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I guess I already commented on this because my comment is still there in chapter 8 .Honestly I didn't notice anything off I wonder what that says about me LOL

Good to know I remember that now .I still don't get why they think Sage is a problem they can still find a mate for Adam it sounds like they are like Vulcans unemotional do they expect Adam to stay with this mate?

Sounds like a good first step.Joey actually spoke to us when said "right readers" LOL Regardless of being on probation Olly SHOULD get that 800 pound commission .He made some interesting points about Joey being abusive James is back at Dean's house? Not good. I think the truth must come out there.

So this one is from Alex POV.I'm not sure how to read Chris's reaction The opening scene where it's just before performing a gig makes me wonder did something happen with Alex and Owen

I love that Roger is with Jon. One thing different about Roger as compared to your previous characters is the others characters interacted with the boys whether as a teacher or employer etc.Here he only says the boys that implies he lets Jon do all the dealings with them.Jon having to go back home may be a opportunity to fill the void with the boys will feel while Jon is away

I would lose all respect for the Puritans if they killed Sage under these circumstances. The reasoning for "terminating" the 67 people isn't valid first off if someone lets the authorities know of their existence the authorities would cover it up and deny it and if it did leak out the majority of people will react yeah right and disregard it. Interesting to find out Adam has a brother.The mere fact the family is in the story tells me Adam is going to end up back on Earth.Although the parents seem to be a lost cause

I found Relshek concern about Sage's influence on Adam disturbing.He said something about finding a mate for Adam are they going to do this the old fashioned way? Surely that isn't necessary if we can do it artificially on Earth then they could do it also being more advanced than Earth. The only reason is they would be concerned about Sage is the gay issue.That would be disappointing

I'm guessing there will be a little more resistance from Joey about getting help but with Roman's insistence and Jack staying away until he does I think Joey eventually will I just don't know how many chapters it's going to take. I'm curious why Joey called Toby is Dean attending college out of town? Or did something happen there also?

So JJ can make these brilliant designs for Apllazon but he can't drive a car worth s---. I'm sure JJ is going to take note about what happened to Henry and Darren the midwest still has a lot back assward people.

Joey's been jumping to conclusions for as long as we been reading the stories it finally bit him in the A__. And the alcohol certainly added fuel to the fire. if this had been an going on consistently over the last two years then maybe one thing to consider is getting counseling both by himself and with Jack . I don't see this as insurmountable but Jack taking his clothes with him is a bad sign.Does Jack think Joey is acting too much like Jack's father maybe with the alcohol? One small ironic point Roman doesn't let Orca move in because it's the last thing he can control this after calling Joey a control freak just saying

My only reaction is WOW!! But we know it happens a lot so now on the read the details in the first chapter

I missed the notification I wonder if others did also. So how long did you follow Ben and Josh around until you had enough for a new chapter

How about a small gym and sauna to go with the pool? Look at me I'm acting like I'm his business partner LOL

I was sort of kidding when Orca and Roman first met when I said Roman wasn't all that much older then Orca but it turned out I was right I better screen save this shot to remind myself sometimes I do guess right.Roman and Orca sounds like an interesting couple they would be a good story in their own right. Thank you awesome story looking forward for the next one

Is there a huge difference between running a dance club vs running a pub?Obviously a bigger staff but I hope its not an apple and oranges type of thing.But unlike me Sandra is smart in business. I have to admit I'm as bad as Sarah I thought Roman had a STD also. So Orca doesn't seem to think it would be awkward to visit after what happened.I bet he assumed Joey said nothing about it to Jack. Almost forgot to mention adopting Jack that's awesome

If there is a different story then the one Adam was told then why?You only do that if there is something to hide

The fact that Adam fought so hard to save Sage shows what a good soul he is despite the way Sage was treating him. All this talk from Christian putting down warp speed it sounds like these Puritans would think Star Wars and Star Trek would be lame something sad about that. All those Earth recipes the Puritans researched for Adam and now Sage to eat as long as they have pizza then it's all good if they don't then they FAILED

Well that was a hell of a question to end the chapter on. It's obvious why he left out a lot of his story and made up some things but some of those made up things can be checked out.Still considering he was making it up on the fly his story wasn't half bad

That incident Joey had with the teacher so typical of some teachers not all they never catch a bully but they hassle you about your shirt tail being out and this twit is so thin skinned he gives Joey detention for pointing that out I guess the truth hurts. What I'm not clear about is did Jack know Anthony was 21 the whole time?Jack said that line about Anthony saying when he turns 16 he'll find Jack so was Anthony lying about his age? The fact that the texts ,e-mails and Skypes stopped abruptly maybe Anthony did die. Maybe I'm not as good as Joey but I would not have said anything to Jack about what ALMOST happened with Orca at least not right away

Pretty much the only difference between Matt and Charles situation is Charles had support from a loving Aunt while Matt had nothing and hence you see the results.After hearing how Charles has moved on and after Charles told Matt about Ricky going to college in California I bet Matt never felt more lonely at any time is his life😢.I was very disturbed to read the last line of the chapter when Matt left with Sergeant Lattimore about him leading him to his final destination. Matt's emotions are in a horrible place right now. Lattimore seems to be a police officer doing his job in good faith unlike in other GA stories where law enforcement officers are morons.Maybe somebody can help me/us with this Lattimore wants to investigate the molestation allegations but the Pastor is dead so really all that is left for the victim is a civil suit would the police still investigate if the accused is dead? One more thing to consider the Pastor didn't have Matt long enough to molest him but before he showed up at the Pastor's place the Pastor had Charles alone for awhile so you have to wonder if he molested Charles.If that did happen I'm betting Charles won't want to talk about it now that everything is good for him.This story is breaking my heart but I'm loving it

When. The owner of thr cafe said he had an apartment on the second floor that sounded familiar was he a character from a previous story? Oops I double posted this only seems to happen when I post on my smartphone .Sorry

I'm glad Jack got past what Joey and Roman did relatively easy. I hope when Roman went into Jack's parents room that he got a few pictures of Jack's mom preferably ones with just Jack and and his mom. This may be nothing or it may be huge but that card that Joey saw in Jack's room from what looks to be from his ex the mere fact Jack still has that card implies that this Anthony guy meant a lot to Jack. Unless it turns out Anthony died short of that there's a potential that it could be a problem and in this case it wouldn't insecure jealousy on Joey's part if he thought that it would be valid. What if Anthony finds Jack?

When. The owner of thr cafe said he had an apartment on the second floor that sounded familiar was he a character from a previous story?

Wow they sure how to throw a party.I guess I'm like the kids a burger off the grill any time over that fancy shancy stuff

It sounds classic Neil and West don't like each other now but by the end of the story they'll be together I'li withhold that prediction for now but if that happened they'll be plenty of reactions from both families sort of like a gay West Side Story BTW I didn't realize my comment from last chapter didn't end up getting posted I messed up.If I remember right I was going to say Tuct Side Satans