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  1. Ron

    The Goodbye Garden

    Thank you Suvitar. For a happier ending, you'll have to read chapter 5, I'm afraid.
  2. Ron

    Sweet Aftermath

    Nice chapter, Cassie. Up next, Mikeal bitch-slaps his mother Sorry, couldn't resist the potshot. Can't hardly wait to read about the actual events of Christmas Day.
  3. Welcome to GA, dtucker1721. If you have questions, check the Help up top and if it's not there, folks will be happy to direct you to what you want to know. It's just that kind of place!!
  4. I saw this posted before midnight and I wasn't willing to force you into another year older too soon. Happy Birthday Cole Many Happy Returns!
  5. Using really really isn't necessary or Using really isn't necessary.
  6. Hi, Dwayne. Thank you for adding us, and GA.
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
  8. You've done a nice review of Cassie's story, Cole. When her story ends you will have to come back and add to it.
  9. I cannot believe this is frowned upon. Nor can I believe that I am the first . . . Happy Birthday, Myr!!! Many, many happy returns to you, Sir!
  10. Hello, Musiclover and welcome to GA. This place should fill your reading habit just fine.
  11. Ron

    Chapter 8

    You are gathering a fair number of characters together in the telling of this story. We probably haven't seen the end of the gathering of them yet, I'm thinking. But with you, that's good because one of your strengths is the capability of keeping your characters differentiated.
  12. I don't like this game! But I do like your story, Wayne!
  13. It is never too late . . . For posting, anyways. Good to know you exist, Bagnios. The ice is broken--post, post, post!
  14. Ron

    Chapter 20

    Quite a scene you lay out for us readers. I am every so grateful it has never happened to me. Cute and fun, Valkyrie.
  15. Happy Birthday, NeverSurrender an advertisement for not growing old!!!
  16. I'm pegged at Grand Rapids, Fort Wayne or Cleveland. I grew up a 50 minute drive away from Cleveland. It was my answer to the question of what the space between the road and the sidewalk was called. I answered, tree lawn, and that got me. Drinking fountain matched the other cities but all firmly place me in the Great Lakes area of the Mid-west. Very clever. edit to add: This reminds me of the scenes in Blade Runner somewhat. I wonder if there were any facial tells when I answered the questions that might have further pinned me down.
  17. Welcome, Rishabh. There are stories to fit all of what you are looking to read here on GA.
  18. Thanks, Joann. Happy to be of service.
  19. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for saying so, Valkyrie.
  20. Ron

    Adventureland

    Oh, for crying out loud . . . It isn't the author that pigeon holes his/herself into a genre, it's the readers. If you truly write better in one one genre over another, it might be better to sick with your strength, but it shouldn't prevent you from experimenting, and if you're able to move freely, then why shouldn't you? Let your writing speak for itself, James. edit to add: it is all too often the readers, not necessarily always the readers.
  21. Hello, Mochiko. Glad to see you on board. Read to your content because no one will mind.
  22. Graeme - Happy Birthday To You, Sir and wishing you many, many more!
  23. "Can I talk to you?" Those were the first words he spoke to me. They were not our first contact. As spring days happen, it was to be the most spring like in recent memory. An early morning mist had dissipated leaving the sun to warm the air and greet the potent scent of white lilac. I planted the bushes in the small break between the sidewalk and the front of my townhouse, and for just such a day, it seemed, as I stood on my front stoop and breathed in the reward of them. The day was a del
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