carolyn off. I'm glad you liked the conversation between Nelson and his mom, I thinks she's pretty cool. I have another chapter with AC, and I'm busy writing more. Be patient sweet bird.

Thanks, Cole. I'm glad you thought the age of consent joke funny too. Nelson's parents are lawyers and believe in research. Yeah, Jasper is like me, I HATE getting up early.

I woke up after the best sleep I’d had in ages. No stressful dreams of unobtainable blond freshmen. I smiled at the thought of my sexy boyfriend and what we had done last night. Phone sex was another first for me, and making Eric come had pushed me over the edge too. Hearing him breathe my name as he descended from his ecstasy was wonderful and I couldn’t wait to have him do it as I swallowed his cock and his jizz. My hand was already stroking my morning wood and a few minutes later I shot

Good decision - on all of it. But why did you cheat us of the hot shower?

how does that work? does Draak shift his front half to burb fire while the bottom half gets reamed by Neo? And if they switch, does Neo get his hair singed when Draak comes inside him? And no Carlos, it wasn't nearly enough

So if Joel Grey is 82 now, he was 39 in 1972, when the film was made ? He doesn't look a day over 20 in the picture (I haven't looked at the video yet). Hmm, I looked him up and he was born in 1932, making him 40 when the film was made. I'm guessing that's not him I can see above (his ears are bigger, too).

Yeah, payback time. Five million euros per child !! And enough left over to seriously augment their coffers. Those criminals must have been rolling in evil money. Makes me want to If the epilogue doesn't have some hot Draak / Neo sex, you should expect a very Danish Viking on your doorstep. Oh and I loved the quick visit to Vestkysten - a shame they didn't have time to go surfing at Klitmøller.

Exactly what I thought, Valkyrie, when I first read this chapter. Awesome. But on reading it again I suddenly noticed a profound thing. At the end of the loving tete-a-tete with Louis and Maria my favorite bi-boy has this epiphany: This was a flaming desire to fight and keep the ones he loved protected at all costs. The teen recognized this as what men – grown men – feel. This is what grown men willingly fight to defend. And the next thing we see is Ahmed carrying out exactly this principle: protecting Junyad by killing the man who threathens him. Is there any doubt what Ahmed feels for his dervish? But is his love returned?

Lust generator - I like that. But it seems most of your dolphin guys are worthy of the epithet. Hit the bad guys where it hurts: take their money and kill them. But shouldn't the funds go to the victims?

I'll get my Danish Drool Diverter ready. Dragons are my favorite mythical creatures. Can't wait to read more. Do we get to see some of the tattoos and hear the stories behind?

Is there any way I can kill Pete? Preferaby after a lengthy torture. I cannot believe Corbin had to go through this once more. Although, he did sort of set himself up for it by kissing Pete while the Brit was drunk. When will he learn this always goes wrong? If he cannot get Pete to kiss him sober, there is no hope. Mike kisses Corbin when sober and serious, which should tell Corbin where to put his hopes. Fuck around for six months, do your best to revenge yourself on Dom and Pete, and wait for Mike to do as he promised and win you back. If Mike doesn't commit and come out, then fuck him too. What a mess... please don't let us wait so long for the next chapter.

How about a Grammar post on the difference between plural s (boys) and possessive s (boy's). And particularly the difficulty with plural possesive (boys' - is that correct?). Plus the one which I do wrong by choice: when a name ends on s, I find it so difficult to add 's - thus James' book, though it should be James's book, right? The boy's instead of boys a mistake I see often as editor and reader, but I also find myself making it at times, and it always makes me wince when I see it at my second or third read of a text.

Holy Fuck ! That was hot. Ischa certainly doesn't waste any time, does he ? And he did put on a fake confidence, so no wonder I found it a bit hard to recognize him. So ar we looking at a pair of fathers for poor Hel? At least Ischa can read him well and knows what he is.

Hmm,in the forum we were all guessing this is Ischa on the other side of the door, but reading all four chapters again, I somehow cannot see him giving this sort of cocky greeting to Aki. So are we having a fourth person here? I guess we do need someone for Aki if Ischa is meant for Hel or the other way round. Aki has more of a temper than I expected, should be fun.

So for eleven months of serving a vampire in bed and putting up with his callous ways Ischa gets thrown out with little more than the clothes on his back? He should have known to get a contract. Oh, well hopefully he'll find a good Rectory. I loved the Ig talk.

Interesting that Dave and Barry got so angry, I thought the bar offer was great. Oh, well if they see it as manipulation, I suppose their reaction is understandable, but I hope they see sense.

Tillykke med fødselsdagen from your Danish friend.

Finally, we get to my favorite boy: Louis. So demure and yet so forward in his wish to please his master. I wonder if Lazlo will ever dare to move beyond getting satisfaction from this sweet youth's hand. Will he enjoy Louis' mouth or perhaps even more? And Ahmed certainly seems to attract attention !

What a relief ! I wanted to be a fly on the wall in the Rosewood living room, when that news item played to see Philip Rosewood's reaction, LOL. I also want to see his face when the police makes a visit. Serves him right, I hope they tell him Neil could take out a restraining order for him, forcing him to stay away from his son. I bet Mary would be furious at her husband. I was so proud of Neil for telling Tony the truth. But Liam had better come clean soon, because with all the hints Neil is getting from the club people, it won't be long before he puts two and two together. By the way, it will be interesting to see how people react to him at school - and Liam will have to pretend to be surprised too. I'm looking forward to Patrick contacting Ty - or at least I hope they contact him or not Ty's father. If they don't, they're too stupid to deserve him. Good solution to the acting captain problem.

Why would the teen automatically assume CJ would disapprove too? And if he did think so, why say what the problem was ? CJ is seeking this confrontation for his own sake and not the sake of the kid, because I'm sure he would have preferred to be introduced to CJ's parents and invited to ride along side them. If the biker did anything, then they woukd be able to kick his ass. Anyway, I'm not disapproving of CJ's reaction, but I hope he's aware of why he is doing this. And I hope Dragon wipes the floor with the biker.

A very good beginning ! I like self-confident, cynical, hot guys who are looking for something good from life. And I love the idea of a Finnish ski instructor mocking, yet liking Americans. I hope you follow satw.com I look forward to learn more about these three interesting characters.

Sigh, I'm happy now. All my questions answered and a hot cop as a potential great boyfriend for Chet. Kendall and Michael should host a small gathering for their friends at some point, then it wouldn't be matchmaking. Only sad part was the thing about his bastard of a father. I felt sorry for Kendall, but sort of glad his dad may soon be gone, so he can get back together with his mom. Is that evil of me?

The problem with this question is we can only ask you to write about mistakes we see other people do, not the ones we make. Because if we knew they were wrong we wouldn't make them. did that even make sense...