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    One Like Ryder

    JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in One Like Ryder

    I had a thought that Teddy and Ryder could move into the cemetery house and have Mike for the "sitter." Mike seems to have changed. Teddy's family and friends have issues with Ryder that could complicate if not impede recovery. I was pleasantly surprised when I got to mrbossmant's comment about ending up with Mike! Can't wait to see what's next.
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    The Blood Orchid

    JeffreyL commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in The Blood Orchid

    And if Eli's mate number three is a vampire, is that a bad thing? Love these three guys and their hot, sexy, fun, caring, loving relationship. Can't wait to see how the grow as a trio plus. Thanks.
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    Chapter 4

    JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I liked seeing Robert interact with his classmates, even if some of it was awkward and uncomfortable. Still wondering what (if anything) is up with Mr. Vaselly.
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    Chapter 3

    JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Wow! Being retired from teaching middle school in the states, I am rather dismayed by the school. Of course these students are older than mine were. It will be interesting to see how Robert interacts with other students, if/when he does. Like Deville I wonder (and worry) what is Mr. Vaselly up to?
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I hope Troy's parents can keep Adam safe. Since this is only chapter 2, I imagine there will be more problems for the boys. I can't wait for what comes next! Thanks.
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    What a great short story! I enjoyed sharing Christmas with Alex and Dean. They seem like an interesting couple. I'll be watching for another story about them. Thanks.
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    Chapter 5

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Looks like Randy has his work cut out for him. I think it will take a lot to bring up TJ's sense of self-worth. And how does Carter fit in to this? Hmmm... More please.
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    Chapter 10

    JeffreyL commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Looks like maybe Jackson just got a break. We need more details about Carter and Beth.
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    Well Tim, it's time for a comment. This must be where I left off last time. Nothing has changed. I still love these guys and their story! You do such a great job conveying their feelings, and the conversations you write for them sound natural to me. I've only got a couple of chapters until I am caught up. Get busy writing. 😄
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    Perfect! Although the thank you really should go to you for this story.
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    There are several character I am very fond of here at GA. Patrick and Peter are definitely two of them. Once again I find myself enjoying their budding relationship and how they support and compliment each other. When trying to picture characters I often go online to find a picture to match my imagination and the authors description. I was wondering if you do the same when you are creating a character, or if you list the traits you imagine the character to have without needing a "model."
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    Yes, your reminder does work, and my old brain appreciates it! I've wondered about a flow chart or spread sheet to help keep everyone straight in my mind. 😄
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    OBC Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on quokka's story chapter in OBC Chapter 1

    I will enjoy getting to know Kes as a grownup. I sounds like his dad did a good job raising him and preparing him to take over the business. Dad leaving like this is a bit like throwing him in the deep end of the pool to sink or swim.
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    Chapter 20

    JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Loved the underground city and the hockey game! Eric was smart to encourage (goad?) Peter and Olek into playing. I would imagine a break from being royal would be a good thing. Not to mention connecting with countrymen and having fun! Then being "rested" and ready to get back to work.
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    It is bittersweet for Sam. I'm glad he realized it wouldn't work, hadn't worked for them, and decided to put himself first (finally?). Thanks Tim. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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    Acquainting

    JeffreyL commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Acquainting

    OMG! I think I need a cold shower!! Hot and at the same time lovely to see how they fit together so well. They were definitely meant to be together. Thanks.
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    Mateo

    JeffreyL commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Mateo

    I love these characters already! I can tell it will be a pleasure to read about them. Thanks for sharing your story.
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Chapter two did not disappoint. Robert is a most intriguing character. I feel a sense of foreboding. I am anxious to see what comes next. Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is an interesting beginning. I am not certain where it is going, so I guess I'll need to read on. Thank you.
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    Epilogue

    JeffreyL commented on Simon Iskander's story chapter in Epilogue

    This was a very enjoyable short story. I was pleased to have the epilogue confirm what I suspected. I was not as pleased to see this labelled as complete. I enjoyed reading about Magnus and George, but I have many questions unanswered. Here's hoping you decide to revisit this story at some point and tell us more about these boys. Thank you.
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    I might as well go for a record: this is my third comment on this story, and according to my last comment, this is my fourth time reading ths story! Is there a prize for that? 😉 Clearly I enjoy these characters! I will probably not comment on each chapter until I get to one I haven't read, but thanks for this story that I like a lot!
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    How nice to be back among friends. Even if they are fictional characters. It was nice to touch base with characters, like Martha, that we haven't seen in awhile. I never cease to be amazed how you manage to keep us in touch with so many characters in a few paragraphs! The Thanksgiving section is a perfect example. Thanks as ever for sharing these characters that I (and a lot of others) have come to care about. If I ever get to Florida, I'll buy you a beer and give you a hug.
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    This story is delightful, and the characters are people you'd like to know. I found my comment from a previous read. Since I lost track of this story, I decided it would be wonderful to start again from the beginning! Thanks.
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    Chapter 16

    JeffreyL commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Kohen's action with the shuttle should not have been a surprise, considering the hints we have been given, but it was. More good story! Thanks.
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    Blood Moon

    JeffreyL commented on WolfM's story chapter in Blood Moon

    Once in a blue moon is fine. Just don't stop. Another fine poem. Thank you!
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