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Quite the chapter. Some interesting revelations. I never thought of Salidar and Fasha linked, but explains some things. That could throw a wrench in staying ahead of Salidar. We know Grimm has not seen Veil in many years. Max has Fedain blood. Is he Veil’s son? I thought Styx was Dogo’s son from beginning. Max seeing Styx in Dogo’s features only confirms it. Six degrees of separation. It certainly seems that not much separates The Shade from Pentalus.

If they are going to do the gay is a choice, I’m with @glennish. That will get under my skin. I trust your story writing.

The brother is a spineless coward. The sister-in-law is a psycho bitch who is a manipulative user. The parents are just a disgrace. Jason should have turned his back to the parents. i’m ready for a front row seat to the fireworks! Liquor at the ready. Mama said knock you out!!!

I saw that with the coach. After the discussion with Kevin previously. I felt he might know more about the struggle. Kevin’s mom handled pretty well. Some shock is to be expected. Hopefully after digesting it she can be Kevin’s rock. Paul so needs a taste of his own medicine. The more rancid and bitter... all the more better. Karma has a way of evening the score.

The most important present was family and friends. Everyone deserves a loving family. Rain is a good name for the puppy.

Brett put it all in black and white. However, he contributed to the mess. They lack true communication. I think Billy should have a nice long visit with grandma. That’s when things started spiraling. Billy should go to prom... Do something spectacular that puts Brett first.

It’s a good sign when Ryder is planning his future. He righted another wrong with Brandon. He was careful to include Oliver. Letting him know he’s part of everything. I see it now... Once they start, no slowing Oli. That boy has energy and genius to burn.

Those four boys need to experience what Troy had to experience. Along with Det. Dickwad. There’s some small justice in jail. Can you say prison biatch? Theres two ways to prove, depending on Troy’s phone setup. If phone had cloud turned on. Also a sweep of phone. Nothing is truly deleted. There’s just layers of encryption overwriting data. The lady cop is a witness. They can haul back in the boy who Troy bit. He might still have scrapes on his pecker.

Cid was right. He told Billy... (I’m not what you need). Frank and Billy fit better. Birds of a feather...

Great critique Sam. I loved this short. While you wish for more with this duo, it’s the friendship that stood out. Dodger did a great job with character development.

Functionality wise they aren’t much different. The older is still getting updates. A personal opinion, the older has a better menu layout.

The best chapter so far. It shows how much they’ve grown. The most honest conversation to date. The beginning shows nothing could take the place of Teddy. Stuff is just stuff. Failure and mistakes are life’s greatest teacher.

Grembel is something to be feared. I respect Salidar more. He at least isn’t a pretender. There seems to be a few pretenders at the moment. Veil seems to hold much faith in Styx. I think there’s more to that acknowledgement. Could that be birthright and destiny? I don’t necessarily see Veil as a fraud. She just doesn’t correct impressions of her. It seems her beauty blinds many things. Sometimes wisdom can be just as powerful as magic. There’s insight in having hindsight. I feel precaution is in order going forward. There’s too many questions in who can be trusted.

I didn’t see you post this. This one is an interesting and unique character study. I did enjoy this one.

Shael is definitely Victor’s type. After centuries of life. I’m sure Victor is up for a little hard to get. The end result promises sweet reward, or umm release. *wink*

Quite a few revelations. Looking forward to more. Wondering if Maribel having a part vamp mate is just coincidence.

A beautiful ending is all that needs to be said.

This is great Myr. I know where to look, but helps new authors and visitors. Simplified is nice. Good luck this weekend.

Kurt is in prison. Kellen and Cid are shackin up... That’s progress. Love rockets can now blast! There’s no secrets. ❤️🎇

Good chapter. A few things I’d like to add. A sub isn’t controlled, they are guided by their Sir. Control makes it sound like a sub has no say. Punishment is a term some Doms and subs find offensive. Lesson or correction is often used. You used physical cues at dinner, I like that you showed that. I don’t like crowds. My Sir places his hand on my knee or thigh to calm me. I appreciate that you started dialogue on expectation. This is important for both partners. The sub learns what’s expected. A Dom learns the willingness and limits of their sub. Nothing should be left unsaid. This is where the trust is built. Just so people understand, using the birch is a choice. Each D/s relationship is different. Bondage, whips, anything else is personal choices. Many couples don’t use those things.

There’s a lot of metal in our home. D/s lifestyle.

Kukries... boys and their toys. Very sexy! 😉

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful moment Sir. I know that collar is worn with overwhelming pride and honor.

Very well done A. A departure from your normal style. You’re definitely maturing in your writing style. Good job! xo

I read a story.