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Great chapter! Devon is struggling with the trauma of abuse. His mother absolutely should get him to a psychologist quickly. With what he’s endured there’s no way for him to deal with his fears, anger and abandonment. The psychological, emotional and physical abuse will require a treatment program which could take years. His mother is being irresponsible in just leaving him to deal with his issues alone. Josh needs to understand about what Devon is going through and how to help him. The entire family needs counseling. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! I’m glad that Sebastian has stepped up and let his feelings be known, I don’t know about a letter as the best form for his declaration of love. I originally wanted to see Wyatt and Lewis together, but the age difference and differences in station make that impossible. I think that Lewis and Sebastian will make a great couple. I’m looking forward to the next story! 😃❤️

Great chapter! I’m very upset with Dizzy’s mother, no matter your financial circumstances, your children and their safety must always be your top priority. I wouldn’t trust her as far as Dizzy could spit. Way to go Adam! You’ve stepped up when needed and reassured Dizzy’s mom. I’m certain that the donut shop could use additional help, however, a job won’t solve the abuse problems. It could end up spilling over into the shop. Abusers don’t care who gets hurt when they are on the rampage. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! Dylan’s managed to eliminate the leadership of the rogue state government, rescued the captive children and bond with another group of teens. His circle and most especially Paul is furious with what he’s done without letting them know. The President will most likely be very unhappy with the choices Dylan’s made in this mission. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Okay dinner was a complete disaster, the Prophet’s forces were better prepared and Dylan was taken hostage. He’s now taken the prophet prisoner and is trying to decide how to proceed on his own and whether to rescue the other children like him. I’m certain that the circle has sprung into action to get Dylan back safely. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! Things seem a little tense leading up to the dinner, Dylan is confident that this dinner will go well. His staff and Paul are understandably concerned. Dylan’s studies are going well and he’ll be taking his finals soon. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Dylan’s new plane is amazing and I think that his circle will be more comfortable. By the way, in a previous chapter You stated that the plane was a 797, but in this chapter you made it a 787. The Tucson trip will definitely boost morale around the country. The Utah portion of the trip is going to be much more difficult and dangerous, the Profit won’t give up control easily, the deputy Secretary of State will have his hands full. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Nope, just use the local foundry. It helps make all your troubles vanish without a trace.

Amazing chapter! I knew that the parents were neglectful but I was totally surprised by the mother being the monster. The fact that she forced her children to dress and act like girls because she wanted daughters is sickening, but actively trying to make them transition into women is so perverse that I can believe it. She should be in an institution where she can’t do anymore harm. Aria is remarkably stronger in this chapter. Amara has opened up a little bit, but there’s clearly more going on. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Exciting chapter! The dynamic between Aria and Drew is rapidly growing closer. The interactions between Aria and Amara run white hot to disdain. The relationship between Amara and Ben is like a mouse to a cat, Ben’s toying with him, while using his influence and position to put Amara in situations where he’s being manipulated and taken advantage of. Drew has let Ben know that he’ll mop up the floor with him if he’s not extremely careful. The entire situation at this after party was set-up to take advantage of the twins, Alexei would never have allowed this type of party. There are outside forces pulling Ben’s strings. It’s possible that these people are using the twins in some sort of pornographic videos or photographs. There’s not enough data yet, but Drew will certainly need to be on his toes where Ben’s concerned. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ PS: dropping a body in molten metal leaves no traces!

Great chapter! The party full of plastic people is a situation where the twins are going to be taken advantage of, Drew is aware of what’s going on, but is powerless to stop it until the client{s) are in danger. The poisonous woman is a clear indication of how dangerous the situation is. Drew stopped her cold and was prepared to go the distance until she manipulated the twins into sending Drew out of the room so that she and her cohorts can manipulate them to do whatever they want. Ben is absent and completely useless, he’s dangerous in that he’s allowed this manipulative behavior to go on for some reason that hasn’t been revealed. Blackmail would be my guess. That would explain why Ben’s still around. Drew is going to need to get to the bottom of what’s going on soon, his job and the boys lives at at stake. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

