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Haha! I love "Jate"! Lmao!! I just don't think in the end Jake deserved to be forgiven, much less given another chance. He's proven himself to be a liar and a cheat, and didn't show any guilt about either until he was caught. There's no rebuilding trust off of that.
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I absolutely agree. I, for one, find cheating unforgivable. I would never go back to someone who cheated on me. I'm never gonna be a doormat for anybody! I say Jake would have continued lying all through college. He certainly didn't have a problem lying before getting caught.
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Hmm...kinds looks to me that Toby is using Liam as just a different way to get off. Sorry for being the "debbie downer" of the comments. I have a big problem trusting Toby. I still say he had a thing for Liam's brother, and he's taking Liam because his brother isn't around anymore. We never did get to the bottom of just how close Toby's relationship was with Liam's brother. I think he's playing Liam's vulnerabilities and his crush against him. Oh, and what about Toby's friends with benefits, Mandy? There's A LOT not to trust about Toby.
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Great story. Unfortunately, I could never be forgiving like Kaiden. To me, Jake looking like shit and being sad would be his karma! The one time I was cheated on, I went right past hurt and straight to angry, hateful and bitter. It ran its course and I got over it much quicker. Why be sad and depressed over an asshole? Guess I can understand why Kaiden was, considering his mental state. Oh, and I got a good laugh when u used my "skank ass boyfriend" line! Loved it!! Lmao!
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Great chapter! I just love Caleb. His enthusiasm over going to the beach and the flight was absolutely adorable! He more than deserves the happiness he's finally getting with Matt and Jon. He couldn't ask for better guardians, and they couldn't ask for a better kid. It was so exciting to find out that despite everything Caleb was going through at home, he kept so far ahead on his education. Definitely looking forward to reading more!
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I'm so happy to see the sequel here! I'm happy that Joey went back to school for his doctorate! Ticker and Star are correct that he can do more good as a principal than a teacher. Sounds like he really has respect from the students. Absolutely love Nicky! I think they equally need each other. Feel bad for Gene, although that IS the life he chose. I also don't understand why Tina hasn't left him yet. Its not like she doesn't have her own money and can't get on without him. Says a lot that he remembers so vividly the kiss he and Joey shared so many years ago. Very excited to follow on their journey!
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Lots of happy tears with this chapter! The moment between Adam and Pat was so touching, as was the two dads adoring baby Riley. She's a very lucky little girl. Two loving dads and a big brother to protect her. I can only imagine how adorable the pics were of Adam and Ian with Riley.
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And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
Cute and lovely goes out the window when he's banging another guy behind Kaiden's back! Lol! -
And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
You're welcome! -
And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
First, there is NO explanation that would excuse Jake cheating on Kaiden! I, for one, think a nasty STD would be appropriate karma. Second, there was no mention from Jake that "it isn't what it looks like". His repeated "I'm sorry" pretty much cemented his guilt. I don't think there was any mistaking what was happening. -
Great chapter! I love firefighters, so great touch. Davis deserves someone who values him as more than a fuck buddy, or values him at all for that matter. Kaleb made his bed, now he has to lay in it. However, I don't think u should pair Kaleb with Christopher. I think he's done way too much damage to go that far. I absolutely love Kahn! Good judge of character. Kaleb was a whiney bitch pretty much the whole chapter. He deserved the growls Kahn gave him! Lol!
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Great epilogue! So sorry for ur loss. A wonderful dedication.
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And I’ll never have that recipe again
jaysalmn commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
I feel bad for Kaiden. I don't think he's an idiot and immature at all. In fact, I'm disappointed that he didn't beat the shit out of Jake AND his skanky ass new boyfriend. What an asshole, stringing along Kaiden while fucking someone else. As far as I'm concerned, cheating is unforgivable. I would never speak to him again and hope that karma beats him like a drum! I'm happy Kaiden has a good support system and went back to counseling. Its good to have someone to talk to. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. -
Chapter 13 - it's Your Love
jaysalmn commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 13 - it's Your Love
Great chapter! So happy everyone is ok, but mad as hell Van Jordan got away. The song with the proposal was a great touch. I also never received a notification when chapter 12 was posted, so had to go back to read. Looking forward to the epilogue and the next book! -
I almost forgot about this story. I also hope there are new chapters in the works.
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By far one of the best stories I've read on GA! Loveable main characters you want to protect and embrace and never let go. An emotional journey you don't want to miss.
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Omg, I still have tears rolling down my face as I type this! This one really tugged at the heart strings. So happy Joey found a career that he can look out for other boys that might be treated like he was in school, like little Eddie. That picture at the end really turned on the water works for me! Lol! So sad that Allen died, but happy Joey goes on with the wonderful memories of their 15 years together. I'm glad that Allen's stepfather came around and was with Allen when he passed. I think that probably put Allen at peace. Again, one of the best stories I have read on here. I hope u plan on posting Gene's story, as u did on another site. I didn't get to read it, but hoping that u may post it on GA too.
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If it's about a road trip and not a courtship, then mentioning love in the description and the gay tag really weren't necessary at all.
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Still loving the story. I don't mean to sound impatient, even though I probably am LOL, but when do we start getting a glimpse into the feelings the narrator is having towards Tom??
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Fantastic chapter! These are the good things that I have always wished for Joey. He has people who care about him, Allen who loves him, and a promising future! I feel bad for Gene, but can understand why he's doing what he's doing. Happy tears for sure!
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Great chapter! Nan and Kaleb shouldn't be let out to roam without a responsible adult along! Lol!! The party was great, and Nan dirty dancing with Wesley was hilarious!! Have a feeling Davis was reading into things way more than Kaleb was. Sucks when that happens.
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Great story so far! I found the sequel once, where u write Gene's story, but didn't get to read it. I hope u plan on publishing it here on GA
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Feel so bad for Gene. Good that he's in a place where he can be watched, and maybe have someone he can talk to. I agree that somebody needs to beat the shit outta Barry! Give him a big dose of his own medicine! Happy that Joey's test came back negative.
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Interesting. Have to say, if my boyfriend had brought a teenager home from a place called "Boy River", he would have been my ex too! Seriously, delete ur old email and start a new one. Not sure that I would trust either Rush or Clay, but I guess everyone is different. Looks to be an interesting journey.
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Great chapter! So glad the boys talked everything out. I just love Patrick and how concerned he is for the baby. He's gonna make a great big brother. I'm positive grandma and grandpa won't be taking Anna's side. I think whatever judge they get should hear what the baby's big brother has to say about the situation. I also think Ian and Adam may need to go house shopping!
