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    Chapter 36

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 36

    Another Escorial dinner. How many scenes there have we read? And yet each one comes out as unique. This was a great 5***** chapter to wake up to at 08.00 CET. Nice work mr Mark. 👌👌👌👌👌
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    Ace reaction to the prompt. Reading this before turning off the light wasn’t a good idea 😱😱😱
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    An amazing experience for Trevor sailing around the world to escape and await the future. The writer’s skill is first class and so much sexual tension is held in for so long. a fabulous read.
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    Prologue

    Gary L commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Prologue

    Me too. Intriguing 🤨
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    It’s a disgrace. A ghastly A road roars past with the traffic from the main southern link. Projected tunnels rejected. But despite that, to be there and stroll around these incredible stones is transforming. How have they survived?
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    Another great chp and, yes, the green-eyed thing is called a monster for a reason. I’m a bit nervous 😬
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    Nor did your readers!!! ❤️
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    To be honest, Carlos, I was a bit unsure of a return to CJ. Reading about Richie becoming Ritch had been such a great story. Nevertheless, as a complete story CDMX is another 5***** read. I totally agree with what my fellow Mancunian says. Your writing is so evocative and the tale was full of action and emotions. Has escrito una historia increíble, don Carlos. ¡Muy bien!
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    Great talent, I enjoyed his story v much. Now finding out he’s a youngster I’m even more impressed. Well done, sir!
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    This is a haunting read. It’s not a genre I would normally go for but it is a very well written piece based on a clever premise. 👍
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    Thank you Cia. I’ve spent the holiday (St John the Baptist Day in Spain) locked inside hiding from a heatwave and awful hot wind. This claustrophobic setting here seems perfect for reading this beautiful story with so much claustrophobic feeling needing to escape and see the light. this person is one great writer.
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    Just about to start it! Thanks for the recommendation. This guy could seriously write.
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    This is not an easy read, far from it. Not only because of the events narrated, but, far more, for the exploration of Scott’s feelings as he wrestles with what he wants from, and can truthfully offer, in two complex relationships. this is one of the best pieces of writing I have read in a long time. WOW
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    Chapter 18

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 18

    4 comments in regards10 yrs. Su h a shame. This is beautiful writing.
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    Chapter 17

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Hopefully. I’m taking a break to recover.
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    Chapter 14

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 14

    These words sum up my feelings. 🤗🤗
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    Chapter 10

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 10

    The emotional intensity is communicated through deceptively simple, taut language. Seriously well-written
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    So much is packed into 2,000 words. This is a jewel. What will his mom say…….? A great read.
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    Chapter 4

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 4

    4 yrs later …. Your comments from 2018 are as insightful now as then. This is really good, creative writing. Bravo
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    Chapter 3

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Beautifully written
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    Chapter 1

    Gary L commented on Duncan Ryder's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I stuck it out for two years raking up huge phone bills and flights London to Valencia… then my amazing mother told me to give up everything and ship out. Been in Spain 19 yrs. my lesson, unless it’s a short-term absence, then decisions/risks have to be taken. story is standing the test of time.
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    Yes he should have, but would we? I fear I’d just get in a deeper mess. Great résumé of another chp that hits all the bases. 🤗
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    As someone who has had a number of major attacks I can relate to this. Waiting for a tube train, crossing a road. Yes it’s in the mind but try convincing yourself you don’t like your favourite food and see the mind games that can start. great-looking story mr M. 🤗🤗🤗
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    Chapter 61

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 61

    “wide-eyed hero worship” just about sums up my feelings…..
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    Chapter 60

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 60

    How did I miss this chp? My security system alerts me to any movement from my favorite author but something went wrong, and there will be consequences should this happen again…. But since it was my error I will be merciful… to myself. great chp, mr A
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