Timothy M.

I had to go away and cool down before reading again and reviewing. Otherwise I might have tried to crawl into the screen and STRANGLE Pete. I cannot believe my fellow reviewers saying they feel ANY kind of sympathy for PEP, he is a jerk, messing with Corbin's head and heart and I want to kick him right back to Britain and tell him to STAY the F..K away from Corbin. I cheered when Corbin cut him off, gave him the Cold shoulder and said he had a boyfriend. serves you bloody right PEP. But of course we all know it won't last. In spite of Nick being the perfect boyfriend, Corbin is gonna fuck things up by not being able to resist the lure of the Brit and by not being honestwith Nick about his issues. Arrrggghhh But I'm going to keep hoping Corbin will hold on to Nick for five months, and then Mike will be back and can punch the Brit's face again if he tries anything on. And I'm proud of Corbin for ryng his very best. Lee leaves me cold and I'm still waiting for Corbin to exact the perfect revenge on Domdick for ratting on Mike. And this is another reason to hold on to Nick and to go public about their relationship. Corbin cannot fight two fronts at once. He needs to have a settled love life to focus his energy on his studies, social status , and strategies for the standing of his house (much as I still shake my head over the ridiculous frat stuff, lol). Oh, and if Nick is really serious about loving Corbin, he needs to bottom once in a while. Or at least stop assuming Corbin isn't versatile. Otherwise, I shall stop feeling sorry for him.

So nice to have my guess confirmed. I'm glad George were able to persuade Jardines to part with the letter. Hope he remembered his watch, lol.

All of us readers - the author doesn't count. He's here to make us suffer.

We all agree the wolves love and admire Colt, scent drugging or not, and I feel sorry for him that his issues prevent him for seeing this.

Perfect house, and I'm thrilled Chet was the one to find it for them. I hope M&K make them godparents, too. I'm in favor of Michael begetting a son and Kendall a daughter. I have the feeling Kendall will be the anxious, overprotective Dad and I hope Michael can counteract that. I loved the title of course, they may have started out playing with looking at the house, but it soon became serious. No more bets about where they are going to live or how committed they are to the family they are building. Plus once they get the back done, it will be perfect for Kendall's parents visiting. And later it's probably good for a teen residence. Plus I bet the neighborhood likes the idea of having a cop in residence, and another visiting regularly. Because those four friends will be at each other's houses often is my prediction. Kendall Giftekniv can be proud of his match-making skills. Wonder what he'll find for Jeremy

LOL, I guess this is where my Danish background betrays me, as pucker seems a neutral word to me. I may edit this later and I'll try to avoid it in future (it may occur in the chapters written so far). As far as the other matter is concerned, I accept there are differing feelings amongst my readers. And at least is causes y'all to leave passinate reviews, which I love.

Hey Ken, where are you? I miss your astute analysis of the most recent chapter. OK I'll start off then: It was very clever of Graeme to use the real event of the Purple Bombers in the story. I wonder if any of the media got pics of the short kiss Jim and Tony shared. I hope Radio Pride had someone on the spot, or they will be really pissed with Tony for not tipping them off. And I look forward to seeing Jim's comments. I hope he says something about spectators shouting homophobic or racist taunts being utterly unacceptable, because even if he as a player rarely hears them while focused on his game, other spectators may be hurt by the bigoted utterings. Roger is a great captain, he delights in the success of his teammates and knows how to direct others. He might be a good coach later.

So Deon also got approached by the Sydney Swans ! That's great, Sam will be delighted if Deon comes to stay near him. But perhaps not so good for any future relationship with Clarissa. I hope she decides to give him a chance. For once I think Ollie was over the top with his sexual teasing, and I felt sorry for Neil and Liam. Seeing each other naked for the first time in a non-sexual situation was probably a good thing, but Ollie's continued fixation was equally embarrassing and awkwardly helpful. How's Dave doing? We haven't heard anything of him for a while. Same for Charlie.

Now I want to know why he's so shy. Is Debate compulsory as a subject in high school ? Must be, since I cannot see him (you) chose it voluntarily.

If you search on a word which has been used as a tag, will the tagged entries be at the top of the result page ? Or mixed in with all the other search results?

almost, but I'm back from my holiday now. as far as I remember all the band chapters so far have been from Brad's (3rd person) POV.

I want Theo, he seems more complex than Jack. As for Brady not being useful, I just assumed it was because you already used him in the band chapters.

I'm so glad I'm not the only one to think Colt is being an idiot. You should have see the yelling and ranting and frothing-at-the-mouth I did while editing ch 8 and 9. I almost felt sorry for poor JAR afterwards.

Farther along might be a nice title.

Better late than never: http://satwcomic.com/red-white-and-rainbow-stripes Tillykke from Denmark, anyway.

I've been reading some of the articles, so sad.

Yes to both questions But I hope to get unstuck soon.

A whole Will chapter, what a treat! But I have the feeling Zach would be very upset if Will hooked up with Tony again. Hell, I would be pretty Tony is a douchebag. Not sure how Zach would feel about Jeffrey. And once more we're shown how badly Brad has let Will down. Makes me

Any feedback is welcome, even simply telling me whether you liked the chapter or not.

I thought the same in Dignity, I felt Jack's siblings were perfectly understandable , but I have to admit, their reaction to Linc does not endear them to me.

LOL, thanks - but that's because you've only seen CC and my prompt story. Both of those were written after several years of writing descriptive stories with hardly any dialogue, and after I'd been under the influence of all the great stories here at GA, not to mention the tough but fair and loving guidance of Kitt and AC as editors/betas.

Don't miss the story forum, where you can see various links and explanations about the places and other matters related to the story.

Thank you very much, I hope you'll keep reading and enjoying the story. Always nice to welcome new readers.

Ditto from me, I'm flattered, Dark. Also thank you to whoever ask the question and thus gave me the chance to feature here.

getting a bit worried here... both about you and the story. Hope you're not leaving us hanging...