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  1. Defiance19

    Mystery Machine

    Thank you Val.. It did take me a while, but I loved doing this flash..
  2. As always, your words have quite an impactful and effective delivery..
  3. Defiance19

    Chapter 4a

    Andy feels so much pressure, and you manage to show that wonderfully. I feel his worry and strain.. its doubly hard, not being able to talk about what he's feeling.. Well done, HB
  4. Defiance19

    Mystery Machine

    Thank you Adi.. Glad you liked it.. Thank you Ron. I really appreciate that.. I'm glad that you liked it too.. Muah! Thank you Drew.. The acronym was the first thing I did.. Thank you Cia.. I didn't think I had the worst nouns, but it was hard and I might have banged my head a couple times.. Then the idea came. I'm just glad it went over well.
  5. Defiance19

    Mystery Machine

    Thank you tim... I appreciate you.. Aw, thank you Lyssa. What happens can be totally up to you. I didn't think that far ahead! Thank you. Glad I could make you chuckle..lol Thank you so much.. I'm glad you enjoyed it to even want more..
  6. Defiance19

    My Champion

    No doubt the sponsor will have a chance to answer those troubling questions, but I wonder if the champion has curiosities of his own. I mean this could be the one champion who isn't as a unaware as they think! There's always the need for more, but it was a great flash Cia!
  7. Really good! A clever and imaginative way to use your nouns. Great job!
  8. LOL! Geometrics. This was amazing and funny and I loved it.. Well done!
  9. Defiance19

    Davey Bishop

    Umm, Val.. I need to know more! Sooo...? Great job!
  10. Caz, it was great.. A really nice scene.. I caught what you did there hehe.. Well done!
  11. Defiance19

    False Flag

    This begs for a continuation. It's a really great scene an I enjoyed it. Well done..
  12. So good Puppi.. This little scene came with lots of emotions.. Well done!
  13. Defiance19

    Cherry Pie Short

    Great Adi! Loved it.. Would also love to see a full length story too.
  14. Drew, you did great. It was sad though.. It will be interesting to see where it goes if you do make it a longer piece.. Well done, son..
  15. A little sad, Northie, but I enjoyed it very much. Great job!
  16. Defiance19

    Courting Ruin

    Ha! That was awesome and funny.. Ruin.. Lol. Loved it tim..
  17. Defiance19

    Radiated Love

    Great job.. I liked how you used your words.. I agree with Fred. The reasoning for being chosen, wrong on so many levels.
  18. Oh, I loved this.. That fairy was sassy.. Lol.
  19. Defiance19

    Death

    As before, Moggy, the subject is dark but these are beautiful. Congrats Poet..
  20. Defiance19

    April 2016

    Rolodex...there's a word that ages me.. I love that Brett is such a Papa Bear.. This time he made CJ bring out the 'I'm 18' guns.. I will say I agree to a certain extent with Brett especially after hearing about the threats.. I also love CJ looking out for Paddy. Making sure he has someone to talk with. At least he will see that all priests don't hide their bigotry under their cloth.. So it's Silas I've got to keep my eye on? But he's in Chicago.... I hope he stays with Tyler and Randy. And Thiago got a good girl.. Yay.. Wonderful chapter Carlos..
  21. Great review Hudson.. That series is powerful and compelling.. Kept me on edge.. I have to read Dalkhu already!
  22. Toby opened the front door and found an airship. Quinn stared, shocked, but then Toby remembered he had a laughter and he ran to his car. Finding what he needed, he raced back inside and switched it on. In seconds, everything was at it should be. Heart pounding, he turned to face a glaring Quinn. Fitting response, since Toby was almost sure he knew why they had found themselves standing not in what should have been their living room, but in a space that resembled an open battlefield
  23. Defiance19

    Chapter 3

    I love the relationship between Marcus and his mom.. So amazing how well she knows him and he can vent no worries, but she will tell him as it is.. I think Marcus handled seeing Andy as a priest remarkably well. Poor Andy though.. He really is naive.. Acted the way he thought he should for a one night stand, and was seriously offended that Marcus thought he'd used a fake name. The thought probably never crossed his mind.. As mad as Marcus is though, the shock for Andy as Marcus was the last person he expected to see. Yet, not shocked enough to resist each other it seems..
  24. Defiance19

    To Simply Be

    You are accepted by those who matter, who consider you more than just a friend. And you are more than worthy.. Stay strong..
  25. Defiance19

    March 2016

    It's going to be interesting to watch CJ during this campaign. How he processes the events to come and how he handles the results.. I continue to love how cozy Owen is with the dads.. I hope he gets to stay.. He can always get married as an option. It is legal.. Well maybe That's pushing it a bit.. Somehow CJ was the right choice for Patrick. I liked that.. I will give you hell later about Patrick finally coming out.. For now, great chapter..
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