That was another amazing chapter! Ben is dangerous, his complete lack of compassion, professionalism and probable use and abuse of his client is just the tip of the iceberg. Amara seems to have a problem with Drew getting closer to his brother, he’s got a Jekyll and Hyde thing going that’s mostly caused by drugs and the self serving sycophants surrounding him. The lack of adult supervision and support is leading these boys down an often traveled path of excesses that usually lead to rehabilitation or death or both. Celebrity is a dangerous thing for under supervised children, teens and young adults. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Drew clearly has a lot to learn about the boys and their associates. Aria has a deep seated need for approval and companionship. Drew will have his hands full with the twins and the games they like to play. Aria’s brush with the attempted kidnapping and shooting has caused emotional issues that have been swept under the rug. Drew should be able to help with the fears and horrors of this experience. Drew’s interactions with Amara have been interesting, there seems to be some issues between the twins that Drew will be forced to deal with. Alexei seems like a good guy who cares about the boys. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! You’ve gotten my undivided attention with all of the subtle mysteries that were revealed. The interaction between Dr. Ilaria and Rory was very interesting. I like Rory a lot and we don’t have any details yet. Then there’s Cory whose leg injuries are healing at a very excellerated rate. Dad has mysterious aspects as well. The town apparently is the focal point for these mysteries. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Fantastic chapter! I love the interaction between Lewis, Jeremy and Mitchell. I’m feeling sort of sorry for the Federal Officer who detained Lewis in the airport. Kylie tore him a new one but politely. The new office and residence appear ro be really nice. He’s risking his undercover investigation by asking questions. Hopefully the investigation will give him the information he needs to start to develop plans for how to improve the environmental and economic damage that the invasion caused. He’ll also gather information on the people who’ve illegally moved onto the island and who apparently don’t want to leave. He’s going to have to get a feel for how they can fit into the islands permanent residents or if they’ll have to be returned to their home country. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! The story is off to a very good start. The characters are unique and developing slowly. The story is unfolding at a good pace. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

This was a very sad and difficult chapter! I’m always saddened by the abuses of children, it’s ashamed that parents and others who raise and care for children are often monsters. There are licenses and home visits for adoption of a pet, yet anyone who wants can raise a child. I’m certain that the story you’re telling is very difficult to write as well as emotionally taxing. Thank you for your honesty and pains in telling such a tragic and heartbreaking story. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Thank you for another amazing chapter! It saddens me that school shootings has become such a normal situation these days. 😢 This subject comes up in every medium, and realistically needs our undivided attention. This scenario is unique in that it’s the disgraced detective who’s the perpetrator. I’m hoping that increases in school security budgets , decreases in the abilities to enter schools without going through a security checkpoint, panic buttons and more stringent punishment for bullying, including expulsion might help. The state of Texas has blue-ribbon panels after the most recent school shootings, there were many suggestions and many new programs to deal with the situation, however, not once did bullying behaviors come into discussion. Have we given up on the beliefs that all persons are created equal? Bullying behaviors are at the root of a great many of these shootings. Why is it so difficult for society to look beyond race, gender, height, weight, sexual orientation and sexual identity? Bullying is a learned behavior. Much more attention to anti-bullying programs and education needs to be brought to bear. Intolerance, hatred and jealousy need to be stopped. Stopping these problems will make the world a safer place! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! Every time that he’s dragged back into governmental service they handover Medals, however this time, the Queen has bestowed a knighthood upon Lewis which was earned through personal sacrifice and dangers. Congratulations Lewis!! He’s also received a diplomatic passport. I’m hoping that he’ll find solutions to the diplomatic, environmental and financial issues facing the island. He’s also going to check out his brothers investment properties. When will he get the chance to live his life the way that he wants? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Lewis has done an amazing job with the Kalbarri projects and has all but tied them with a bow. Wyatt and he are living in the same home, hopefully they will get a chance to get acquainted prior to the trip to Christmas Island. The twins are spending a lot of money in this region and I hope that they’re going to be successful. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Another fascinating chapter! The conversations with the Ayatollah went better than expected. The conversations after the call were much more concerning, the United Kingdom of God would leave the country with no rights and anyone or anything that doesn’t fit into the evangelical point of view, would have to be eliminated either through relocation or execution. What a wonderful world that would be. NOT! None of us would fit into this world view. The problem is that the evangelicals are planning for this future right now. Ever since the moral majority went down in flames, they’ve been working behind the scenes to run for office and keep their long term plans hidden. Why do you think so much of the country is “conservative” now! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

You’re off to a good start! There’s some interesting characters and the story is intriguing. I’m very much looking forward to seeing the characters develop and having the plot unravel. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Another great chapter! I’m really happy that the twins appreciate Lewis for all that he’s doing for them. I’m hoping that by bringing Wyatt with them that Wyatt and Lewis will finally get a chance to become better acquainted and maybe start making steps toward a romance. with Lewis leaving for six months, I hope that a spark will be ignited that will carry them through the separation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Great chapter! When Lewis takes on a new project, he definitely goes all-in. His dedication and work ethic are simply amazing. He’s totally dedicated to his task despite the impending drastic changes to his life for the next six months, thanks to an overreaching government. It is truly a shame that this poor injured veteran is being prevented from being in one place long enough to pursue a chance at romance. The twins are supportive, but they whisked him back to Australia before any chance at getting acquainted with his potential date. He needs a chance to be where and who he wants to be. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! The bonding amongst the security personnel is more problematic than Dylan thought it would be, now that he’s bringing Paul into the circle things should settle down. The new mission to Utah that the President has sprung on him is disturbing in that he’s advocating using Dylan’s powers on their leadership. The fact that his father was sitting and watching during his bringing Paul into the circle proves that he’ll use any means to accomplish his own goals despite the discomfort he’s placing on his sons. The new constitution is frightening since the President has already stated that he will bring more religious doctrines into the country. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️