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Oh Jeez another collapse.The situation from the previous lifeline forced Davey to go back in time again but apparently It was risky to his health to do so.I know he said he's going to lose these memories but I don't see that happening for one reason where the hell does this story go if he doesn't remember anything ?

Tristan did break the window but Mrs. Graves IS a dictator scary thing is I've had principals that were every bit as arrogant as her. I was going to write Tristan being home schooled means he won't see the hot twins but then.... Yeah I got Hayley Mills right away and I didn't think it was an accident but you would be surprised how many people would not know that.I read a Geron Kees story the other day and he referenced George Carlin and some didn't know who he was I really need the bonus points for Hayley Mills I don't want to fail the story.Oh Darn now all the readers can copy off of me

So if Caleb manages to get 23 and maybe 18 out will they still be allies or will they be foes?

Before I start there's a good chance I didn't comprehend this right so if I got anything wrong I'm sure somebody here will tell me.As far as I can tell he got in this timeline in 1976 the other timeline he arrived in which is 1981 or thereabouts is still going to happen and when it does his memories of what happened will be erased and it sounds like that what caused these headaches and coma.So I guess he wrote his later self a letter explaining what went on before in addition to the letters to Reagan and Sean etc. If that's what it is I would like to know how he figured it out as far as I know this hasn't been discussed before with Sean or anybody or maybe I don't remember it being discussed Papa read the letters and figured it out.They mention that Sean is going to arrive like he did before if I understand it right when that happens the current Sean will in a way will be dead all those memories that happened with Sean only Davey will remember.It will be like losing a friend who going to be replaced by basically the same person with the same DNA but it won't be the same person that he was friends with since second grade.Speaking of headaches trying to figure this out is giving me a headache LOL.Let me know if I got something wrong

How does a dumbass like Pete do his job well?I hope Dave fires Pete. Speaking of dumbass about Uncle 5% between the previous chapter and this chapter I thought of something.It hasn't been said one way or another if Bobby is gay there was no mention of him having a GF.IF Bobby is gay maybe he told his Uncle that time he spent two weeks with him and maybe there was an unexpected response to that.This would imply a lot of possible bad stuff so I hope I'm wrong.

Excellent chapter meeting his friends went well.But Nigel did indeed commit a faux pas I personally seen that one play out a few times never ask that question to someone you don't know. I do worry about Ethan and his losing control.The obvious thing would be if he perceives somebody threatening Jonathan watch out. BTW I live in San Diego and we have a place called Kensington market and it sounds like the same kind area you were describing.Speaking of California Reyna drives like she's from California only Californians drive like that in perfect weather let alone freezing weather. So are we going to meet Sophie next chapter or is that still a ways off?

Only 9,000+ words this time? You're lagging on us LOL. Trent was right about one thing when he said to Kayden"You need to get out and experience life,Kayden"But I don't think this should have been part of it.Trent is impulsive and this shows that there is no doubt he going to fool around on Kayden and perhaps a threesome with a girl despite Kayden protesting. I could see Kayden having enough and not wanting anything to do with Trent anymore.If that happens I could see Trent actually missing Kayden under these circumstances maybe Trent will agree to change.Maybe wishful thinking

I was thinking the same thing @jaysalmn was thinking luckily that didn't happen.There has to be some info we don't know about yet otherwise Uncle5% and Bobby's Mom actions don't make sense.I'm thinking along the lines maybe Bobby is going to inherit something but really I have no idea.

Your response reminds me of something I heard that in WWI a British solider had a young Hitler in his sights but didn't take the shot.My question is how did they know that was Hitler and not some random solider?

Well he met his past and most likely future friends Brandon sure won't forget him giving up a three run homer.I didn't expect Davey to meet Reagan until 1980 but I guess you can't meet him too soon.His Mom having a big role in the campaign will probably change the direction compared to her previous lifelines Those headaches are disturbing.Were they cause by the time travel?It could also be from living 3 lifetimes of big time stress I mean being directly involved in two different WW111,losing his mom and sister prematurely all three times having to leave your husband of almost 20+ years to go back in time only to find it wasn't the same and when they finally start to reconnect he pretty much dies in arms all those things could have taken a toll.I hope 1976 medicine and tech will figure out what to do.

Cliffhanger in mid battle nicely done.This experience should stress out Charlie enough to bring out whatever power he has

There has been no mention that Bobby actually saw the rejection letters.His Mom wants him to go to a college close to Uncle5%.If there is a rejection letter this time that would raise a red flag.But for the record I'm not saying that will happen.

