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Cool story Mac... I'm glad you found inspiration. I know I feel more fulfilled when inspired. The moment with the jacket was meant to be. I know that sounds hokie... However, I do think the universe, people, moments are all connected.

What? No editing or grammar lesson today!

I'm getting Elements of Blade and Underworld...

Another good chapter. I'm happy that Gabe didn't do the background check without coming clean... You can't have a good relationship without trust and communication. I love the introduction of Sam. A character from another favorite story of mine... Very clever!!

Well that's one way to ruin a good wedding... All Devon's fault too. Why didn't he say anything when he noticed staff out of place. It didn't surprise me when he said he wanted to be turned by Brett.

Well Carlos, This was an emotional chapter for me. I'm happy that you included the quilt. I've seen it many times in NY. Before going blind. I have a few connections to the quilt, so nice to see it remembered. Thank you for ending Thiago's ridiculous relationship with that girl. He deserves so much better. Nice to see him block the racist bitch. Georgetown is where CJ belongs. He will be their for Ritchie. No long distance relationship is a plus for him and Aussie. Great job my friend!

Beautifully said... Right on point!

OMG! Thank you for not using the blade. I am happy to see Bailey get a different prospective of Declan. Hearing different conversations allowed him to see what actually happened. I hope that Declan finds the courage to stand up to Chris. I think it helps when other guys point out him being wrong. Not to mention, its giving the whole team a bad reputation. Which not all of them deserve.

If Liam doesn't want Marty... I'll take him!

Great Job Tim! As always, I look forward to your creations of the heart... I really like Tanka and Inside these merged boxes.

I am absolutely in love with Adrian. Its so sad seeing himself deny his feelings. All just to try and please his worthless father. Watching the relationship between Corey and Adrian is beautiful. The simple gestures... The simple kisses and touching. The way that Corey is building up Adrian, which I'm not even sure he realizes. Normally I wouldn't want people interfering in disputes. I'm very happy that Brett's mother did. She did it in a way that didn't take sides. She showed her love for both boys. She also showed Corey his being gay is accepted. I just hope that Corey doesn't hold on to her saying Brett doesn't know what he wants... I love the show that Corey gave Charlie. Her reference to what a waste of a good dick. By him being a catcher. Just hilarious.

I am happy to see Liam get into school... Its a good distraction to keep him focused. More importantly, something to do for himself. It is very clear that Liam has good friends. They each seen to give their influence without harping. Allowing Liam to make his own decisions... Good or bad. The talk Liam had with Bryce was pleasant to see. Liam seems to really be analyzing his relationship with Alec going forward. Its a positive thing. Knowing he knows he deserves to be treated better. Alec will have to prove his commitment. Hopefully this chapter signifies good positive changes for Liam going forward. Its nice to see him get out of a "Stuck" moment in life.

You described the southern wedding absolutely beautifully. The only thing I reject are the mint julips... I've never enjoyed them. The vows were simple and sweet.

I agree! However, I think Carter would have his father squash him.

Thx... I can't help but agree with you. I've missed seeing your smart comments and observations lately.

He also directed a 2004 remake of "The Manchurian Candidate. "a movie with Meryl Streep and Denzel Washington. A movie that reminds me of the recent presidential campaign.

Thanks for another enjoyable installment of Parker and Matt.. Can never get enough of Parker. The boy is a riot!

A great first chapter. Looking forward to seeing if Chris can redeem himself. Its a positive thing that he can see where things started going wrong for him. I look forward to the new story angle. You did a very good job; giving the reader a reason to sympathize with Chris's actions.

These two men couldn't be anymore different. A good thing Joel kept a level head. They certainly do a good bad cop, good cop routine. However, it wouldn't have been a good outcome if Lucas handled it alone. Hopefully Tommy can get through this with the guys help!

You captured this confusing and shocking moment extremely well. Just dealing with a similar situation 2 years ago. Put me in that moment. Your numb and your mind is going in a thousand different directions...

I continue to love this little tale. Its quirky, fun and sweet. Liam is determined to pull Seth out of his little box. Its also very clear that the protective wall is coming down around Seth.

I am heartbroken for Riley. While I don't think a visit with his natural father would have been productive. I do realize it would have given Riley closure. Maybe a little understanding of his ancestry. The talk with Walter was powerful. While his biological father doesn't acknowledge Riley. Walter certainly does... To tell David about Riley's accomplishments and attributes. Walter made it very clear, what David is missing. While their may be bumps in the road ahead. Riley will be just fine. He has a very supportive family to build him up. Carter just amazes me. He is wise beyond his years. An extremely loyal, giving and loving individual. He can give Riley what he needs... Not money, a partner who understands him and will stand by his side. Nothing more important than that!

I'm sure your children also cherish the moments with you!

Another week of beautiful words from the heart. I really like 17 and 20. 17 really hits home with someone I'm dealing with right now. I hope your writing brings strength and peace. It brought me reflection and acceptance.

Ok!.... There's one thing confusing me. I know they were able to keep Devon from being turned. They cycled his blood a few times. Does this mean he will still have a normal life cycle. I love the blood sucking lawyer reference. I have read 3 stories on here this week with main character's being billionaires. Now I'm sure I'm reading gay FICTION! LOL!