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Timothy M.

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  1. Aaaw, thanks, Adi, what a lovely julegave. Luckily the suggestions for improvement are those things I also think could be better, including writing a sequel. I'm hoping to return to Frankie one day and get him out of that one-star motel.
  2. I'm sad that Robbie keeps pushing away the only adults who are genuinely concerned about him and can help. And I wish he'd stop pining after Nathan. Happy New Year, Dodger.
  3. Mostly fun, although I'm not sure about getting shifter kids to believe in Santa.
  4. Timothy M.

    Cedric

    I'm glad they had the time together, too. And that the elf was under his oak and in Geralt's lap when he left the world.
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    Chapter 12

    all we can do is shun them and ridicule them https://satwcomic.com/ungodly-surprise
  6. Oh, yeah now I remember being quite confused in the first chapter, where he had just arrived in town a couple of months before and at the same time had played in the cafe for at least a year. But otherwise the story took off nicely from the start.
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    Chapter 1

    How could Landyn doubt Nico's motives and intentions ? And did they really discuss precog and Japanese sword fighting in front of the cab driver ?
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    Chapter Nineteen

    At least he can write the idiot off forever and focus on the people who care about him.
  9. I can vaguely recall this story too, but it may be time for a revisit.
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    Chapter 17

    Why would Mason think his father would investigate Liam ? It seems to me he's only been interested in Mason's house mates and potential boyfriends. He'd have to spend a lot of money to check up on all Mason's friends. But I guess Mason is overly suspicious of his father now. I'm surprised at both Clarissa and Deon saying 'I don't understand a lot of things' - but perhaps Deon used the same phrase, so as not to upset Clarissa any more. I can see his worry about the media attention, since they might use the opportunity to ask veiled questions about the trial. But what is it they need to 'understand' ? Even Liam and Neil use the word, and I find it really weird. If they need information about what transgender means, they can simply look it up. Their focus should be on the fact that someone hurt their friend, again, and that she's now exposed and vulnerable at uni. I'm not sure Daphne would want to see the people who witnessed Rick's humiliating behavior, even if they want to apologize. Not that they have anything to apologize for, unless they feel bad for not stopping Rick. They can tell Mason to tell Daphne they don't agree with Rick and that he's been thrown out of the club. Btw I think the latter may be a bad idea, since it may make Rick hate Daphne even more. Instead they should insist he see a counselor who specialize in LGBT issues and write an apology to Daphne, when he's repented of his sins. Anyway, let's hope Mason tells them, he and his friends needs more time to get over the confrontation, so he doesn't turn up where Jose is waiting for him.
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    Chapter 1

    LOL, you may want to repeat some of this in chapter 1 of the first Leopard story since that's where most of us got introduced to footy.
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    Chapter 16

    I think the one I was trying to find was this one, but for some reason it's not visible anymore. https://satwcomic.com/coffee It's listed on the page with all the Denmark comics, but when you click the link, there's only the 404 error. Edit: ha, it's visible now, so you can go enjoy ir. @Graeme
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    Yaevinn

    I agree - dominant elves are hot. I'm glad they had a nice time, twice.
  14. What a lovely julegave to start my Christmas holiday. Thank you, Parker.
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    Daniel

    Let's hope Daniel has found his future home and parents.
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    Chapter 26

    People who follow the story will get notifications about new comment and may pop in and join the conversation if you're making a good point. And you should at least get a reaction from the author. We all LOVE it when a new reader comment on an older story.
  17. Do you cut them in pieces and roast them raw ? Or do you use frozen baby carrots ?
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    Castle Dark

    Fourteen good years and one bad followed by a calm split-up is quite satisfactory in my opinion. Some people get the opposite...
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    Chapter 1

    They have to be separate one-chapter stories as Anthology entries, especially as they're different themes. I've done the same with some of my stories, but it wasn't as obvious, because they were subsequent Anthos.
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    Superhero Surprise

    i have the feeling Barrett has a special view of the world and takes things quite literally at times. But in the last case his memory and knowledge was useful. He'll treasure the silver cape for a long time.
  21. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    A purpose is needed to stay sane and better to die in the pursuit of home than to give up.
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    Chapter 1

    Oh well, at least they won't starve to death, while trying to get home.
  23. Oh, I thought you'd sold it to this guy, who made the Danish news. (But the embedded YouTube video is in English.)
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    Chapter 62

    I have the feeling the Captain is going to be
  25. Well, maybe that's just as well, since no one has done any stories for a while. ( @Carlos Hazday and @Parker Owens I'm looking at you ). But Renee will probably do one of your stories if you poke her gently (or offer to babysit ).
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