The Great Menace give new meaning to the expression "A dark cloud following him".So whats next?Will we find out more about what the Armenti is doing these days or light years I should say.Nyf said there may be other Great menaces out there in other places so that would mean the Armenti would be having their hands full dealing with them.Whatever direction you go I'll be looking forward to.Thank you

I wonder what Matt proposed to Noah to make a scholarship possible. If this turns out to be a bone of contention with Bobby's family then I would say Mark has far too much influence on things

When I saw jealousy in the chapter title I was expecting the worse but its was only Aidan,As long as Seamus and Matt get him to stop before he has his first BF or GF then it's good. Does that drink really exist?I have to admit it didn't sound good. Great chapter so glad Brad is a big part of things I gotta think somebody came up with Bradthedad before he did.

At the moment Davey's Mom is saying nothing about the money but we know from the previous timeline that she can't keep her big mouth shut so it will just have to slip that Dad will find out about the money which means Davey will have to tell the timeline story again and who know what chain of events that will bring. When Dad mentioned about wanting to play little league and Davey said he wanted to Dad then said he will sign him up in the Modesto little league and you know what that means he will meet Brian,Brandon and Trevor as an opponent they will still go to different elementary schools but when they reunite in Middle school(junior high?)they will be somewhat familiar with Davey I just noticed something else scary about going back to 1976 Davey is exposed to the 70's fashion. Bell bottoms ugh. It's also interesting to note that Davey already has a weight set and it looks like Sean is going to join him on that.Sean will still have a short stature but if he's working out on weights with Davey he may get pretty buff and it will be less likely that he will be bullied.

Well one thing you can say you can't do any better then Dale's parents

I can't help but think G wanted this to fail for whatever reason.To not have Tyler chipped is a vary sloppy rookie mistake one I don't think G makes. But say all this is on the up and up.They say they can't keep Tyler around because he was....too good?What am I missing? We know Zeke is going to find Tyler because there would be no story otherwise LOL. When he does find him I would consider he and Tyler going as far away from G and that place as possible

Leanne has no idea what's waiting for her.Leanne's save the world comment does she really believe that?Is she evil or misguided or good?

Uncle Mark is really a piece of work 5% interest?Geez.And what up with uncle Mark telling Bobby's parents about him having a bottle of beer?He should get that giant stick out of his....Well you know what I mean. I get the feeling Bobby will be going to college in California.Since his Mom sides with Uncle Mark I wonder if she withheld info about Bobby getting a scholarship.Just spec on my part

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After the last two chapters was 2000+ words this one was almost 7000 words so I knew a lot of stuff was going to happen.Great cliffhanger that cloud sounds really scary Mike,Derry and Cally have a lot of guts. When Mike is on earth he must read a lot of your science fiction stories how else could he come up with that story when the Schrikken doubted he was an Armenti.Has Mike ever left a chapter comment? Now time for one of my weird observations.The names of the Schrikken's was Ssistraa,Ssalitand Ssraik.Then he referred Their Commander or leader as Ssiam Ssali. With all these names that begin with Ss shouldn't this race be called the Sschrikken?......OK I can feel all your eyeballs rolling

Be curious to find out the details about why Mark and Bobby didn't get along

Perfect ChapterI don't really want to ruin it by talking about the other stuff but I have to. Zoltan playing the "after everything we've done for you" card to Gus.I guess he thinks Gus is obligated for life to them.Well I'm sure they exploited Gus enough to where they got their investment back god knows how many times over.I wonder if they lied to Helene and told her that Gus was interested in her. "Gustavo's mine"🙄 BTW if Zoltan wants to have Rick arrested for stalking wouldn't Marta have to be charged as an accessory think about that Zoltan. I have mixed feelings Im so glad Rick and Gus are together but that means the story almost over😢.Maybe you can use your creative writing and add a extra chapter where Heinrich, Rita, Willy and Zoltan end up on a deserted island stuck with each other.One can wish

Papa knows something is up he doesn't know the details but he knows it's something unusual.Both Papa and Steve didn't even flinch when Davey asked to invest money in these companies some of which hasn't even gone public yet how can a eight year old know that?Both Papa and the lawyer Steve copied Davey's investment plan.Both of them believe that Davey knows what's going to happen what did Papa say to Steve to convince him?I can't see how Papa somewhere down the line is not going to ask Davey to come clean and tell him how he knows all this. In this lifeline he meets Sean as a second grader and Sean will get none of that bullying that he got in past lifelines.Given these circumstances Davey and Sean might be best friends. Davey's optimistic that this time things will go well but he better then anyone should know that even the most minor change can make things go haywire.One thing he can do is find a way to make sure his cousin Chris neighbor gets busted before Chris gets molested