JeffreyL

This was most enjoyable! Thank you for writing and sharing. I look forward to catching up with Jon and Peter in a future story.

I got a little behind and just got caught up. I want to say "You've let us on a merry romp!" I don't know where that's from, but it seemed appropriate. I almost hate to start the last chapter. That means it is over. I know I'll say it again, but I have really enjoyed this story! Thanks.

I've been missing Cory and Efrain. Thanks for the new chapter.

Love these guys, and it Drake doesn't fall in love with Jimmy, he's nuts! Jimmy is definitely a keeper. Thanks.

I appreciate that you shared the lawyer's thought process. I helped me understand. I assume we're off to a civil trial next. I'm not certain what the purpose of that will be. I think I need to go back to the beginning and re-read a bit. Thanks.

This is an interesting start. I hope by the time the story is over Devin is strong enough to support his brother. Thanks.

I look forward to reading more. I hope Samir has some luck finding a safe place to live.

I enjoyed meeting Jamie and his friends. I look forward to reading about his adventures in the states. Thanks.

If I were young, I'd be doing handsprings! This is a big step forward for Kellen, and even bigger for Cid! Thanks.

I haven't commented in awhile, so I would like to say thank you once again. I am still really enjoying this story! I appreciate the love many of the characters share, and the complexity of the relationships.

I am glad to see Vic being able to calm Andy. I am trying to remember if this is Vic's gift. Maybe he will help Andy to sort his feelings. Thanks for this good story.

Except for making me cry, this was an excellent chapter! Well written and moving. Thank you.

I hate to sound ignorant, but is Lee's goal is to discredit the witness to the jury? Does being a Hell's Angel make you a bad witness? Why didn't the other lawyer object, or the judge stop this line of questioning? I can't see that is has any relevance to the trial. Again, I'm sorry I don't understand this better.

I am glad to see they have moved past their initial reaction to each other. I think Eric and Andy will be good for each other. I agree with drsawzall, this is an important topic that deserves time and attention. And it is always good to read about characters that are not werewolves or teens (although I do like both genres). Thanks.

Well, Carlos, you really know how to stir things up and make people take sides. It is a real credit to your writing. Like other people who have commented I was happy to see good things for Silas. As for the contentious discussion, I am in the minority. I always worry when CJ loses his temper. It doesn't happen often, but when it does it is monumental! I was surprised at the time and place Cesar chose to "drop the bomb." I was also surprised he didn't table the discussion after CJ's initial reaction. He is not usually so dense. I wasn't as surprised by CJ's reaction. Reminds me of a run in with Brett a few years ago. I hope when he calms down, he will remember that Cesar is his father, and in my book by that fact alone Cesar deserves respect. They are both smart men, and they love each other, so I assume they will sort things out. Thanks for more good story.

OMG! I hope you have some clever plan to get Peter and Jon out of this mess you've written them into. Who would have guessed Mr. MacFife would be so clever! This is so good! I can't wait for more!

I knew I liked Jimmy! Boy, did he ever handle Preston and Mom! I about died laughing at his comment about expecting Preston to be taller! Great writing! Great dialogue! I can't wait for more! Thanks.

Ooooo! And the plot thickens! You keep building the tension! Your pacing is great for the story, but making me nuts! I don't want the story to end too soon, so I'll keep perched on the edge of my seat chewing my fingernails! I am really enjoying your story. Thanks.

OK Cid, stop overthinking. Kellan is not needy like Billy. You've just found out he is gay. The way Stephanie describes him he sounds hot! And most importantly be has said several times "no pressure." Let the friendship grow and see how things progress. On, and Billy, get over your crush on Cid and let Frank make you happy. He would love to be the center of your world.

Randy and TJ have really different backgrounds. They meet when TJ enrolls in Randy's school, and there is an immediate attraction. Will they be able to overcome their different backgrounds, or will those differences force them apart? Ronyx has written an engaging story about two young men trying to sort their feelings for each other. This story is not all sunshine and roses. There are dark moments, but it is a good story and worth reading.

Over the last couple of days I have binged from the beginning through this chapter. You have created interesting, complex characters, and I feel attached to several. The mythology you have created is also interesting and complex. At the end of several chapters I felt confused. And then when I read the comments from readers and your responses, I just felt stupid; like I had missed important information. I don't have a clue where this story is going, but I really like Torsten, and I intend to keep reading to see where this adventure takes him. I need to go back to the beginning and re-read to see if I can wrap my head around the "politics: of dragon power struggles. Thank you for sharing this story and challenging my mind to follow along.

I am still really enjoying this story! The newest addition to the family will prove to be interesting. I am curious to see how Quinlan reacts as he learns more about his new mates. I assume the mates will be able to deal with Viktor (and Gin), but I'm guessing things may get a bit messy first. Thanks for more good story.

What you did to deserve this life sentence is create an endearing, special guy with an amazing support system! And thank you for that.

What a perfect wedding for these two at this point in their relationship! I am still really enjoying these characters and their story! Thanks.

I knew the Alconas would be fun people to know! I am glad Peter has their friendship and support. If they were real I'd be jealous of Peter. 😉