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Jon you finally got out of torturing yourself Beautiful story and needless to say Oren saw the beauty from within
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Noooo I want a new story for Zane and Dan you cant cut it so short, will always wait for their story I have read this story atleast twice and loved it so much Always look forward to ur stories
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Lovely story Now poor Maddox will have to woo Jonathan again but surely after making him understand that this is serious and not just a fling or joke Cant wait for the next chapter
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Nothing really exciting in this chapter, but the bad will come soon enough.. well I was expecting something good to come up soon
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I think George is a good guy with just some problem with his mom not accepting something of him that is still amystery I am sure Karl and George will become good friends and more as time goes by George will help Karl navigate through tough times
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Such a wonderful character Beau is. we can see that Brad was missing true love in his life which made him the monster but we have Beau to tame the monster. Waiting for a**hole Gary's punishment hopefully soon
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What a relief to hear Ethen is alive but also sad that it comes after a year and now Cody’s dream are going to be shattered once more wish it was earlier before Jake n Cody got involved seriously for sake of poor Cody Anyway, great cliffhanger don’t make us wait too long James love you for bringing Ethen back
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Tragic ending but hopefully after their return o England things get better and Jake and Cody realize that the spark they had for each other has not died
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For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
long1jo commented on James Matthews's story chapter in For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
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Smooth sailing so far with addition of Jerry, love it
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Nice past and present, looks like Stewie is falling slowly but surely Cant wait to see him realizing it
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Wow that was a very hot session! Man 18 with raging hormones, its going to be a hot and steamy story
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Hi Looking forward to next chapter
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Wow slow down, that is too much to digest 6 f****** years of torture. Surprised Kim and Nikki are still sane What happened to Dr. Marc, was he executed barbarically Please let Kyle remain sane
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Love how the plot is developing Just keep in mind, that whatever the reason was for not telling you, your parents still loved you and raised you as their own right? Jett I love you for being so understanding and making Kyle look differently at his parents and dissipating his anger Not telling them early enough is good because growing up you have all different stress in life why add a huge one Yes they did not tell but was there any benefit for them other then giving unconditional love to both the adapted kids Kyle you are a good person and don't let your relations with loving parents be strained, look at the love and life they have given you and be blessed
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Wonderful chapter but casually mentioning of Seamus taking Matt for the first time is a little heart breaking Anyway love Seamus and yes Matt is young and has been vunerable before so understand his cautious behavior but sure he can see in Seamus that their relationship is not only because of Aidan as he had already mentioned before that he fell for Matt the first time they crossed path. Matt hope your talk with Brad opens up ur heart and see the real love Seamus has for you and u realize that ur feelings for Seamus are just not because of him being nanny but go much deeper
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Loved the story though was wrapped up quickly, looking forward to another romantic story
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Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
long1jo commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
Thanks for posting and a long chapter really made it up for the long delay Recovering first, Seamus stood and held out his hand for Matt’s. “You’re not done yet.” I thought Matt was going to take it this time as he was already spend by Seamus's hot mouth haha- 41 comments
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Wow interesting how about just impregnating with Prince's semen without copulation, I am sure they were practicing that with bulls and cows in that period haha
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It's the end of the world as we know it...
long1jo commented on K.C.'s story chapter in It's the end of the world as we know it...
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Glad that Jonah finally had courage to complain about Dallas and was concerned about Matt Matt you should have complained to the teachers and let your mom know about the bullying Good the principal was kicked out though MAtt you are free but lot of kids might not be so everyone please look out for the abused and bully and nip it fight away
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Men. They are un-understandable
long1jo commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Matt think about Seamus and atleast talk it out before making plans, good that u r going to clarify any misunderstanding You both are too good to stay apart!- 37 comments
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Thanks for “Because…” he says, looking into my eyes. “I love you.” he says quietly. That leaves us with a good mood that Hunter is going to know that he is still loved Just needed to end with a chaste kiss from Dale to hunter lol
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Beautiful but I only feel sorry for Trevor as it was not his fault that his mom poisoned him against Eric and Sergio was in his life before Eric came in Poor boy terrible way to end up, if Jayden was excused sure Trevor needed another chance Just my thoughts I guess I am the softie one haha
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Hi I think I have read this story somewhere before but it is always a peasure to read it over and over again I like the way the plot is developing and cant wait for whats coming next
