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  1. Defiance19

    Prologue

    Me three. I’m even more invested now. Great Cole, this is going to be better than a good story I’m sure!
  2. Whaaaat!!! Cole! Bloody hell...
  3. You did great, congratulations on reaching this far. Your scenes were the best ones I read...
  4. Yay!! Congratulations winners.. All the entries were great to read. As usual, save for two entries I would have failed on guessing!!
  5. Great interview, Cia and Mitchelll... Mr. Brightside is a story I would recommend to everyone.. I agree with Lisa about Viktor. I was unsure of his character at first, but he surprised me. Looking forward to what’s next.
  6. Defiance19

    Ghosting

    It’s kind of hard not to feel badly for Eddie. He probably will never be the same and maybe not in a good way. Good job Puppi
  7. Defiance19

    Selfie

    This is the stuff of terrible nightmares.. Very well done Northie..
  8. Defiance19

    Chapter 1

    Ohh, was not expecting the end! That was great, A! Well done!
  9. Defiance19

    Masked

    Val, I’m never messing with you. Nope. That was most sinister. Well done!
  10. Today, in some random twist of fate, these hit extra hard.. this should happen to no one ever...
  11. Defiance19

    His Tale

    Tough read, and frightening to think of. But, Northie you did this well.. Too well?
  12. Defiance19

    flying

    I see this unfold, almost with bated breath. Beautiful tim....
  13. Defiance19

    Chapter 2

    I think no matter what, this will be painful and traumatic...
  14. Defiance19

    Requiem

    There I such reverence in this touching tribute Val... Well done..
  15. Great chapter CG.. fun, sweet and perfect.. It is always worth the wait for the next J&M...
  16. Ok, yes something is afoot.. But I’m more inclined to believe it’s Jake who messed up and doesn’t remember, than a third party. Who would be so cruel. What if he was so anxious about meeting Eddie he drank himself into a stupor, Eddie had to clean him up and made calls to let people know what was up. It would explain Nat, his dad... oh, I don’t know. Until the next chapter I might go nuts myself..
  17. Great review ACand congrats on the feature tim.... This was a wonderful story. It has all the distinctive qualities of a fairytale, yet it remains original. An absolute delight to read.
  18. This.. Just beautifully said. How wonderful for both of you to have that depth of connection and love..
  19. There’s so much more there. A little late but all great prompts.. thank you !
  20. Defiance19

    Chapter 1

    Yes, hooked! Hopefully I’ll be able to keep up, or binge! Either way, I’m in!
  21. It’s a delicate balance. Orpheus still is the puppet master as it were, even as Caleb is surely becoming less of a puppet it looks like. Caleb needs to tread carefully, play smart.. Great chapter ...
  22. This has to be hard, and you help me feel what Jake is going through, but Jake is lucky. He has a good amount of awareness and can contemplate how his choices affected others around him. In this case it’s Eddie.(I wonder if it will extend to Nat) That awareness will or should, hopefully help him achieve sobriety long term. So far he has taken ownership of his alcoholism. There’s no real blame (yet). If Eddie is about to lay some hard truths on him now I wonder if Jake will be able to handle what he’ll say. It’s all well and good to know what you’re doing is bad and push someone away before you hurt them. But Jake had alcohol to deaden the feels of all that. Im curious.. Great chapter Cole.
  23. Defiance19

    Chapter 1

    Thank you for finding this, and reading and leaving such a lovely comment. I appreciate it greatly..
  24. Three lovely poems tim. I like that they lean into each other. Variations on a theme. Very well done...
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