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This chapter was filled with the energetic excitement of kids contemplating peanuts, fishing and the soon-to-arrive friends from Italy. Armand and Colin's adult sons are working responsibly and hard to maintain their family's shared goal of protecting the children. Pierre was not comfortable and felt alone in France, and I think he will stay with Colin and Armand. He and Charles seem to be getting along well. I hope they will support each other as friends.
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I love how Dakota is expanding the family. Their relationships are based on love, not blood. What surprised me was that Dakota doesn't think Shinálí knows about him and Naiche. That makes me wonder whether Shinálí are blood relatives. By Shinálí's actions and words, I doubt there would be any problems if he did.
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Hi Albert!
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There are so many interesting things in this chapter. The first is the strange guy bowing and saying, "Yes, Your Excellency". It appears Scott's father is a very high-up leader, something like an ambassador. The second is James telling Greg that "Our people fall in love quickly." to explain that he and Donna fully accept Scott and Greg's relationship. The 'our people' does imply that Scott's family is somehow different from other humans. The last interesting part was the Truth or Dare game without spinning the bottle and starting out nude. Very hot! Wished I was there with the guys.
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Hi Page!
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I love the way Jed and Trudy set Kyan and Perry to sleep together. They all but said you two go f..k yourselves silly tonight! A lot of funny comments by the kids, but I also loved these two scenes. and Kyan really doesn't stand a chance, especially with #SteeleFamily ready at a moment's notice to push the two of them together. Great chapter!
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Hi FanLit. Yes and no. POG is an acronym for a blend of passion fruit, orange and guava juices. It's both a juice and a cocktail mixer.
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Looks like Perry took @Mrsgnomie shopping for swimwear in Hawaii.
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#weinerbois sounds more like the gay guys in this story.
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A technicality doesn't mean she was not a busybody good doctor. I loved her role as Hetty, the housewife turned detective. Hetty was a delightful change from Hyacinth that proved to me Patricia Routledge was a great actor as well as a comedian.
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As usual Dr P, you are correct on both counts. Here's an image of Hetty that reminded me of the gif Myr used.
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I like the scene you picked, because it not only highlighted one of my heroes, Alan Turing, but also his lasting effect on LGBTQ+ youth. I'm looking forward to reading your story very much!
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A great story, Gary! I've read it twice and plan to read it several times more. It makes me feel good after I read it. It's one of my favorite short stories.
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What's wrong with Only Friends, Drew? Did Spike claim all the phuchailawh?
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Good Evening, Albert. I guess Clo can be excused because she probably doesn't see reruns of American TV shows. How are you today?
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I think Spike meant this Mr. T. I don't travel by bus.
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Hi @sandrewn, I think it could also be the Heddy Wainthropp character Dame Patricia Routledge played in another series. That's because the red hat was a trademark of Heddy's character. Both of Routledge's characters were busybodies.
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Yes, please!
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So basically you are acting 24/7. 😝
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I saw the review of Endings this morning. It was an excellent review. Endings is a great story and I'm happy you didn't stop after the first chapter. Many of your stories are continually read by people. I know that I enjoy rereading your work. Aod and I are doing very well. Aod's father is a wonderful man, and it is great to see them talk for hours together. Usually, when Aod's mother is around she constantly interrupts and changes the subject. She's not a bad person, but does make it difficult for Aod and his father to talk for more than a minute. Aod told me this is the first time he has been able to speak to his father like this. It make me happy and I will be a little sad when he goes home. Hope all is good with you.
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Otis has great trust in Hudson. Even as naive as he is, Otis is willing to take a risk and pose for Hudson. I imagine the pictures of Otis are very hot, but will bring about some unintended consequences. I agree with Missy that Jackie is a player and is out to take advantage of Otis. I think that Otis will somehow reveal that Hudson has taken pictures of him and Jackie will pass that information to Watkins. Very erotic chapter. I like how we know what happened without giving out details. It was very subtle and skillful writing.
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The three boys now have some adults that they can trust. Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve are very supportive and Mrs. Reinhart is understanding and has resources to help them. It looks as if the boys are on the road to a new normal life. Blake now has what he needs to begin a new life. Craig is on his way home, but I am not hopeful that he will be well received by his parents, or at least by his father. Seth will need all the help he can get when he faces his mother and Stacy. I also wonder if his father will be there for the confrontation. I don't have hope that anything good will come about with Stacy, and Seth's mom is also in doubt.
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The tension doesn't let up. First the cliffhanger with Valrinda missing. Now the Wisps have found the star, but it is protected by magic. How's Becket going to get around the magic protecting the star? The Wisps did say they might be able to track Valrinda, but will they if Becket does get the star?
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I doing great, thanks! It's been a laidback day for me.
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Good for you! I am finally after three years out of teaching starting to have normal dreams not related to teaching. I had forgotten that it is almost the start of a new school year!
